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"The lot has been drawn, the lot has been drawn, and you will succeed in every attempt." A fairy-like old man walked around the street holding a flagpole, shouting loudly from time to time. He glanced around at the people coming and going. Suddenly, a young man with fine features came into the old man's field of vision. He saw the old man's footsteps approaching the young man. The young man was sitting at the square table at the entrance of the steamed bun shop, ignoring his surroundings, immersed in experiencing the deliciousness of the steamed buns. Suddenly, a skinny hand pinched the young man's hand. The young boy was startled, and the meat bun that he had just taken a bite fell to the ground. It rolled around a few times, and was covered with dust. Then he was kicked away by a passerby. The young man said in surprise: "Ah! My bun!" Yixin shook off the hand that was pinching him, and wanted to rush out to pick up the bun. When he was about to grab the bun, he accidentally got crushed by someone's foot, and now he couldn't eat it. The young man was jealous and angry, so he went to the crazy old man to reason with me and asked him to compensate me for the big, round buns. Following the boy's line of sight, he saw that the old man was actually eating the last bun on the table. The boy suddenly became angry and ran over, pointed at the old man with his finger, and shouted: "Smelly old man! That's for my sister! You... Please give it back to me." The old man patted his belly gently and burped slowly. The young man was furious, picked up the broom beside him and hit the old man on the head, but was stopped by the waiter in the store. "This young guest has a small business. Don't get angry and disturb the customers of the shop. We will pay you for your buns." The waiter apologized, but still underestimated something on the way to Baozi. But looking at the old man, he was calm and relaxed, closing his eyes to rest. The young man turned around and looked for another table. Looking around, there were too many people in this shop. Only a badly broken table in the distance was unoccupied. The young man leaned towards him, but to his surprise, the old man occupied it first. The young man walked back, but the old man was still the same. After several attempts, the young man took the buns and left. On the way home, the old man followed closely. The young man stopped and said calmly: "Old man, please tell me if you have anything to do and don't play tricks on this junior." "Boy, I'm amazed at your bones, your kind heart, your uniqueness, your talent, and your talent..." "Stop it, stop it, old man, please stop beating around the bush and just tell the truth." The old man paused and said, "I have something to ask for. I have selected you from the vast crowd. You must help me complete it." The young man's eyelids twitched and he thought to himself, I wonder how many people this old man has harmed. Then he said: "Say it." "I have a good book here and I hope the young man will promote it." Just as he was talking, the old man took out a book and called "Mortals Cultivation to Immortality: Han Jian's Transfer" The young man took it, opened it, looked at it, and said, "This is too precious. I'm afraid this younger generation won't be able to bear it." The old man patted the young man on the shoulder and said slowly: "Meeting is fate, let's watch it together!" Small theater Finished

After reading it, overall it's pretty good. The author's writing is good, but the plot structure didn't appeal to me when I was reading it. Maybe it's because of the different writing methods, so I couldn't watch it for a long time or I'd get bored!

The first volume is too "Mortal", the Mortal style is not a copycat of "Mortals". The rest is good, I have my own ideas for some ideas, keep up the good work! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's a good book. The author describes the characters with clear characters and vivid expressions. The characters from all walks of life are full of character. The plot of the novel is so intricate that it makes people read it endlessly. The protagonist goes from ordinary to ruthless and cautious. As he wanders around the world of cultivation and experiences more and more Eryuwu deceives and kills decisively, the character of the protagonist becomes more and more likable. Come on, author [Like] [Like]

I have read the previous chapters, and the plot is quite reasonable so far, with no obvious flaws. This is the right book. If you have a golden finger, you should concentrate on refining elixirs and cultivating immortality, unlike some fake books that use golden fingers to cause trouble everywhere and look for opportunities. I hope the author will continue to work hard to maintain stable combat power and stable prices.

It's a bit like Han Li's and has a strong sense of immersion, but I hope I have my own ideas. The fighting scenes are well written.

It's pretty good for now.

So far, there are no shortcomings, but there is nothing amazing about it either.

I never get tired of reading a good book, and I keep reading it. Friends who are good friends, why don't you come back again? Super beautiful, pure mortal cultivating immortal style, very similar to mortals, character details are portrayed step by step

It's okay. I'll watch a lot of Mortal videos on Tomato, and I can usually watch them without a heroine.

Pretty thoughtful work

Good books are worth reading.

Very beautiful and worth recommending!

Well written, keep up the good work.

A nice book

It looks great, I hope you will continue to work hard

The plot is well set and relaxed. There is killing but not bloody.

It's pretty good to watch, but the pace is a bit too slow [face covering], and it suppresses the protagonist a bit harshly

The plot is vivid, the IQ is online, and the wording is very good. There are no modern words. This is my favorite book about cultivating immortals. Tomato will recommend this kind of book to me in the future.