HP Little Black Cat Luya's Anecdotes in the Snake Yard

I like the setting of the lure very much and look forward to the future direction of the design in the future. The current description of the plot always feels a bit hazy, and something seems wrong, but at my level I can't tell what the problem is. Come on!

It's really great to read. Unlike other articles about Harry's brother, this one has a sense of mystery, and the background arrangement is also very reasonable. He is also very strong, has a growth process, and has reasonable experiences. It is not like other articles where he is invincible or weak at the beginning. Also, Xiao Luya's childhood is also very miserable, which attracts me. His personality is also different from other HP male protagonists. He is either a little fox, very wise and almost a demon, or he is just having fun. People, on the contrary, have a feeling of drifting with the wind. They do not deliberately win over others, but rely solely on their own strength to attract the little snakes. They are also very peaceful and gentle to people. Even when they entered the principal's office, they did not forget to give a handful of candies to the little snakes when they left (he really made me cry to death) [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Personally, I think the early pacing was too fast, and it felt a bit inexplicable. It was foggy and foggy, and many rewritten plots were passed by in one stroke, which made people confused. I hope the author can write more clearly and richly. But the protagonist setting is very good, and the overall plot and characters are very full. Overall, this is a "slightly flawed" novel. (The above is just my opinion, not meant to be disparaging)

In fact, I was attracted by the big daily updates. The protagonist is very full-bodied, and the writing style in the early stage was a little immature. But after reading the introduction, I thought that this description might be used to express the suffering that the protagonist suffered in childhood. The emotional expression in the later period was very strong, and it moved me very much. The writing gradually matured, allowing me to see a different Slytherin. I really like the feeling of the protagonist guiding Slytherin to glory. The little snake calling the protagonist His Highness is really touching. Also, I feel great. When does the love line begin, I almost have to look for the love line with a magnifying glass. I also like the big setting very much. It is very different. Another thing that attracts me very much. In my words, the world of Harry Potter is like a background board. I added my own thoughts to make it a whole new world. There is also the protagonist's friend Jin. It really made me cry. Maybe it's because my tear point is relatively low. The big writing is really good. I believe that in the future, there will be more protagonists leading Slytherin to win glorious moments. I like to watch this kind of thing. I hope there will be no interruption in the update. It will be updated three times a day. The last one, is Xiaolong attacking?

How can I put it this way? I quite like the first part, but the second part is near the tulips (I guess I haven't gone back to read it). The plot makes me a little confused. There are not many cp lines, but there are more family lines at the moment. Every original character is OK, with distinct personalities, and the original characters don't feel OOC. There are too many characters to remember, but I can barely remember Lie and Edward. There are many names, but I still can't remember the characteristics of this character. To be honest, I originally came here with CP skills, but now that CP skills have not reached the point where I have almost become the poisonous Wei of Luya [cover face][cover face][cover face], let me focus on CP. After finishing the review, I went back to read today's three chapters (mostly lately I've been reading because I didn't fully understand the plot)

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The book is very interesting, but I don't know why. Maybe it's because I read too little. Isn't it the story between the protagonist and Draco? From the front, it looks like the protagonist and Harry [something]. Maybe I've seen too little. Please give me some advice [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] The book is really good. Come on ^o^

It's a very nice article, with many original parts, the character settings are also very touching, and there are many elements. However, maybe because it is too diverse, my personal knowledge scope is too narrow, and I can't understand it very well. It gives me a feeling that although I can't understand it, I know it is very interesting. The relationship between the characters and the logic of the plot are all worth analyzing in detail, but it is obvious that I am not very good at analysis. It's just a pleasure to read, but I still think the core of this book is very good. I don't know why the score is so low. It may be because of the twists and connections in the plot in the early stage, which are a bit difficult to understand. Oh, I really don't understand it until now, but it does not affect my satisfaction. There is an inexplicable sense of satisfaction that is illuminated by the blind spot of knowledge. It is very interesting. Come on, author.

