High Martial: Crowned King in Three Years, Subduing the Abyss

Good looking Advantages: 1. The impact of the protagonist's appearance is something that I like to see, and the portrayal is quite good in this regard. The protagonist is also somewhat feminine under the influence of others, which makes people feel quite happy [laughing] It is recommended to strengthen the degree of persecution of the female protagonist. 2. The intensity of realm suppression is not high. There is neither Ten Chapters to Become a King nor Thousand Chapters to be a warrior. The pace is relatively comfortable. My suggestion is to follow this pace slowly. 3. The development of superpowers is relatively comfortable. You don't have to use basic skills like others, but there are still some methods missing, such as healing. Water superpowers to stop bleeding are also very reasonable, right? 4. The description of the supporting characters around the protagonist is good. It does not need to be profound and comprehensive. At least the person is clearly described. A little bit of characteristics is not bad at all. My personal suggestion is to intensify the persecution of the male (female) protagonist, who looks good and wants to pout [admiration]

Please don't have two male leads, please.

It looks good, but there are a lot of typos, but I encourage you, five stars, and I'm curious about how the protagonist group will develop next? The important thing is that spending two hours to correct typos can allow more people to guess the word without too much context, and readers will read more smoothly. Come on!

Actually, I would rather watch a double male protagonist╮( •́ω•̀ )╭

There is semi-invincibility, and it is quite comfortable to watch in the early stage, but in the middle stage, there is a bit of a lack of communication and collision between the protagonist and other people, because the protagonist's image is actually more interesting if he has companions. Otherwise, it is not much different from the general semi-invincible upgrade flow. If there is space attribute, the pace can actually be a little faster. There are a few poisonous points that I didn't mention, and I forgot about the others in the middle. It's generally within the range that I can accept.

I hope there will be two male protagonists, but that's okay if not possible, but don't have any ambiguity with women.

Good looking! You can give the protoss a single arrow! The star spirit is the most popular, the strongest and the most beautiful!

The author has a lot of typos, it would be nice if he could eliminate a few

After listening to it, it's quite good, but the protagonist's days of being missed by his brothers will never come to an end.

It's okay. There are a lot of typos. I hope the author can correct them quickly [Chigua] It's very interesting. Please give it a try, the author.