God of Time: I Became a God by Rewriting the Past

It's very well written, but a bit short.

Goldfinger is very perverted. It mainly depends on the author's imagination. If you dare to give it, it will be an upgrade story. You can basically treat the protagonist as Emperor Ye Tian. If you dare to give it, it will be an invincible story. Let me do it. I have a hundred ways to make the protagonist directly invincible and become Gu Chensha [please take a closer look]

It's nice to read, and there's no fancy language. I like to read the type of article. I hope the author will write more, with strict logic. The structure is clear, and the title attracted me. The language of the article is plain and simple, concise and easy to understand, and it attracts people's imagination. I suggest you add more descriptions of the environment, so that you can be immersed in the situation. PS: The main topic is a reading question that I have been doing for a long time. Now when I read and write the article, the first thought that comes to my mind is appreciation. The second thought is: description of the environment, throughout the whole text, what kind of atmosphere is set off... Well, I have no words. In order to show that I have literary talent, I decided to attach my own summary of appreciation methods (3 excerpts) (Note: It is not applicable to all, it needs to be combined with specific analysis) ①The role of clues The article uses "..." As a clue + summarizes the content of the article + runs through the whole text; the logic is strict and the structure is compact, making the article coherent; the side highlights the main idea of "..."/Strengthens the main idea of the article and sublimates the theme of the article ②The role of the title Explain the object/place/time/… of the writing of the article; set up suspense to attract readers' interest in reading; introduce the following and pave the way for the following… to make the context of the article clear; point out the main purpose of the article and sublimate the theme of the article. ③The function of the first paragraph (the last paragraph is reversed) The title at the beginning of the chapter refers to the title; it controls the entire article and guides the rest of the article; it connects the previous and the following and leads to the rest of the chapter; it exaggerates the atmosphere and sets the tone; it highlights the theme and adds the finishing touch.

It's okay. Once the word count comes up, there should be more people.

I feel like there are some bugs, but it looks okay. Come on, author.

I feel like the previous one is pretty good. Maybe it's because I don't have that much demand for a male protagonist in a video. I think as long as the protagonist is strong, it's fine. As long as there aren't too many villains that exceed his strength and cause harm to him, I don't care so much. As long as he's strong. However, I highly recommend speeding up the protagonist's upgrade speed! And hang! Turn it up! They are all time travellers! Souls can pass through space cracks and reach other worlds, so it shouldn't be upgraded so slowly! More than 100 chapters and still first level! I just want the next one to be bigger. Also, there can be female characters, but please don't have weird and ambiguous plots, and the appearance rate shouldn't be too high. This will make people uncomfortable and have the feeling of a harem novel.

Is there a female protagonist? If there is more or less, the one who heals the Lin family will still be the Purple World.

Not bad, but the number of words is too few and not enough to read. [Full] [full] [full]

My comments are at the end of the book, so I won't repeat them. In short, I recommend reading this. There are quite a few bad points, but there are no big problems. How come this kind of book only has a 6.3 Rating? Okay, maybe I'm okay, maybe I'm the only one who likes it [thinking]

Come on, author! I feel like the writing is pretty good, and it's quite in line with my preferences. But I found that several of the author's books seemed to have no scores, and this one only had a score of six points. Others don't even have ratings. But I feel that the writing is quite good, and the author is an experienced one. I also read the next book. I hope the author will continue to work hard and he will achieve results if he persists.

The author wrote it very well, but could he change the sword technique to sword technique?

From the perspective of enjoyable writing, it's pretty good. I don't care about anything else, as long as it's enjoyable to read.

It looked good, but the ending was too fast. I thought there was more, wasn't there an innate holy body that wasn't written according to the introduction? There is still a lot of content that has not been written yet! Why did the author abandon the article?

I think that's okay, kids.

Pretty good, very good-looking

Hahahahahahaha

1. Awesome 2. Awesome 3. Come on

I think this novel is very good, but why does it have such a low rating? ?

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

Come on, the writing is good, I hope there will be more talents in the future

In fact, this cool article is very, very good to read, but it is so short.

Facts aside, it is indeed well written.

Good, good, good

Okay, but a little short.

Not bad, progress is too fast later on

Yes, yes, this novel is really good

The unique theoretical system and the magical and ingenious structure are so exciting! It's rarely written in such detail! The description of the realm, potential, and principle is looking forward to the author's imagination! Saw SSS one day!

You can read it as a cool article. The score shouldn't be so low.

It's great, the ability development is well written, but I wish it could be a little more in-depth.

It's a great novel, but the character creation is not very good. I have no impression of other characters after reading it, but it is still very good. I want to see the protagonist be arbitrary for eternity.