Divine Condor*********

Much better than Duan Yu's book, an improvement

I came from Tianlong next door, and this fanfic of The Legend of the Condor Heroes is very in line with my taste. I guess I'm hungry and want to eat an author

It looks good. Although it is a succubus, if you take too much of it, it won't feel like it. It's like a bill to seduce a female character and then go to the next place to seduce again.

The writing style is good, and the writing is quite brisk. You can read it for entertainment and relax [Chigua] [Like]

Five-star review: This book is both upright and interesting. The most important thing is that the characters in the book are written with flesh and blood and have their own emotions. It can be seen that the author is really thoughtful in portraying the characters. Another point is that the author added his own understanding of the characters' personalities and relationships, which I think is relatively unique and accurate. For example, in Yang Guo's original work, he is withdrawn and stronger due to his childhood experiences. Furthermore, Guo Jing respects Ouyang Feng more, probably because Ouyang Feng is one of the few people who has praised Guo Jing, among other things. As an old bookworm, this book is the best book I have ever read in the category of Tomato Condor. Finally, I wish the writer good luck and it is best to write down step by step. Come on, author!

It's a good book. Although it's a harem novel, the emotional descriptions are quite logical, and the talent and the like are also simply attributed to plug-ins. I won't find any far-fetched reasons to deal with this roundabout problem of time travel. And it can also be seen that the author has a deep understanding of Jin Yong's novels, at least the Condor Trilogy. The writing is also relatively smooth, and there are no major logical problems. I have only written more than fifty chapters so far, but among the many fanfics on Tomato, they are considered to be of high quality. At least they make me more eager to read them than those 9:00-point ones.

I would say that it fits my description of that, um, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, which I have some regrets about. Of course, this author wrote this novel. He also has some understandings of his own, but this understanding is similar to other understandings I saw when I was a child, and they are all pretty good. Women can have some, but I don't think there should be too many, maybe seven or eight, which should be enough. If it's too much, it feels a bit too much. It doesn't feel that special. You can write more descriptions of fighting scenes. Please cheer up the author this time. Keep following me and don't be lazy.

The beginning is quite interesting. The writing style is generally more of a pile of words but not very accurate. For example, the pure and filial piety is too much, and it can only be regarded as pure filial piety. After all, the story of the pure and filial piety in the Song Dynasty is based on examples, and it really doesn't count. Next is Ouyang Feng's part, which is why I deducted points. Yang Guo's characteristics are actually contrary to Guo Jing's kindness, because Yang Guo's kindness abandons tradition and objective prejudice. This is the reason why Yang Guo is loved by everyone. It is the goodness of true knowledge that comes from practice. And the behavior of abandoning Ouyang Feng has fallen into the position of exquisite self-interest. The same goes for the handling of Ke Zhen'e and Yang Guo. It's okay to deceive the characters in the book, but readers will see it objectively, and it's pure and filial. . . Forget it, the performance in the book is just pure filial piety, and the reader's perspective is more of a mercenary one. Just started, I will change later.

The writing is very good, the background of the story, the hearts of the characters, and the connections between the events are very tight. Generally speaking, the writing style is relatively smooth, making people eager to read it. Compared with the previous novels, this book has been significantly improved. Only when the characters are well-established and the story narrative is complete can a novel be truly written and a story told well. I rarely write a serious book review, but this novel touched my heart not only in terms of subject matter but also in writing style. Therefore, Liao Liao's few strokes are regarded as recommendations, so that good works will not be easily buried. The only thing that made me feel uncomfortable when reading the book was that it was too short. I finished it in two days. I hope the author will update it as soon as possible.

It's rare to find a relatively normal fan fiction book. The words and deeds of the characters other than the protagonist are basically in line with the characters of the original work, and are not abrupt or poisonous. The only drawback is that the number of chapters is too small. Please update it soon, old thief @Keyuan

It is indeed possible. It can be seen that the author has studied the original work very carefully. The details in the book are correct, and Yang Guo's character is also very palatable. Overall, it is very enjoyable, but it is very refreshing and worth reading. However, there are many typos and sentence errors in the book. It is understandable that the author is exhausted and tired, so just pay more attention. Also, can it be faster? It's really not enough [face covering] [OK]

Compared with the cool articles that are everywhere now, the first thing I feel is the writing style. Compared with those underage novices, this one is obviously much more sophisticated. The second is the subject matter. I have been dazzled by novels about the fantasy world. When I see the world of high martial arts, I will inevitably feel fresh. Finally, there is the plot. The plot of this book is steady and the pace is not too fast. It is in obvious contrast with the fast pace of other refreshing novels. I personally feel that this book is very good. This is just my personal opinion. If you have different opinions, we can discuss it [Like].

