After Becoming a Big Shot in the Immortal Realm, My Disciple Crossed the Line

It's so good to watch, it's tied immediately, I can't get enough of it. The writing is very good, but there are some minor flaws, but the flaws do not hide the good points, and it is beautiful. First let's talk about Shou, he's super handsome, and his character designs so far are pretty good. I think Shou's character is frank, not awkward, and has a clear sense of right and wrong, which fits the image of the Immortal Lord very well. I have read a lot of master-disciple novels before, but few of them wrote about the relationship between the enemy and the enemy very strongly, and few people wrote about the relationship between the enemy and the enemy in a very two-way manner - in many master-apprentice stories, the emotional line between the enemy and the enemy is not so obvious, and it becomes very abrupt when they get together later. (There is no intention to attack other novels) Speaking of Gong, I really like Gong who is soft and coquettish (a personal fetish). When I read the article, I always feel that Xiao Gong is a love brain, but I just like Gong who is a love brain. And although he is a love brain, he is not crazy and creative, he is very sensible, trusts the people he loves, and he feels both love-minded and very sane. Overall, the characters of Gong and Shou are very lovable. Let's talk about the most important point – the plot. There are not many flaws in the plot, and the connection between various plot points is okay, so that it will not make people look at the drama. The most important thing is that there are no embarrassing plots like those in some master-disciple novels, such as entering a fantasy world, one of the attackers and the recipients will always be drugged, and then some indescribable things will happen. (I really can't stand it. I've read several articles like this. It's really painful because I'm the kind of person who would embarrass others.) Another point is the emotional scenes. Generally speaking, I feel that the development of the relationship between the two is not abrupt and smooth. The most important thing is that I can touch each other. When I watch the interaction between the two, I have a sweet feeling. When I see the two being frustrated, I will worry about them. In a word, it's a shame. From the current point of view, this is a novel with two strong characters, a good character and plot for both the subject and the attacker, the emotional scenes are well written, and the author's writing style is also good (´∀｀*), so sisters, feel free to rush forward, and hope that Da Da can stabilize the state. If you continue writing like this, I will definitely follow up! ! ! Finally, give the author a little love [love]

I have a heart attack and it's hard to find a book that suits my taste.

It looks good, but there are a lot of typos and sentences. If the author has more time, I hope he can correct it. Well, there should be some abuse, but the author personally admits that it is a little abuse. I think the plot sounds good. Don't worry if it's not Shuang Jie. It's Shuang Jie. Well... I think it's quite cute like this [Chigua]

Ah ah ah, why is it not finished? More, more, more, more, more,

This is the one with the most online IQ of the Master I have seen in the Master's time travel story [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] It's really super good-looking, two strong characters, sweet but not cruel [Cool] [Cool] [Cool] Not many people have watched it, so the rating is a bit low! The fate between the two of them existed in the previous life, and it would not be a loss to invest in the shares [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Looking forward to the author's new article! [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

The writing is not bad. The plot of the article has ups and downs, which is quite interesting. Moreover, the relationship between the male protagonist and the two goes as it comes, and it can be said that the relationship is long-term. The development is not urgent or slow, which is okay. If you look carefully at the article, there is a little foreshadowing but not deep. The ending is okay. Overall, it is a good article [heartfelt]

Nice. I haven't watched much, but I can roughly guess the outcome and plot. I think this book is very good, um, not like other books. The same thing is true. In order to protect the disciples, the master's cultivation level has declined. This is very disgusting. This book is different. How can I put it? Like some previous master-disciple stories, the master's realm is obviously higher than those people, but it's just useless. I like this. I still like My Wife very much. The reason why this book has so few ratings may be that too few people have read it.

Nice! ! ! ! ! There aren't many that I can finish reading! ! Seeing that it is mainly about Cure Feng Tianfeng, maybe there are not many articles, and it will not be very exciting if it is still laying the groundwork.

Ahhhh O(≧口≦)O It's so sweet! So pretty! The master is so charming and innocent that Xiaoyang is obsessed with her. They both talk and have no misunderstandings. They also have very upright views. I love her so much!

I promise you won't regret it