Fantasy: Who Hasn't Ordered a Sub-Career Yet?

Great support for the author, the article is clearly organized, the story is humorous, and the author is very imaginative. So far, it is very interesting (~￣▽￣)~

The ideas are good and the writing is okay. I hope I can stick to it and finish it.

The writing is good, and the plot is okay, but it is a harem story. If you like a single female protagonist, you should hesitate, but it is okay to watch. After all, if you ignore the other female protagonists, it is okay to read it as a single female protagonist, but I don't think you have this strange ability.

It is really a rare good book on Tomato. After reading about half of it, I immediately gave it a thumbs up. The author has ideas and pursuits, and is very careful when writing. There are almost no logical loopholes, and the rhythm of the writing is very comfortable. It is much better than those studio books. I have read online articles for many years, and recently I have searched through a lot of books on Tomato. This book is really recommended. I hope the author can keep writing. Come on.

It's pretty cool, tell me why. In the early stage, it was a standard cool novel, but later it transformed into a real novel and creation, with flesh-and-blood characters, emotional supporting characters, indescribable relationships, etc. I have to say that it is very attractive. Of course, there are also shortcomings, which are quite obvious. There is a lot of inner drama in this book, and the author narrates most of it in the third person, which obviously cannot be as natural and sincere as in Leo Tolstoy's Resurrection. This is a bit abrupt and somewhat redundant, but there are advantages. It is explained very thoroughly, but it takes the trouble to talk about one thing again and again, repeating the foreshadowing of the last time, and then pushing it a little further, and the cycle starts again. Like the story of the Yu family and the grievances of the historians, the impression is ordinary. Generally speaking: there is a pearl in the tomato sea, and its beauty cannot be concealed by its flaws. The author is so updated!

After reading the first volume, I feel very satisfied. The author's narration is unhurried and slow. Although sometimes a little wordy, the language is precise and there is no habit of abusing exclamation marks by most authors today. In addition, it can be seen from the inside that the author has a lot of foreshadowing before writing, the plot is smooth and the characters have distinct personalities, making it a masterpiece. Ah! Author, I love it! ! But why are there so few? I hate it! Ahhhhhhhhhh! ! ! It's almost as short as my winter vacation. I, I feel pain! I just finished chasing (660) and school is about to start. Is this fate? Ah, I, I, I love it! But it's the last four months of the college entrance examination, and I probably won't be able to catch up. Does this mean I have no points? I hate it! Meow Beibei, you must wait for me, ah [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

To be honest, the writing style of this book is good and the organization is relatively clear, but there is a big problem in the early stage. The protagonist has received too many inexplicable attacks. Although I understand that the author wants to use contradictions to advance the development of the plot, some of the targeting of the protagonist is too deliberate and unreasonable, which is a bit disappointing. But it can be considered a good article in Tomato. Please give it five stars to encourage it.

The content is rich, and the title of the book is a bit too sexy, in a Tomato style. However, the author's skills are profound and his literary quality is not ordinary. He cannot be said to be top-notch, but he can be worthy of the word "excellent". I am personally optimistic about the quality of the novel. I have read a lot of novels of different genres. Excluding genre comparison, logic, plot, foreshadowing, shaping... Etc., They are all excellent! The tension is mixed with relaxation, the depression is mixed with humor, and the driving level is superb. Well! I am just a reader, and I racked my brains to encourage the author! Would you like to send me some money?

Looks good, really looks good. It's really good that the author tried to enrich the story of the characters and supporting characters later on, which is better than some novels where they just brush off the supporting characters. However, the stories of the characters are not well connected. It may be a bit abrupt due to lack of foreshadowing in the previous chapters. But I prefer that the character inadvertently evokes his past stories in the plot. I feel that it looks very comfortable this way, and each character appears to be very full and the plot is richer. I like it. I'm just telling you how I feel. If you don't like it, please be gentle🙏🙏🙏

The plot is quite interesting. The male protagonist is very self-aware and does not waste time in fighting or give others a chance. The most interesting thing is that the heroine is capable and smart, but she can't escape by pretending to be a woman. The interaction between the two is very interesting, summary, good-looking, love to read, please update soon!

The protagonist is not stupid, and there are no slap-in-the-face plots. I also particularly like the heroine. The writing is also very good. It can be seen that the author has read many books and has a lot of experience. The most important thing is that there are no slaps in the face, no embarrassing plots, no harem (up to the chapters I read), no entanglements, no ambiguous but unexplained relationships, and no low word count (the memory stuffing in the early stage is to complete the plot, but it is skipped in the first and middle stages). It is really great to read a book of this quality in Tomato.

