Sui Sui Nian'an

The more similar it is to the original text, the more healing effect it will have. If it lacks foreshadowing and psychological sugar like other texts, it will appear too straightforward and lack connotation. This is really well written [blowing kiss] At first I just felt that the story was pleasant and the characters were relevant but not bloated, but gradually I became infected by the author's writing style. Just like walking in what others have prepared for you, a pattering of rain makes you feel wet and full of aftertaste. Let me talk about myself first. I like Hungry Death because I like this story and Ryoho's emotional ambiguity. The impression given to me is that "from now on the mist falls on the golden city, one person holds an umbrella and two people walk together." I have also written a little fan fiction (really only a little), but it is difficult to continue writing objectively without incorporating my own emotions, so the characters will have the author's own characteristics. As I said above, the closer it is to the original work, the more healing the effect will be. The author subtly exports emotions, which is quite elegant, but mellow. And it will be mixed with some of the author's own literary talents (my favorite episode), including but not limited to poetry and songs, and the literary quality is evident. Regarding the sugar and knife in the article, I think of the mourning of things in Japanese aesthetics. Personally, I feel very similar. I actually don't appreciate the decline of beautiful things, but thinking about the end of the book will still break the defense (hhh), Man Sui's disease will affect the readers like a seed (a bit like Lin Daiyu) The true feelings between them can often be revealed in times of crisis, life and death (refer to Shared Death). The book uses the unknown of the future and the quality of their illness to connect the fate of the two. The lonely boat swaying in the wind and rain, all dependent on each other, is very sad and beautiful. As for the original characters, Jiang, Yu and Yang are all very good. When I watched Jiang, I even forgot about the protagonist. I never expected to connect the fate of the two people in the form of a message board, and I never expected that Jiang's image is so three-dimensional (I sometimes read the characters' lines and read them out. You can appreciate the author's carefully considered words) Jiang has a very righteous youthful feeling, and when describing Qionghua's monologue in this chapter, there is something different from Mansui. There is only a trace, but it is this trace that separates the two images. It is amazing! I can't tell you what's so wonderful about it, Then there's Yangyang. Yangyang itself has a bit of Xiaosui's personality. She and Sui are like Xiaosui when they are together. They are very cute children! I just want to post it every day. Little clever! Yu is the mirror version of Liangsui. It should be more like Sui's direct look at his past, a bit like Lacan's mirror principle? If Yang inherited Sui's cute side, then Yu inherited her dark and vengeful side. This direct look at the past and myself reminds me of Lao Liang. Didn't he also constantly look at himself in the original work? His and Sui's self-gazing angles are different. Readers, please take a look for yourself. Regarding the values ​​in the article, they are very, very, very positive, and the concept of love is also very good. It can be stolen into the circle of friends as a copywriter. Such a concept of love has completely sublimated Sui's image. If you had such a reasonable girlfriend, wouldn't you like it? Not to mention Suisui. Well done, author [top post]

It's a very novel perspective. Most of the stories are described with Mansui as the first person, and the writing style is very good. Erchuangli is also a very good work. The relationship between Ryo and Sui is also very tangled, which is more in line with the feeling of two people meeting each other in my mind. Baidu, I hope to finish the book [Adoration]

The plot is the least obtrusive I've seen in Erchuang. The way the main plot intersperses Sui's nine-year experience makes his change in views on Liang more reasonable. The plot is smooth and the writing is pretty good. Come on, author

Although I only read it briefly, every line in the article reveals the author's mastery of prose and writing. It is really a rare and excellent work created by A Thousand Miles in the late Ming Dynasty. It is a pity that I met him too late and did not have first-hand support. Thanks to the author for realizing his dream, Liangsui Tongsheng, come on!

The sense of distance is well controlled, and the relationship between hate and love is handled very well. The conflict is not directly resolved, but there is not too much estrangement. The writing is wonderful. Although there is a knife, there is hope, it is very interesting to read, and there is no hydrology. This is the most valuable thing about fanfiction. Among the works I have read so far, it is the most in line with my expectations for the future of the two of them. I highly recommend it! ! !

The plot development is very interesting, and the relationship between Ryo and Sui is also very good. Both close and separated. Unlike some second creations, which are too intimate.

It's really beautiful, isn't it? Highly recommended! ! ! ! The image of the protagonist is completely established, and it is in no way inconsistent with the original text; many details are also very real and vivid, and both Liangho and the original characters seem to be standing in front of me alive. The dual perspective can be said to inherit the style of the original work, and is unique among second creations. It is very comfortable to read, and it also gave me a better understanding of the story. The extra story about Qionghua and the big cat leading the little wolf is also particularly exciting (I really like the part where they watch the fireworks). There are also philosophical stories and storytellers throughout the book, which can be said to cast a mysterious but extra attractive veil to the story. It has the feeling of "a page full of absurd words and a handful of bitter tears" The beautiful lines embellished in the passages fully demonstrate the author's profound knowledge, and the appropriate quotations of verses are enough to stir up ripples in the hearts of everyone who is immersed in the work. Moreover, I feel that the author's interpretation of the original work is accurate and thorough. This is fully reflected in the inner fluctuations of Ryo and Mitsuho when they recall the past. Dear author, I look forward to your update every day when I go home as a senior in high school. I wish you the best writing and I also wish this work will be liked by more people! (○｀ε´○)

