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Give yourself a touch

It's very good. I like this kind of short chapter with a quick emotional line. But the writing style is average. It feels like it's just a simple and bland narration of a story without too many delicate expressions. Come on [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The plot line could be added a little more appropriately. It mainly seems to be the dialogue and psychology between the two heroines. The time span required by the plot is too large, and the emotions in different worlds accumulate too quickly. The damage caused before the time travel can be easily covered up. Yes, it's basically because a change or apology leads to a rapid rise in feelings. The two aspects of plot and emotional promotion can be developed step by step or described more delicately. Now it looks like a daily novel to me but not like a daily novel, like a drama but not like a drama. It's weird [Thoughts] Another thing is that I don't see the usefulness of the system's points. The application scope of this function is too small. It only appears once in a world. I don't understand the writing. It also mentions the meaning of the specific values. It's a bit of a decoration.

Summary: The plot is good and the characters are quite interesting. It's a good investment. Almost every story is fast-paced and the emotional scenes don't drag on. Except for the short story about Bai Luo being a princess, the emotional scenes are slow [thoughts] By the way, the book "If You Touch the Fox's Tail, You'll Be Responsible for Me" is a mess. According to the original scenario, Bai Luoqiu is the child of the two protagonists [Thinking] The author will keep up the good work and looks forward to a better next book. Come on👍🏻

This emotional line is so fast, please write it more carefully [Chigua][Chigua]

The story at the beginning was too straightforward, fast-paced, not detailed, and not very good to watch. But as you continue to watch, each story is more detailed than the previous one. Also moved. It's so tear-jerking that I've read the entire book, the later the better.

Feelings are a bit fast, but the writing is very good, keep up the good work💪

Excellent reading experience, wonderful.

Wonderful and unstoppable

Finished reading. OK OK

You are the fastest author I have ever seen in this rocket-style plot.

It's great to watch, and the content in each world is exciting.

Such a good-looking book, how can you not read it? Gagaxiang's two-female protagonist, I like the author's writing style.

It's good-looking, fast-paced, and the emotional scenes don't drag on.