With a book age of twenty-five years, this book is considered to be an excellent one. The characters' IQs are also online in the writing, and the logic and self-consistency of the combat power system are also reasonable. Although it is a cliché plot, it is really good to tell the story well. If it is a perfect score, this book will at least get an 8. If the details are handled better, it will have the opportunity to become a god. After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the length of the intellectual battle is a bit too much. Although it is very interesting, the system is fundamental after all and cannot be left empty. It feels a pity that such incredible skills as the farmer and the winemaker are left vacant. It would be better to add a few descriptions in addition to the battle of wits to let readers see the progress. In addition, the protagonist's upgrade should be accelerated, otherwise he will not be able to deal with opponents with high combat power in the future. (The above scoring criteria are based on personal reading works of more than 20 years, and are not based on the Tomato scoring criteria)

The details are in place, the rhetoric is gorgeous, and it can withstand chewing carefully. The character descriptions are impressive, vivid and vivid The description of the environment is artistic, the details are complete, and the wording is excellent. In my opinion, there is no nonsense or hydrology at present. It is very suitable for listening to books and chewing on words without any objection. The author's writing style is excellent, and there are many self-written poems in the article. Even if I borrow poetry from the ancients, I don't feel like an unscrupulous scholar is scorning the poetry. It doesn't arouse any resentment. It's just right. Unlike some books that just plagiarize poems and lyrics, they only steal poems. They don't write any of them themselves. They only pretend to talk nonsense and talk nonsense in a self-satisfied and disgusting way. The above is just my personal opinion, everyone has different likes and dislikes

It's a typical low-speed, high-speed story (semi-low speed, right? Because it's not really a low speed, but the more you write, the better. I read the review on the second volume. It's much better than the first volume overall. I rated the first volume 8.5, And the second volume 9.3.) Interspersed with high-speed vehicles, rigorous when the plot is rigorous, not rigorous. At that time... It was the character. The first volume was a bit flawed (one or two book friends questioned it, but I didn't see any problems anyway). Of course, the second volume was gone. As for the rest... I haven't read it yet, but I was shocked after reading the second volume, so I will comment [Cool][Cool][Cool]

The author writes very carefully and the plot rhythm is very smooth and beautiful. Once you watch it, you can't stop. Only the repeated water characters at the end are very troublesome, and many times I have to skip several pages in a row. To be honest, there is no need to repeat some things here if you have introduced the character's personality enough before, and there is no need to extend them, otherwise it will be very annoying to watch. The plot of the book is really exciting, but I can't bear the long and repetitive writing, which delays the mood of reading the book. I guess the score of 8.9 Comes from this. I hope the boss's new book will get better and better as time goes by. [Praise]

The plot has ups and downs. The protagonist is surrounded by dangers, but he is often able to resolve them. It is much better than those mindless novels. This is the real novel. I belong to the Writers Association. The requirements for physical books are relatively high. They have to pass three trials. To be honest, 90% of online articles follow a routine and are straightforward. If they can't even pass the first trial, they will be thrown into the trash can. But this book has completely reached the level of physical books.

First of all, the writing is good, I can give it an 8 point score (out of 10 points, regardless of settings and so on, most of the writing in Tomato is 4-5 points, and better books only get 6-7 points) I haven't looked too far yet, and the setting is a bit interesting, but the actual difference is a bit different from the setting. They are all sub-professionals, but many skills are for combat. I can occasionally have a few with combat effects, so I don't want to use them all. It's a bit like wanting to set up a sub-professional, but due to background reasons, I forcibly changed it to have combat effects. There are also people who make money by reading reviews of books. There are a lot of complaints about people who make money by writing good reviews. There is also this job [thinking] I just have nothing to do, so I can introduce someone who can make money. There are a lot of complaints, but I don't think they are very readable, because many of the comments and novel content are not interesting [face covering]

It's not a mindless novel, but it's very enjoyable to watch, not only because of the plot, but also because of the three-dimensional description of the characters. Various calculations, foreshadowing, and the author's very good writing style make this a very enjoyable novel so far.

The pace in the early stage is slow, and this article is relatively routine, but the author's writing is really good. He fights wits and courage with the enemy, and has a sweet relationship with the heroine. The battle of wits is relatively reasonable, and there are no big loopholes. The only thing is that the conflicts sometimes feel too deliberate. The reasons for the conflicts can be explained, but it always feels awkward for readers from a God's perspective. It gets a little better in the later stages. Overall, it is indeed a fine product.

Jimei people may find it frustrating in the early stages of watching it, that is, before and after the 50th chapter, the male protagonist gradually masters the cheats and can take off [laughing] I think it is very interesting. Gaowu contains history and civil affairs. It makes people feel happy to watch it, but the emotional scenes are quite criticized. However, after watching the scenes, the brows will gradually relax, because the male protagonist gradually accepts it. What I see so far is that in chapter 388, there are already two female protagonists, namely Sect Leader Gu and Brother Xiao. Brother Xiao has already eaten, but Sect Leader Gu hasn't [smirking] yet. Keep reading, I wonder if there will be another one Anyway, the emotional drama is really well written, and the feelings about family and country are also written with passion. [Laughing] If I have to say it, I can give this book a score of 9.2.