The writing is really good, not to mention the writing is better than other fanfics. It also has two perspectives, and the development is more reasonable than others. For example, in the symbiosis next door, Mansui has learned to practice swords. It's not bad, but the development is too outrageous. This book is very good and reasonable. Mansui's clothes are from Fengyuelou's sister, and the two perspectives can also bring people in. In short, the writing is really good All five stars, all good reviews, damn it since no one is watching it

Yes, the writing is very good, and the narrative is introduced from two perspectives, which is very innovative (please take care of me who listens to books, I am confused halfway through). The plot is well connected, but I personally wish there were less extra episodes, mainly because of Liang Sui (who is with the author). Finally, I am here to make up for my regrets. I hope the author will not write too much [face covering]

At present, it seems that there is definitely a be (he doesn't know if Lao Yu will be merciful and add it), but the relationship between Liang Sui in the author's works is very different from that of Symbiosis Next Door and Dashun Superman. It highlights the sense of distance but still relies on each other. In short, it is very distinctive, and Sui Sui's writing is even worse. The writing style should be one of the ceilings in the Hungshi circle (the author's literary literacy is really high, as can be seen from the superb use of poems and allusions). I saw Liang Sui's confession today and I received a good review from Lao Yu! ! ! Later, he asked eight roommates to write together [Thinking] Qixi suddenly struck with a knife, and I finally recognized the strength of Lao Yu Dao [I almost cried]. "I really have planned our future well." I almost couldn't hold my breath in the early morning. It's so sweet, so sweet. Laoyu's main line, I just want to have a good time! Don't be too deliberate with your sword, as swordsmanship also depends on the technique. Out of great compassion and he [I'm about to cry], I will build a golden body for you in the Xiu Shen Temple! !

The writing is very good, and there are many extra chapters interspersed in it. I like it very much. The original intention of reading the book is for the sweet follow-up, but after reading more than 50 chapters so far, I always feel that there is a smell of knives. I thought I didn't want to read it because of the knives, but I didn't give up and looked back. The writing style and the extra chapter are very attractive to me, and I saw in the comment area that the author said that the bag does not have a knife, which made me feel relieved. I feel that the poor rating and the lack of people reading it may be related to the smell of knives. I will always support this book. I hope there are no knives [crying], and give them a good ending [thinking]

The two-person perspective is unique and allows Sui to experience Liang's experience. The more awkward and complicated emotions allow her to better understand Liang. Yes, how can a fourteen-year-old girl have everything smooth sailing? After experiencing many twists and turns, she gradually understands that everything is reality. I cried, hoping that there would be no knife [crying] [crying]

Great, the author is as prolific as a sow. The book is very beautiful and fits the original work. It also has a unique perspective. It's amazing [please update]

The description is delicate and just right, without making people feel tired, which is very suitable for me. The author also has his own unique understanding of the characters. The heroine's words and deeds from the male protagonist's perspective are vivid and vivid, as if they are alive. More importantly, the ability to control the multi-line first perspective depends on the author's writing skills. The recent data is not very good, and Yuyu feels a little disappointed. I would like to support it. I hope that Yulao's book can be read by more people.

After watching for a long time, I finally caught up with the big team! The author's writing style is very good. It's really comfortable to see such writing style when reading a book. Like! In terms of the plot, the author has made certain additions to the background of the characters (such as Qiong Hua), which makes the characters fuller. I am looking forward to the plot after arriving in Yangzhou. However, the narrative tends to be fragmented and slow (referring only to the main plot). Although Liang Suima should have such a tone, the short stories in the volume are very fast-paced, and currently have little connection with the plot (Mr. Cui has not yet appeared, and Lao Liang is just a fool). There is a feeling of suddenly turning to "Hanabi" to cut a knife when reading a novel, and the main plot also hides a knife. Suisui's poison has not been cured yet, and we readers can only lick candy on the tip of the knife. [Crying] This book also created many new characters, who all had a certain impact on the protagonist's growth, and there were also characters that impressed me deeply, such as Weiyang, the cute trumpet Suisui. Hey hey hey, suck it up. However, the world view of this book is mixed with a lot of narratives about ghosts and gods, and this time it really feels like Aihong Chuan. But it was Suisui who always saw the gods... Well (smashes hands), so Suisui is the crazy scholar, and Liang is the brothel geisha who has been dead for three years [note] (misleading direction).

From the double perspective, I had to look at Kouya now. Suisui is so cute that my heart melts. She is ten or even nine points delicate. Her writing style is one of the best among Hungry Death novels. However, the update speed needs to be improved.

