Surviving on a Raft with My Neighbor's Brother

Although the writing and plot are still very immature, I admire the author for writing such an article that he likes because he likes it. It's so awesome. There is really no such thing as two male protagonists trying to survive. I like it very much. Thank you for your efforts [shy]

Five stars for encouragement. You can tell from reading the article that the author is a newbie and the writing is okay, but it feels a bit like reading a diary, a bit of a running account 😂😂😂

It's quite good. There are too few of this type. The protagonist is also very sweet.

It's good. I encourage you a lot. I just hope the plot has more ups and downs. It's a little too bland at the moment (for example, there will be a version event, a limited time mission, a multi-person limited time cruise at sea, etc.) Come on! ! ! ＾0＾~There is still a lot of room for improvement [Sending my heart]

Yes, the subject matter is novel and very sweet. The only drawback is that it is a bit confusing, but it is still a great book!

There are many words without double quotation marks, it feels like the sound is muted [laughing and crying]

It's a little bit like a running account, and what can I say about the dialogue between the two male protagonists? It's not very natural. Although raft survival stories are common, there are very few dual-male protagonists, so the content is relatively novel. Other than that, the overall story is pretty good. I hope the author will keep up the good work! Come on!

The writing style is plain, and the article has a eloquent feeling. It is very smooth. It is a very novel subject matter, but it is similar to farming articles. I like it 😍. The emotional line of the protagonist is very smooth, and the way they get along is very comfortable. They respect each other and understand each other. The protagonist has a little aura, but it is actually easy to ignore. The emotional line is neat and not procrastinating. The protagonist has a distinct personality and does not suffer from the female protagonist. I really like it.

It's really nice to read this kind of light-hearted sweet story. I really like it. It doesn't have a lot of fighting space, like farming, but I still don't particularly like farming? This kind is particularly good. It's really suitable for listening to while sleeping. But I won't reveal the written content. Let's just read it slowly. I won't talk about the main content of the secretary. But it's really super, super, super good to read. I highly recommend the two men. I'll add one more sentence to the sea survival story. You must read it if you like the sweet story about two male protagonists at sea.

It's good to watch. There are too few double male protagonists in the natural disaster genre, and the author is really good at writing. The quality is guaranteed.

It's good, but I'm a little tired from reading it. It feels like I'm reading a text. The world becomes quiet when I watch it. It always feels like they are communicating with their thoughts [covers face] without saying a word.

I like the overall plot, this slow pace, with a lover by my side, but it is too detailed about the gardens and seascapes. The male protagonist is agitated several times because he has no materials and pursues art too much. Maybe they have the materials, otherwise it would not be so leisurely.

Indeed, this article is quite bland, and it feels a bit flowing, but this kind of subject matter is indeed rare. When you are in a book shortage and don't know what to read, you can read it. It is good to kill time.

I haven't found this type of novel with two male protagonists before, it's pretty good [Chigua] There are many typos and the content is relatively daily and bland. I like [Chigua] very much.

It looks good. I feel that the author has many more detailed descriptions when writing. It is a bit like a text in a book, and it is very fluent. The descriptions are not like wording at all, and the author has also written a lot of popular science.

There are no quotation marks when speaking. It seems so difficult.

Daily survival articles. If you like this kind of article, you can read it. It looks good because it is being serialized◐▂◐ The two male protagonists are together at the beginning. Not the Virgin. The whole story is about the daily life of exploring on a raft. It is relatively warm and plain. The survival channel does not have too much description. Most of it is about trading and exchanging materials and there is less conflict. If you like excitement and slap the boss in the face, you can quit.

The plot tends to be dull, but it has a sense of life. The main character in some chapters does not have double quotation marks when speaking. It looks a bit weird [laughing], but it's okay.

It's okay, it's just a relatively bland little sweet article, I think [send heartfelt]

It's very good to read, it has a plain and narrated feel, it's a bit of a novel, but there are some personal things that the author brings in. Well, the author still understands me. [Admiration] If you like to focus on farming and life, I really recommend it. Anyway, I have read too many plots with intense ups and downs. It's really good to take a break from reading this book [laughs] Overall, it is highly recommended [love] [love] [love]

There are quite a lot of storylines, but it is a very bland drama. The adventure theme is written as a drama. I hope the author can add more and the adventure plot will be more attractive.

I read it one after another for two or three days, and it was pretty good. Although it directly evolved into a farming survival encyclopedia, it was still interesting. The author keeps up the good work [Sending my heart] [Note]

It's a long-running book that I like very much. It's overall mediocre. The writing may not be that mature, but the plot is very attractive. For me, it's a book that can't hide its flaws. I stayed up late to read this book. I look forward to the author's writing skills improving even more.

It's not bad, it's good-looking, but it gives people the feeling that the protagonist is very miserable, but he doesn't know where the misery is. It feels like he's writing an essay. The pace is quite slow. I've only read a few chapters, and almost no one else appears. The two protagonists are interacting, which is quite sweet. There are very few topics on this subject, and the author is great [Blow a kiss]

Others' Island Stories: Thrills and Excitements, The Author's Island Stories: Popular Science and Wholesale

Great job! ! !

After looking at it for a long time, it's only one-sixth

Very beautiful, and there are very few of this type. Two men

It looks good now, I like it very much, but it's not finished yet. Come on, keep updating! Support, five stars!

The author writes very well. Perfect for my needs. The relationship between the two protagonists is also very sweet.