Cultivation: Starting as a Slave

The score of 8.4 Is low for Tomato. I have been reading online articles for more than ten years, from piracy to Qidian Fantasy Sword to Tomato. The author of this book has an excellent grasp of the rhythm of the plot. How can I summarize the rhythm of a book? It means the fluency of reading. For example, a copy does not seem boring and creates a sense of escape. A small copy can easily have more than ten or twenty chapters and is uninteresting. If you think about it, it will be boring to read. Most of the books on Tomato have this problem. You can tell that this author is a veteran. The writing is moderately playful and humorous. It occasionally makes people smile when reading. It is much better than those mindless and silly novels. This degree of control is indeed very stable. It is one of the few novels in Tomato that I can read and keep reading to the latest chapter. Overall, this is an excellent work that is written fluently and does not procrastinate. It's a pity that I have to change my review. I can see that the author is under a lot of pressure to write two books, and I can understand that the poor performance of another book is not a reason to praise this book. A complete story is better than an unfinished story, even if what you wrote is rubbish. You can learn about AI ghostwriting. You tell it the plot you want, who will appear in this chapter, and what purpose they will achieve. Finally, you can modify it in your own language. This will improve your efficiency a lot. Now I have to lower my rating again. I have written 1,600 chapters and there is no more time to write. I have begun to criticize the current situation. There are still people who are criticizing me. Do you want to take a look at what you are writing? If you continue to drink water, if it is not finished, you will end up not knowing what to do.

Generally speaking, as a web article, its shortcomings are not hidden, it is a very novel method, the writing style is average, but it is innocuous. The male protagonist feels more and more like an ancient person but still retains a little bit. Modern Chinese people have a conscience, although there is not much, but they do not dislike such a character. I also hope that the author has strong perseverance and perseverance like the male protagonist, just like practicing, coding day and night, it is not enough. From yesterday to today, I saw this moment of the July 30th update in one breath. At the same time, I also hope that the author, like the male protagonist, will become stronger when encountering strength. It would also be nice to be more detailed about the governance of the country and the farming infrastructure.

Tomato is a rare good article. I feel that the author is quite thoughtful and in-depth, and has well-planned logic and plot, as well as foreshadowing and twists. The rhythm is also well written. The author has quite a historical background, and the classical Chinese history books at the end of each life are very ironic. I also have an understanding of various human beings and human nature, and the supporting characters, villains, enemies, and friends have also changed, and nothing remains the same. The battles are written in detail, and are accompanied by wits and attacks. The brain that I had thrown away after reading too many white articles finally came back. The spirit world setting is interesting because all my enemies end up being my slaves. The protagonist has been reincarnated as a woman, so why doesn't it count as a succubus? Interesting Hope there is no heroine I'm very disappointed. As for Chu Fengli's plot, her plot from beginning to end is too classic. It's the kind of routine plot that has been used for more than ten years. I have been persuaded to quit, and that's the end of it. And the next 600 chapters are all about the matryoshka doll plot.

I have read one out of ten of them so far. The author's writing style is sophisticated, not that sharp, but the narrative is eloquent and the writing is smooth. It can be regarded as fine grain, but I don't know why the score is not so high.

The writing is good, the setting is quite interesting, and the early stages are quite interesting. However, there will be a problem with the plug-in with this setting. If the reincarnation is too frequent, it will appear to be too warehousing, and if the reincarnation is too slow, it will appear to be very procrastinating and reduce the strength. The beginning is handled well, because there are many reincarnations of slaves, so the pace is fast. It has a bit of a refreshing feel to it, but once the early stages are over, the pace slows down immediately. Not only is the reincarnation slow, but the main character's focus is not on cultivation, and a part of it is devoted to the struggle for hegemony. Although it is said to be a crushing struggle for hegemony, the teacher said that it did not make the writing feel exciting. Instead, it seemed very draggy due to the long introduction, national geographical background, etc.

It's pretty rigorous, and there isn't much that I can't stand or complain about. The longer I watch it, the uglier it gets, and I don't know why the protagonist lives.

It's really super, super, really good to watch. The early stage is very interesting, and the battle interludes in the middle stage are relatively boring. In the later stage, the more you watch, the more interested you become. To be honest, I have been reading novels for a long time and have never encountered such a situation where I can finish the novel overnight and finish it completely in a week. It's about to end and I feel so sad to let go.

It's pretty good, there are no surprises, and some of the early stages of reincarnation are appropriately accelerated and skipped repeated steps. Although the appearance of Taoist may have guessed the follow-up plot of the protagonist, but it is still very interesting and worth looking forward to. Maybe the whole big life and even Taoist will be scrapped as the readers' imagination and just continue for another 1000 chapters 🤭 🤭

The author's writing style is extremely delicate and well-founded. The plot has ups and downs. The protagonist's character changes like Fang Laomo and becomes decisive in killing. The setting is novel and a rare good book.

The writing is very good, there are few reincarnation stories, and the previous description and the transition of each life are also quite good, which is different from the traditional ones, especially after the prisoner immortal locked up in Zhongzhou, it reached a new level. I wrote many reincarnation stories that I dare not write, but I wrote this after more than one million words, (not just reincarnation stories) , so most novels with possible plots in this direction dare not write this) The author is very courageous. Although his writing style and plot control are a bit immature in that aspect, he rarely writes this in the middle period, and I wrote a lot more comments in the later part of this. There are still many people who like this kind of fun.