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The enemy that day was scoliosis. The butterfly of that day remains on the other side. On that day, the cat was elbowed and flew to the door and could no longer be so angry and mischievous. Such a big person turned into a bracelet. The flattest shape is more sighing. The one-eyed professor is cruel and merciless, and he rips out both the heart and the liver. At the end of the west wind, there is also Tiningtian who has a split character. The West Wind Qi Die group is offline one by one, how do you want me to play?

Not bad, not bad, very good. Come on, author.

I still feel pretty good, at least I don't feel like I'm falling apart. Well, I take back what I said before. So far, it's okay, but the author needs to change some things. The author is considered a semi-newbie, so it's barely acceptable.

Well, it's not easy to write this book, but the characters are indeed a bit OOC. The description of Jingliu's inner thoughts and behavior as a criminal is off-kilter (around chapter 22, it says "I play myself," so it's the real person), and he's overly concerned about Yanqing, and keeps calling him "disciple". Normal people wouldn't talk like that, let alone who is Jingliu (๑´0`๑). And Jing Yuan, as a general, after Yun Wu passed away, he put aside his personal grudges long ago and focused on Luo Fu. It is also described in the plot that he will not always call him master, even if he is not involved in Luo Fu in the forbidden area, he will not call him like this. The most likely reason is to alienate some exchanges with a cold tone. I actually couldn't stand it when I saw this. I couldn't bear it before, but I really can't bear it here (o_ _)ﾉ. After abandoning the article for several days, I have been thinking about whether to come back and comment on it, but I still want to say it. However, the article that can write so many words is very powerful, so I give it four stars. If there is a next book, try not to deviate too much from the character (°ー°). After all, it is not time travel or role-playing (in fact, even if it is, it is best not to)

Good looking, love to read, watch more ૧(●´৺`●)૭૧(●´৺`●)૭

To be honest, this book is quite good, but I don't understand why the rating is so low. I passed by it several times without clicking in to read it [crying]. If I hadn't noticed that there were more than 40,000 viewers, I would have missed it. [Laughs] I don't understand what this review is about. I have read 16 chapters of this book so far, and it is quite interesting. Kageryu himself stars in the role, and the character design is not broken. I recommend that all Kageryu chefs watch it [laughing]

The content is good but the characters are a bit shabby, but I still recommend watching it.

It's a very good book, but someone in the comment section said that the mirror flow is too simplistic.

For me, it's quite good-looking. I love reading. If you want to read mirror-flow fan fiction but can't find anything good, you can take a look.

Jingliu Baiheng is excellent.

Timeline. So messy, newbie? Come on, Second Innovation It's good but a little bit poisonous, it's okay [eat melon] [eat melon]

Not bad, the characterization fits the personality

Very good, the author should be a newbie. The plot is very interesting. The heroine character is very good. Not sloppy.

It's okay, at least the mirror style is maintained well

Beautiful, love watching (/≧▽≦/) However, if you dare to run, author, I dare to give you one star. ()Hmph [punch hard]

Come on, come on, come on, come on!

It's beautiful. Please order more.

Not bad, you can take a look

It looks good, I love watching it, I love watching it! ! !

One word, shameless, really shameless

It was beautiful, and it ended so quickly.

It looks good, I love watching it, I like watching it, I keep watching it [Chigua]

Very good very good! ! ! ! ! ! The protagonist is very mirror-like

It's fun to watch, not bad, and the comment section is also very harmonious [laughs] [blowing kisses]

Not much to say about five-star reviews

Not bad, a lot of fun

Good, good, good

I forgot to give a good review [smile]

The battle process was exciting, not bad

Very pretty, okay?