The Little Zombie of Bubu Lu's Feelings

The writing is good, the writing style is okay, and the characters are quite faithful to the game. But author, you have to think carefully about whether you are sure to write the first person. Fan fiction generally writes in the third person to better lay out the plot and promote the development of the story. Now, the author, you use the first person. Although the content of the story is good, what should you write next, author? I finally found the second Qiqi article. Can the author please stop hastily ending? Please≧≦

There are bright spots and poisonous spots. It's okay, but the slightly confusing narrative stopped me. And I don't think it ends well. Also, the first person narration is not very suitable.

Yes, what kind of ending is this!

Thank you for your hard work, I just feel like the Traveler is too weak to fight against the Abyss Mage, so many cards will be lost.