At present, it seems that there is no particularly outstanding OOC, and the plot line is relatively smooth. It can be said to be a good fanfic. However, the progress of the emotional line in the early stage is too slow. I look forward to the author's big update. Come on! 😚

After watching the first half, I really like this kind of Slytherin. He is united and friendly, and everything is for the glory of pure blood. He is smarter than his peers, but sometimes he is like a child playing in the snow. He has an elegant posture and good upbringing, and has a unique romance that belongs to Slytherin.

No, why not? Because Luya and other characters are clearly three-dimensional? Because the plot is very good (knife, not fatal)? Because there are too few and not enough to watch (yes...)? Don't watch it, otherwise you will suffer like me (because it was so good, I finished it all at once, and then stopped watching it...) Come on

The scope is a bit broad, and the emotions are not so easily aroused. I just feel dizzy after reading it. For someone like me who doesn't like to use my brain when reading novels, I have no idea what he is writing. I don't even know which family the Cygnus belongs to [Thoughts]

I really like this article. It is the first article I have given as a gift. The characters written by the author are super good. The description of the love between Luya and Draco is also super good. The plot is also super fascinating. Shao Shaodu, hehe, I like it.

Author, I love you! ! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The writing is so good! The plot is compact and coherent! The characters are full of characteristics! Anyway, it's so pretty! Too over the top! [Please update][Blow kiss]

This book is really good and very good.

It's very beautiful and makes people full of imagination about the subsequent plot. The plot style also fits my aesthetic very well. The character design of Luya is also very good. Especially Lie's subsequent articles made me change my view of him. It's so beautiful, why is it only 7:09? >O<In my heart, he is perfect? Why does he only have 7:09? How could he only have 7:09? How can such a beautiful book only have a score of 7:9? I don't care about him, he must be perfect

This book is very good😊The characterization is very good, but it's a little lacking [crying] Please give the author more updates [shy]

It's okay. The Snake Garden is very united and regards Lu Ya as his highness. He is so good. The people in Tulip are very strong and it is a warm family. There is CP but the emotional line does not have a beginning and an end, and the development is not very clear. It is a bit insufficient...? . Lie (seems to have red and slightly curly long hair), Jin (a pity, ugh), Edward (a very cute child), Qiangwei (or Wei?) There are many original creators (not just the ones I listed), but I think they are okay. Maybe some of the plots in this article are a bit jumpy...? But I personally think it's okay overall

It's so beautiful. I cried while watching it.

Wow, this book is so awesome (ﾉ>ω<)ﾉ The plot is interlocking and super attractive! Every character is lifelike (◠‿◠✿) The writing style is delicate and top-notch, and the emojis are so strong that it's for all book lovers ^⌯𖥦⌯^ ੭!!!

It's very interesting. Except for the emotional line, which is a little bit unclear, everything else is fine. And the story of the protagonist's childhood is a little bit sadistic, but it's actually not bad. Relatively speaking, there is no irony.

DaDa's writing is super good. I like it very much. Each of DaDa's original characters is very unique and very thoughtful. This book of Slytherin is really warm and amazing. I saw the unity of the little snakes to the outside world. Thank you for your hard work. Keep up the good work! ! !

This book is not bad! There is CP, two male protagonists, fan fiction, laughter with tears, and a happy ending. Some of the settings are novel, some of the writing is good, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The male protagonist is lively and cheerful, naughty and cute, clever, calm and decisive, kind and protective, and powerful. Great, keep up the good work^O^~

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] I really love the character of the protagonist.

Super pretty! ! ! It's sadistic and strong, but there are too few emotional lines in the early stage, which made me forget that this is a double male protagonist.

It's very beautiful, I like it so much, Luya really loves it [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Love it (●♡∀♡). It's the only book that I was willing to read during the book shortage. I also saw the updated book, but I don't understand some parts. Maybe it's because I read it faster, and it's because I didn't finish the original book. But it is really beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. The knife is really bad to me, but the emotional line is also very sweet. It is really worth watching [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]

The author's writing style is very good. This book is very beautiful.

It's super, super, super good-looking. I believe I want to watch it again n times after watching it. [Please update]

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful [sending my heart] [please update] Forgive me for being uneducated, I can only say good-looking