Naruto: This Is the Tailed Beast

No matter what, the writing style is definitely good. It feels good. Although it's different from what I imagined, it's still good.

Infatuated demon, please wait another life

Very, very, very beautiful! ! ! The author updates frequently! ! ! ! ! ! !

The first 20 chapters are short, but they make a perfect start for the whole book. They record the life of Hui Li accompanying Yuyi, Indra, and Asura. I really feel the brevity of life and death in it. By the way, the middle chapter of the male protagonist who changed the world of Naruto should be written in detail.

The author's writing style is very good and the plot is very novel. I have never seen this type of Naruto story before. The shortcoming is that there are too few. I finished it in a short time.

It's very good to read, and the emotional aspects are well written. I finished reading it in less than a day. The CP is Madara, but the thing that moved me to tears the most was Indra's words "I like you" when he died of old age. The life span theory is very difficult to understand. The characterization is also very good. Although it may be different from the original work, this is the charm of the fandom∽, so it is still recommended to watch it😋

Overall, it's good, and the plot control is moderate. The main thing is that each character is very unique. Among all the novels of the same type that I have read, your emotional line is really well written and not obtrusive to me. However, I feel that the Warring States period is a bit less written. After all, the protagonist is Madara, but it is understandable in order to promote the plot. I hope that the male protagonist can return to the factory in the future. I hope the author will get better and better, but don't be lazy (touch your head)

There are many problems with the subsequent branch plot. First, as far as I know, Madara should start the fight first and use illusions during the fight. Second, the illusion technique is not a puppet technique. It cannot directly control the body. It only disrupts chakra and makes people hallucinate. It is effective against tailed beasts because tailed beasts are composed of chakra. There is no effective countermeasure. However, the protagonist has aura and should not be affected. No matter what, he will not be unable to control his body on the spot. Third, when Madara came out, he wanted to accompany the protagonist forever, and then he stopped looking for the protagonist? After controlling Kyuubi, I heard the protagonist's voice. If I can't find anyone when I go back, shouldn't I first suspect Kyuubi? Fourth, Kyuubi was awake when the two of them fought in the Valley of the End. At least after Akira Madara died, he must have had time to change into a human. Fifth, the Kyuubi can talk to the Jinchuuriki while it is sealed. The seal will definitely not be wrapped in chains. It can definitely move, and he can probably see what the Jinchuuriki sees, at least it is not a small dark room. In short, if you ignore these, the writing is not bad.

Not bad, not bad. I also want to read the literature of the era of Asura and Indra. The CP is spotty and the writing is quite good. I don't know if it is OOC or not. I am just a reader who loves to read fan fiction (the plot setting of the fan fiction is relatively complete. You will understand it after reading it a few times [Send my heart])

I was killed by a knife. I didn't expect the final ending to be like this. Unexpectedly, loyal love, love is hate, love and hate, and mutual survival. I didn't expect that the entire ninja world would be gone in the end. I haven't seen this type of novel for a long time. In the end, the protagonist still failed to protect everything he wanted to protect. Everything was just a dream. Fortunately, the extra chapters later made up for a little bit of sadness, but false ones are just fake extra chapters. Alas, how sweet and funny the front is, there are so many swords in the back. I was a little caught off guard [crying] [crying] [crying] Even if the history of the entire ninja world is changed, it still can't change the invasion of Otsutsuki. The power of Gray Glass in the past life should be very powerful. After all, changing any future requires corresponding power and price, but it can be seen that it is very weak. If it changes, it will be pulled back on track by the will of the world. The one who divides and hates only made some small changes. This butterfly will not cause a big storm in the end [almost crying]

Very beautiful, a theme I have never seen before

The five-star review is mainly to remind people who read it later that in fact, in my heart, this book cannot be called a five-star book. But in order to improve my own rating, I still give it five stars. It is mainly to remind people who are going to read this book and to prevent others from running away after seeing this low rating. For those who hate reading those who are in a dark state every day, have a secondary disease, and are stallions, this book is very suitable. Five points for writing, five points for fluency, five points for emotion, and five points for argument. All in all, highly recommended viewing. But this book also has some questions, which are explained below. But the three points I want to comment on are that the author prepared two lines. The first one is at the end of more than sixty chapters, which is too short. One is the end of Chapter 120, and the problem lies in this second line. In order not to spoil the story, I can only say that this second line, in order to fit the original work, lacks a lot of the author's own ideas, which is very unsatisfactory. So I listened to the author's advice and ran away after reading the synopsis left by the author.

It's quite attractive at the moment, but it's too short. I hope I can keep it up and not write it down in the future. Will the tailed beast be sealed in the future? Is the male protagonist Sasuke? I'll take care of you first and then watch, come on [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

This book is still worth recommending. The pace is moderate and it is comfortable to read. Especially in terms of characterization, I personally feel that it is very good. I hope the author will not pull it later [send heartfelt]

Madara and Kyuubi gave birth to a reincarnation-eyed fox [laughter]

In fact, I prefer to read Madara's fanfics, but I feel that there are still a few, and I saw that the author seemed to have changed the outline because someone was arguing [I almost cried] There is no way, it can't satisfy everyone's aesthetics, and the ending may be a bit hasty, because there is really nothing to write.

Really good to watch. Highly recommended. Really good to watch. Highly recommended. Really good to watch. Highly recommended. Say important things three times After so long, I came back and took a look, but I forgot to rate it. But when I saw the last few chapters, I thought I would write dozens or hundreds of chapters, but it just ended. I can only say that I felt a little disappointed after reading it.

This is one of the few books I like. I don't know why this book attracted me so much. I don't feel this way when reading other books. Come on, author, work hard! For our better tomorrow. Come on! TTTT

The character setting is relatively novel, and the characterization and plot are also interesting. The author has a strong desire to survive. The first he ending was written very quickly, the second be ending is also very good, and there are also quite exciting little extras. Super pretty.

The author is really great and successfully made me sink in. Really, the character of the heroine made me feel super comfortable. The plot of the story is very well written. The only shortcoming is: Too little! ! Come on, great author! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting. The heroine's character is really good. The plot is compact and not draggy.

I have no comments, so give me a five-star rating. Cheers to the author.

It looks good, but I still hope that the heroine can be with Indra, so can the author make a side story?

This book is also called: Ali and her animal friends [laughing]

The heroine is very vivid, but I didn't expect Kyuubi to be a girl in it, and Indraran didn't realize that she was a girl. At first I wanted to ask why girls are more beautiful? He didn't recognize it until later he remembered that males are more beautiful in nature.

The viewing experience is quite good, and the emotional foreshadowing is stable. I look forward to the following chapters [Eating Melon]

Very good! Very good! This is my favorite Naruto fanfic! Keep up the good work, author!

It's so beautiful [I'm about to cry] I've been following it for a long time, the subject matter is very novel, and the ending was so unexpected [crying]

The early writing is very nice, the subject matter is quite to my taste, the character of the protagonist is very distinct, and the plot is interesting and not too extreme. But later on, well, the plot may be affected by the author's character or mental state. I felt uncomfortable watching it ≥≤, but there is still some sugar that should be there.

When I first read it, I thought it was a novel about cultivating immortals, but after reading it, I realized that the character creation in this article is perfect, with almost no shortcomings. The author used the protagonist of this article - Gray Li to subvert my perception of the cruel and pitiful image of Nine Tails. The protagonist Gentle yet humane, he established deep friendships with Madara, Hashirama, and others during the Warring States Period. All in all, this book is worth reading.