After seeing this, I think it's pretty good-looking. I hope the author will do his best and look forward to the update. I hope it doesn't crash.

It's very interesting, but there are too few of them. I feel like it will be unfinished. I beg the author to stop unfinishing it. There are too few interesting Shendiao fanfics. If you update more slowly, you can avoid being unfinished and unfinished! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Xiangyang's snake gallbladder and swordsmanship keep up, and there are also wars. In the early stage of martial arts, he becomes the king in the later stage. The dragon and elephant don't fall behind. The protagonist is nothing but energetic, and it is also the foundation for fighting across levels! Later, you can write about the fusion of the world, such as Fengyun, Sui and Tang Dynasties. In the snow, singing! Don't merge with a weak world

There are no reviews. One word, I love reading it! Money can't buy it, I'm happy with it. It was really sad to read the original work, it was very sad, Yang Guo was bullied, Yang Guo had his hand chopped off, Long Er was raped, etc. . .

I finished reading it all in a few hours, and I feel that everything else is good. I just feel that the number of words in each chapter is a bit different from those of great authors, but the terms used in the document still have a martial arts meaning. When I look at it, I can think of the "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" I have seen, and it has a sense of imagery.

The overall humor is interesting, the early stage is fascinating, and the later stage is unbearable. I have given up on it since I met Duan Yu, but the author's literary talent is very good and can arouse my emotions. It deserves a 5-star rating!

When I see chapter 78, it pops up to give a rating, so I'll give it a review. There's no big problem for the time being. The writing is very good and in line with my preferences. I hope it can be maintained. There is a chapter in the middle where Da Wu and Xiao Wu call out their parents. I checked that there were indeed quite a lot of people calling like that in the Song Dynasty. It's just that after watching too many costume dramas, I felt a little out of character [face covering]

This novel is a compelling work that deftly blends reality and fantasy to immerse the reader in a rich plot. The author has excellent performance in character creation and emotional description, allowing readers to deeply feel the protagonist's inner world. In addition, the novel has a compact structure and smooth writing, making it easy to read in one sitting and leave you with endless aftertaste.

I feel like what I wrote is still okay. It just feels like it's a bit staged and a bit fake, but it's okay. Come on author, your writing is pretty good, keep it up I will continue to watch

It's very well written. It's a standard fan fiction. It doesn't have any poisonous points now. There are very few Shendiao fan fiction on major platforms, and there are only a few that can be picked out. This one is one of the best.

The content is exciting, and the process is engaging for readers. There are many foreshadowings, and the character descriptions are lifelike. All of them are flesh-and-blood characters. Although it is a fanfic, the writing is very creative!

Very nice. I think anyone who has read the original novel or the TV series and The Legend of the Condor Heroes will not reject this novel [laughs]

The writing is good, but the name should be changed to "Study under Duan Zhengchun". I opened a harem in Shendiao, focusing on a affectionate and responsible character.

It's a good book, I couldn't stop reading it and have endless aftertaste, but the updates are too slow! Not enough to watch! I can't say anything about the quality, but I still hope the author will work hard! Well said, five stars are given, gifts are given, the rest is up to you! Thank you for your hard work🙏

The author of this book wrote it to smooth over the regrets in The Legend of the Condor Heroes, and fill up all the regrets in it, so that everyone has a good ending. And Yang Guo himself had double buffs of full charm, full talent, and a eloquent mouth. He lived a smooth life until he finally became almost an immortal.

The plot is a bit slow, but it's still interesting to read. It can be seen that the author Shendiao has read a lot, and the author's attitude is also very comfortable. There are also many updates, five chapters a day, Liver Emperor! Great, needless to say

A very good fanfic with good writing style, humorous writing, and strange afterthoughts. Yang Guo is a bit mean-spirited, but overall he doesn't feel too playful, rather moderate, and very comfortable to watch. If there are any shortcomings, it is the limitations of the theme and setting. Firstly, there are a lot of cheats, and Yang Guo is considered invincible. Secondly, the general plot of the humanistic plot can be basically guessed, and there are no surprises. Other than that, it's pretty good, considered excellent.

This novel is a captivating work that immerses the reader in a rich plot. The novel has a compact structure and smooth writing, making it easy to read in one sitting and leave you with endless aftertaste. Update soon