Starving People: Voices of Delusion

The more similar it is to the original text, the more healing effect it will have. If it lacks foreshadowing and psychological sugar like other texts, it will appear too straightforward and lack connotation. This is really well written 😘 At first I just felt that the story was pleasant and the characters were relevant but not bloated, but gradually I became infected by the author's writing style. Just like walking in what others have prepared for you, a pattering of rain makes you feel wet and full of aftertaste. Let me talk about myself first. I like Hungry Death because I like this story and Ryoho's emotional ambiguity. The impression given to me is that "from now on the mist falls on the golden city, one person holds an umbrella and two people walk together." I have also written a little fan fiction (really only a little), but it is difficult to continue writing objectively without incorporating my own emotions, so the characters will have the author's own characteristics. As I said above, the closer it is to the original work, the more healing the effect will be. The author subtly exports emotions, which is quite elegant, but mellow. And it will be mixed with some of the author's own literary talents (my favorite episode), including but not limited to poetry and songs, and the literary quality is evident. Regarding the sugar and knife in the article, I think of the mourning of things in Japanese aesthetics. Personally, I feel very similar. I actually don't appreciate the decline of beautiful things, but thinking about the end of the book will still break the defense (hhh), Man Sui's disease will affect the readers like a seed (a bit like Lin Daiyu) The true feelings between them can often be revealed in times of crisis, life and death (refer to Shared Death). The book uses the unknown of the future and the quality of their illness to connect the fate of the two. The lonely boat swaying in the wind and rain, all dependent on each other, is very sad and beautiful. As for the original characters, Jiang, Yu and Yang are all very good. When I watched Jiang, I even forgot about the protagonist. I never expected to connect the fate of the two people in the form of a message board, and I never expected that Jiang's image is so three-dimensional (I sometimes read the characters' lines and read them out. You can appreciate the author's carefully considered words) Jiang has a very righteous youthful feeling, and when describing Qionghua's monologue in this chapter, there is something different from Mansui. There is only a trace, but it is this trace that separates the two images. It is amazing! I can't tell you what's so wonderful about it, Then there's Yangyang. Yangyang itself has a bit of Xiaosui's personality. She and Sui are like Xiaosui when they are together. They are very cute children! I just want to post it every day. Little clever! Yu is the mirror version of Liangsui. It should be more like Sui's direct look at his past, a bit like Lacan's mirror principle? If Yang inherited Sui's cute side, then Yu inherited her dark and vengeful side. This direct look at the past and myself reminds me of Lao Liang. Didn't he also constantly look at himself in the original work? His and Sui's self-gazing angles are different. Readers, please take a look for yourself. Regarding the values ​​in the article, they are very, very, very positive, and the concept of love is also very good. It can be stolen into the circle of friends as a copywriter. Such a concept of love has completely sublimated Sui's image. If you had such a reasonable girlfriend, wouldn't you like it? Not to mention Suisui. Well done, author [top post]

It's a very novel perspective. Most of the stories are described with Mansui as the first person, and the writing style is very good. Erchuangli is also a very good work. The relationship between Ryo and Sui is also very tangled, which is more in line with the feeling of two people meeting each other in my mind. Baidu, I hope to finish the book 🥰

The plot is the least obtrusive I've seen in Erchuang. The way the main plot intersperses Sui's nine-year experience makes his change in views on Liang more reasonable. The plot is smooth and the writing is pretty good. Come on, author

Although I only read it briefly, every line in the article reveals the author's mastery of prose and writing. It is really a rare and excellent work created by A Thousand Miles in the late Ming Dynasty. It is a pity that I met him too late and did not have first-hand support. Thanks to the author for realizing his dream, Liangsui Tongsheng, come on!

The sense of distance is well controlled, and the relationship between hate and love is handled very well. The conflict is not directly resolved, but there is not too much estrangement. The writing is wonderful. Although there is a knife, there is hope, it is very interesting to read, and there is no hydrology. This is the most valuable thing about fanfiction. Among the works I have read so far, it is the most in line with my expectations for the future of the two of them. I highly recommend it!!!

The plot development is very interesting, and the relationship between Ryo and Sui is also very good. Both close and separated. Unlike some second creations, which are too intimate.

It's really beautiful, isn't it? Highly recommended!!!! The image of the protagonist is completely established, and it is in no way inconsistent with the original text; many details are also very real and vivid, and both Liangho and the original characters seem to be standing in front of me alive. The dual perspective can be said to inherit the style of the original work, and is unique among second creations. It is very comfortable to read, and it also gave me a better understanding of the story. The extra story about Qionghua and the big cat leading the little wolf is also particularly exciting (I really like the part where they watch the fireworks). There are also philosophical stories and storytellers throughout the book, which can be said to cast a mysterious but extra attractive veil to the story. It has the feeling of "a page full of absurd words and a handful of bitter tears" The beautiful lines embellished in the passages fully demonstrate the author's profound knowledge, and the appropriate quotations of verses are enough to stir up ripples in the hearts of everyone who is immersed in the work. Moreover, I feel that the author's interpretation of the original work is accurate and thorough. This is fully reflected in the inner fluctuations of Ryo and Mitsuho when they recall the past. Dear author, I look forward to your update every day when I go home as a senior in high school. I wish you the best writing and I also wish this work will be liked by more people! (○`ε´○)

The writing is really good, not to mention the writing is better than other fanfics. It also has two perspectives, and the development is more reasonable than others. For example, in the symbiosis next door, Mansui has learned to practice swords. It's not bad, but the development is too outrageous. This book is very good and reasonable. Mansui's clothes are from Fengyuelou's sister, and the two perspectives can also bring people in. In short, the writing is really good All five stars, all good reviews, damn it since no one is watching it

Yes, the writing is very good, and the narrative is introduced from two perspectives, which is very innovative (please take care of me who listens to books, I am confused halfway through). The plot is well connected, but I personally wish there were less extra episodes, mainly because of Liang Sui (who is with the author). Finally, I am here to make up for my regrets. I hope the author will not write too much 🤦

At present, it seems that there is definitely a be (he doesn't know if Lao Yu will be merciful and add it), but the relationship between Liang Sui in the author's works is very different from that of Symbiosis Next Door and Dashun Superman. It highlights the sense of distance but still relies on each other. In short, it is very distinctive, and Sui Sui's writing is even worse. The writing style should be one of the ceilings in the Hungshi circle (the author's literary literacy is really high, as can be seen from the superb use of poems and allusions). I saw Liang Sui's confession today and I received a good review from Lao Yu!!! Later, he asked eight roommates to write together 🤔 Qixi suddenly struck with a knife, and I finally recognized the strength of Lao Yu Dao [I almost cried]. "I really have planned our future well." I almost couldn't hold my breath in the early morning. It's so sweet, so sweet. Laoyu's main line, I just want to have a good time! Don't be too deliberate with your sword, as swordsmanship also depends on the technique. Out of great compassion and he 🥺, I will build a golden body for you in the Xiu Shen Temple!!