Xiuxian: I Have a Sundial Space

So far, overall, it's pretty good. I hope that if there are less plots about demon cultivators, ghost cultivators, and evil cultivators (it's best not to write about corpse cultivators) and more disgusting ones, come on, author! Realms such as Qi training, foundation building, and golden elixir are all in the initial stage, especially during the Qi training period. There is no need to keep writing copies while stressing the status. Like in Beast Tide, the description of other people's battles is too long, broad, and detailed, and it feels like it is a cramming of words. If the love story is not well written, it is best not to force it into it, as it will be counterproductive. It is better to write it naturally. In addition, I hope that the author will finish this book and not leave it unfinished, but also write about a higher point, such as a plane beyond the world of gods, above, above, above, above (why so many above, to leave some space for those authors who like to kill and fight endlessly to develop and survive), because the beautiful gods and fairy days imagined by the ancients have been darkened by online fantasy novels. Cultivation to immortality and seeking immortality. When you truly cultivate to the point of immortality, you should enter the ultimate point of cultivation, a disaster-free, harmless, painless, suffering-free interface without conflicts of interest, joy, harmony, tranquility and happiness. This is the ultimate plane and ultimate goal of immortality. In this way, if you have a higher and broader horizon, you won't have to worry about the word count, and you will be able to write many exciting plots, with a lot of words, and will be different. Author, go your own way and let others go their own way too! I'm optimistic about you!

If I have space, I will cultivate three or four spiritual beasts and stack them to the peak of Qi refining. Then make elixirs to form complementary combat capabilities. If you don't have enough usage, grab it. You can also protect your own safety. No space will be used.

It's not bad. It's a bit mediocre in the early stage, but it becomes more attractive in the middle and later stages. Since I want to write it in a hexagonal shape, I suggest that I also write more about the leisure business, which can make up for it. There are deficiencies in several other aspects. Even if there are a few different things later (such as ghost cultivators, etc.), It won't affect it. Author, come on!

In tomatoes, don't be picky. I'll withdraw first, you can do whatever you want.

It's okay. Come on, it's 5 stars for now.

Give yourself a five-star review, it's not too much. New viewers, please feel free to leave a comment. If you have any good guidance, I will listen to it!

This book is very nice

: Not bad, not bad. It's not easy to give five stars when writing a book. Come on.

You have already passed the recommendation period, I guess it will be the same as a stand-alone game in the future [face covering]

Okay, please support me