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Nice! The author's writing style is still so good. This kind of daily life has also written its own main line. The characters are very cute. I really like the sinister senior brother. He knows everything and doesn't say anything, but I feel that the senior brother should be hiding a big knife... Don't be misled by the umbrella in the book review. There is really no line that guides the cp direction of the master and the senior brother. Moreover, I feel that he is the protagonist of all the members. The senior brother should appear the most. It should be said that he is the only serious person in the entire sect who has shouldered everything hahahahaha

It's a good-looking, bland and comfortable fairy tale, but to be honest, I wanted to read more about the master and the system, and the two protagonists in the introduction almost looked like two male protagonists trying to persuade them to quit...

It's quite interesting. The reason why so few people have read it may be that the introduction is too concise and lacks any highlights. The author could add character descriptions and strength backgrounds of Xi Shuangmo and his disciples. The setting of the whole sect's ruthless way is very attractive to me. It is strong and not shaken by love, just for the sake of cultivation. Everyone in the sect does their own thing. With rich resources, they devote themselves wholeheartedly to the things they are interested in. Except for the senior brother (invincible loneliness hh), he is ordinary, but he will stand up for each other at critical moments. However, everyone has a hidden past. How come the three disciples have lost their flesh? Is the second disciple's family deceased? Both the eldest disciple and Xiao Qing are the same. Master Xi Shuangmo has a prosperous past. There are many areas that need to be filled in, and the strength of the third disciple is currently unknown. So what exactly is the clone going to do? I hope the characters can be more fleshed out and more interactions between the disciples can be added. I feel that they are a bit unfamiliar. There are still too few chapters. Good luck to the author.

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It's nice to read. I picked it up from the previous book. The author's writing style is quite good. This is the only non-CP novel about two protagonists who cultivate immortality that I have read. It is very novel and very interesting. I hope the author sticks to it!

It's good to watch, but the third child's role is a bit small. Can you give him more roles? I like the dark and introverted cockroach personality [Sending my heart]

Update! ! ! ! ! ! Update soon! ! ! [Almost crying] It's been a long time since I've seen such a cool and powerful heroine with no CP! ! ! The sudden ending of Tavernall Next Door was enough to make me heartbroken. Why do you want to do the same with this one? Unless you dig out all the foreshadowing of the previous book for me and write it again.

Sweeping the grave, he has been dead for a long time

Finished reading? So fast? The author will update soon! Don't tell us you cured your diligence!

So pretty! It's different from the ordinary routine of cultivating immortals! Everyone has their own characteristics, and there are no ambiguous plots between master and disciple! ! ! Why does it show that the update is discontinued? Please update it soon😭😭😭

Omg great group portrait makes me spin, everyone is so cute hhh

I used to only read articles and hardly comment, but now I want to change. Good books are worth recommending, and authors are more motivated when receiving feedback. Come on, look forward to it. I just have a little suggestion. It will be better if the author catches the bugs after he finishes writing.

I really like the setting of the protagonist and the plot is also interesting.

The writing style is sophisticated and the content is detailed without watering down. At first glance, it is clear that the outline is clear and comprehensive. It is an excellent author. I recommend it. The overall atmosphere is very calm and gentle, and there are many interesting details that are just right and not too detailed. If the power system and character settings do not collapse in the later stage, it should be a masterpiece of 9.8 Or above.

I've been reading a lot of this kind of non-CP cultivating immortality recently, and I feel that the content is pretty much the same, but this one is quite innovative. The master is the protagonist of Goldfinger, and this is the first time I've seen it. The writing is also good, keep it up like this, I will love to read more! [Sending Hearts]

It's so good-looking, I've started to recommend the book to others. Everyone's personality is quite distinct. It's more like a group portrait than a double protagonist.

Can she regain her male body? [Shocked][laugh][laugh]

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No one has a good work, it looks good [like]

Really super pretty

It is indeed a good book

Why doesn't anyone write anything exciting?

It's recommended. It's recommended. You can enter.

Good work, the character design is very good, everyone has their own characteristics and not fall into the stereotype. The story is also very interesting, I hope the author will keep up the good work.

It's super pretty. Keep it up and don't create a master-disciple relationship.

What a good book, comfortable to read, I like daily writing

It's very warm, beautiful, and feels like a long stream of water

It's very well written, but I don't know why the rating is not high. Maybe it's because the subject matter is not popular with people. The number of words is small, less than 300,000. The rating may increase if the number of words increases.

Come on, I believe in you

It's pretty and interesting.