After reading several works, I personally feel that this one is the most in line with my taste. There is no rebirth or time travel. The plot written by the author himself is also very exciting, with ups and downs. The writing is also very good and the characters are very consistent with the original work. It is neither sweet nor pure. It feels like a knife covered with honey. Moreover, I feel that the combat power of Liang in the book is quite well designed (after all, it is really impossible for someone to do it one against ten). The dual perspective is also relatively novel, and it also encourages the author to keep writing and not to cut the book [crying] In addition, the relationship between the characters is not that complicated. There are fewer characters, but the characters' personalities are described very delicately, and the readers seem to be relatively relaxed.

This book is so strong, the writing is quite right, the emotions between Liang Sui are reasonable, the introduction of secondary characters is not abrupt, a little knife is also sweet, as long as you don't follow Sui Sui Laoyu, you will be my mouthpiece [crying]

This is the best-written Hungry Death fanfic I have ever seen. There is no brainless sugar-coating (but I also like to read pure sugar-coating. Hungry Death has too much stamina, qwq, but this kind touches people's hearts more). The style is very similar to the original work. The most valuable thing is that it is well-written. The relationship with Sui is handled very well, and this twisted and subtle symbiotic relationship is well written. The writing is solid yet playful (all in one). The author definitely understands what we want to read. I followed 69 chapters in one night. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes [please update]

The first thing I want to praise is the writing style. It quotes a lot of poems and allusions, and it is basically just right, without feeling pretentious. What I liked most after that was the transition of Liang-Sui's relationship, which allowed Sui to walk Liang's path over the past nine years, and Yu's revenge made the change in Sui's feelings for Liang not noticeable. In addition, the characters and behaviors of both Ryoho are very close to the original work. The author's dual-perspective narrative is also very original (although I just finished playing the game and always forget Sui's perspective), and the extra chapters of each character (especially Qiong Hua, who finally gave Qiong Hua a good ending) are also very reasonable and exciting. Finally, Laoyu, don't bully my Suisui all the time. I've been beaten to death even when playing games. I want to eat sweets ah ah ah ah ah ah

I like the author's great writing style [Flying Kiss]. It would be no exaggeration to say that it is the most literate Hungry Death fanfic. The poems quoted are just right, and the imagery is vivid and artistic. In terms of plot, the story of Sui and Yu played a vital role in easing the conflict between Liang and Sui nine years later, making the progress of Liang and Sui's relationship less abrupt. The author also controlled the relationship between Liang and Sui just right. I hope that the tonic will stop the change. [Please update]

The writing is great! It is an antidote that can relieve my stamina [crying]. I hope the author will work hard to write more! [Send heart][Send heart]

Wuhu ~ Haokan, after watching it, I felt that it was so literate, the most literate episode (hahaha, maybe it's because I'm not literate). The writing is very good and the emotions are very delicate. From two perspectives, you can clearly understand their thoughts. There is sugar and there is knife, it is not the sweet and greasy kind of full sugar, and it is more reasonable and immersive to develop this way, but it is still sweet. Good reviews, good reviews, good reviews! [Laughing][laughing] The data in this book is not very good, but it is really one of the best among the many Hungry Death fanfics I have read. It's a pity that no one has read such a good work.

Now that I have reached chapter 73, I have watched 5 second works that have become popular recently. In my personal experience, this work is the most authentic to Man Sui. I really like this work. I hope the author can do it faster, but I also hope that the quality can be maintained. [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates]. Let me complain about other things here. Man Sui is already 23. He speaks softly and dignifiedly in the drama. Why are some works so violent? (These are just some small opinions. If you don't agree, don't argue or scold) [Send heartfelt wishes]

My favorite fanfic! It connects very well with the end of the game, the original characters are not obtrusive, and the relationship between the characters is well grasped. What is more amazing is the description from Mansui's perspective, which provides a new direction to narrate the relationship between the two and avoids some heart-wrenching scenes where conflicts between characters cause disagreements. The writing is delicate and the plot develops coherently. In a word, it's super pretty! Come on Laoyu!

The two-person perspective is very good, and the characters of the male and female protagonists fit very well with the original work. Although the plot has slight flaws, it is consistent with the historical background, not brainless, and relaxed. The description of the relationship between the two is delicate, first bitter and then sweet, which is impressive.

It's very good. The poems occasionally introduced are very appropriate to the situation. It's the best Chinese book I've ever read by a Hungry Death fan.

I have read many fandoms except for symbiosis and most of this book is mainly based on mindless sugar-coating. To a large extent, it does not restore the character of the characters and the contradictions in the relationship between Ryo and Manho. Perhaps many people like this almost refreshing writing style, and the number of readers and ratings are much higher. But I still want to say that it is precisely this kind of meandering and subtle feelings that makes my heart move more. I also sincerely hope that more people will know this book and usher in the achievements it deserves.

The author's writing style is very good [like] [like] [like], the characters are portrayed, and the mental journey is described. The plot is not a brainless one that is too sugary. More twists and turns are added to Liangsuo's experience, but it is more real and attractive. The beauty is never those flirting and flirting. I think it is the best result for Liangsui to accompany each other. The author is great, can we update it soon? I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope it can be a full-length story. The story that ends suddenly always leaves people unfinished [love] [love] [love]

The characters are very consistent with the original work, and the author's writing style is also very good, which is rare. Although it is relatively niche, I believe it will get better and better. I will always support you.