The characters are vividly drawn and the storyline is coherent. Unlike many novels where there are a lot of brainless villains, everyone has their own pursuits to do certain things, and there is a possibility of being transformed into a harem novel, but they are not disgusting. The protagonist comes into contact with and develops feelings for every woman. They all have stories, sharing weal and woe, friends of life and death, admiration and love. It's also different from stallion stories, where as soon as the bastard spirit is revealed, it's all about women. The patriotism in the middle part is also very good, but I haven't finished it yet. Will continue to watch.

I've read half of it, and the advantages and disadvantages are obvious. The first few dozen chapters are relatively boring, but after persisting, it is still very interesting. It is a rare masterpiece in Tomato. The emotional drama is very rich, and the heroine's portrayal is very detailed and plump. It is the best portrayal of the heroine in fantasy that I have ever seen. This is a major advantage. The plot is very interesting and refreshing, but the shortcomings are also obvious. It is too didactic. Some of the plots are too exaggerated, giving a sense of déjà vu for literary youths. The middle period is a bit delayed. The part about Buddhism is a bit boring to read. Overall, it is a good work, especially the heroine, who is eye-catching.

It's very beautiful. Do you recommend giving it a try? Cutting down trees in the mine is really not interesting at first, but after 50 chapters, the storyline is very interesting, and the skills are also very interesting, especially this author, who is very good at writing about love [face-covering] and the writing is particularly tear-jerking, just read it, you will not make a sound while reading this [face-covering] This novel made me stay up late every day to read it for seven or eight hours. It was so good, both funny and tear-jerking. The various supporting characters still protected Daqi in the face of being suppressed and framed by the imperial power. The character setting is particularly charming. Every character is very charming, even if he is a sidekick, he also has very charismatic behavior. I have read so many books on Tomato, and this one is considered the top one.

It's a very magical book. It clearly has many career bonuses, but it doesn't feel too complicated when you read it. Each item can play its role appropriately. And it is much better than the ordinary novels where a profession is just a job and cannot be drawn by analogy. In terms of characters, everyone has flesh and blood. Unconventional, with an ancient feel, it can be a good book

I give it a very high rating. There are indeed too few good-written novels like this in Tomatoes, but the results of this book are not ideal. I sincerely hope that readers can read it seriously and be patient enough to read this novel. Really well written.

The combat capabilities are clearly layered, the plug-ins are reasonable, the scene setting is grand, the dialogue has connotation and depth, the protagonist is not pretentious or pretentious, and the supporting cast is very well portrayed. Except for the occasional verbosity, there are no big problems. [Like][Like][Like] The biggest problem with this book is that everyone in it is influenced by the devil and is a lunatic. The light brought by the protagonist is too weak and makes it very uncomfortable to read. The proportion of the protagonist to the supporting characters and villains is not well grasped. The further you read, the more depressing you become. I watched it several times and could not finish it.

It's very good, the entry point is relatively novel, and it has a feeling of cultivation. The language is concise and powerful, and the timely insertion of some poetry is also very good. There are many girls, but each relationship is well described, not counting the stud, the emotional description is very good. The plot is also so-so, not too new, but there are some small foreshadowings in the middle that are slowly revealed, which is good. The only bad thing (and the reason why I didn't finish this book) was that I was too tired. The whole story relied solely on the protagonist to save the world. The only companions were the heroine and a few confidants whom I had cultivated. They were constantly scheming, climbing over one mountain after another, with almost no buffer. The warm daily life with the heroine also seemed less leisurely in the depressing overall environment. The viewers were a little tired. They knew that everything would be taken care of by the protagonist, but they were overwhelmed by the unfinished business. If you can accept this, this book is a very good one and should be in 9.3 Or 9.4.

When I first read it, I thought it was almost a normal and enjoyable story. As I went on, the plot began to build up layer by layer. It was thoughtful, cautious, and exciting. The rhythm was tight, and the further I read, the more energetic I became.

It feels like I'm playing an immortal version of Stardew Valley [laughing] The early difficulties and tribulations are really well written, and becoming stronger in the shadow of death is also a relatively good routine. The world view is okay, and there are many plots about the Riddler. I look forward to the follow-up.

First review of Chapter 160. First of all, I have to say that this book is much better than Broken Galaxy or Domination Art. I also looked at the reasons for the low ratings. The main reason is that many bosses are impatient. Many of the early settings of this book were flawed, and I relied solely on the writing. But it gets much better after the story unfolds in the second chapter. The story structure is very good, the writing is good, the sense of substitution is strong, and it leaves enough room for readers' imagination. Book friends are advised to read patiently first [laughing] I will comment on Chapter 5009 later.