A Farmwife's Journey Through the Apocalypse

In fact, you can divide the paragraphs of the article more clearly. You can look at how other famous authors divide paragraphs and try to imitate them. You write very well and have a sense of life. The reason why no one reads it may be that your choice of subject matter and the identity of the protagonist are outdated in the circle of young people (I think this does not represent everyone) But if you write carefully, middle-aged and elderly people may read it, but my mother has never read anything with this theme. The chapters I wrote basically have a beginning and an end, but the paragraphs and pronouns are a bit messy, which made me confused. Come on, blessings and opinions from a child

What the author wants to express is his ideal world. How should I put it? It's the end of the world. No matter how many years it takes, it will definitely be a chaotic world. He has lived in so many worlds, but he is still so simple. At the end of the world, it is good to go back to the past, or predict the future, and cooperate with the country, but well, I feel like he is too reasonable anyway. Thinking about it, it's not that his space is very big. It's especially unlimited. In the beginning, when he used space materials to save the market, it felt like his materials were unlimited. I think that's impossible. Just think about how many people are alive in the country and how many materials you have to save.

It looks good and has great characteristics. Well, I support the author to give the author a big five-star praise and write more exciting and diverse stories. The content of the story is compact and rich. Well, at the beginning of each short story, um, you tell the country, um, and work with the country to overcome difficulties. This is very good. The author will update it more. Come on, come on, look forward to you.

It's very dull, but it's amazing that I can finish it. I hope the author can work hard😊

It's good to read, but it's a little lacking. I really like reading novels about natural disasters and fast travel.

It's very interesting, and it's a very fast time travel. I hope to write more books like this.

From the details of this book, you can see the emotions and values ​​conveyed by the author. The writing may be immature, but it does not lack the author's expression of thoughts. Come on! It will get better and better!

Are there no advanced agricultural machines in this space in the West? Will the flying shaper go to the seaside? So beautiful, I'll give you more updates.

Very good work. Every world is wonderful. Only Earthquake World came close. But it's harmless. Just jump over.

Not bad, support the author