Pokemon: This Ash Is Way Too Strong

My own, give me a good review, hehehe

Looks ok, multiple female leads?

Shout out loud with me, I really like the two heroines, both Xiaoguang and Serena.

I like the idea. However, the plot is very similar to the original content. If you add a different angle to the same plot, it will bring a different viewing experience. I hope to focus more on describing the changes brought about after rebirth, such as the difference in strength and experience. For example, Xiaoguang did not fall into the glamor trap. He is obviously a newcomer but shows the understanding of a senior trainer; The difference in inner strength, such as when facing Qingmei, Xiaoguang responded to Qingmei's teasing in a more mature way that was different from Qingmei's perception; In the psychological game with Xiaozhi, including the counter-punch shield displayed by Xiaozhi and other skills jointly developed with Xiaozhi, combined with Xiaozhi's own rebirth experience and the more mature Xiaozhi, Xiaozhi should reasonably suspect that he may be reborn, and then conduct trials or interactions based on this, and the same goes for Xiaozhi. As for the driving force of the plot, I don't know what the author's plan is, at least I can't tell it now. If there is no arrangement, it is still recommended to have a plot promoter, such as why there is rebirth. The reason for exploring is a plot promoter. This is relatively simple. If it doesn't work, just push it all to the alpaca. Then everyone has a certain wish or purpose as a small promoter, such as Xiaozhi defeating the beast man, Xiaoguang winning the gorgeous celebration (taking Xiaozhi (×)), In this way, in the big main line, everyone has their own branch line, and the whole book will look much fuller. As for the specific choice of main line and branch line, it depends on the author's idea, but I don't recommend it if there is no story line at all.

It can be seen that you are a newbie. Come on, I suggest you add more detailed descriptions and original plots. For example, poachers, power outages, fishing, and kidnapping cases.

Does the author have any CP? Multiple heroines or single heroine?

I think the heroine should either accept none or all of them. I always feel that if you accept a few, it won't be perfect if you don't accept a few. I want to ask about the subjugation of Latias, Dianxi, Gardevoir, Menas, Ibrahimovic, Shemi, and Celebi?

The main heroine is Xiaoguang, Shalina and Xiaoyao, or there are two heroines, Xiaoguang and Shalina.

Mark The original Ash Ketchum Reborn starts from Sinnoh. There's La Lulas and 2-3 female protagonists. Updates have been discontinued. .

Wifemon Gardevoir won't arrange one for Xiaozhi 🙂