With a Three-Foot Sword in the Box on His Back, There Is No One in the World Who Cannot Be Killed

The traditional fantasy is quite good, the rhythm is very good, there is no delay or ambiguity, and the killing is decisive. Influenced by the early traditional fantasy, the characters written all retain their own characteristics, and there is no collective brainlessness. The single heroine is not ambiguous, which is much better than early fantasy. Early fantasy often deliberately shows off stupidity and sex, but this book retains the vividness of the characters in early fantasy and deliberately portrays the personality of the characters. It should produce some characters with particularly distinctive personalities. I would like to make some suggestions. In ancient times, the best thing about fantasy was the ability to use swords. Nowadays, the female protagonist and the male protagonist are definitely not good enough. However, occasionally using some supporting characters to enhance the atmosphere and create a turn of events can completely shake the tiredness of the plot. This is what the Sword and the Immortal series does. Adding some mysterious and weird foreshadowing... Can give readers more anticipation and desire to explore than the cliche dual-standard tearing between demons and monsters. The description of the battle scene is not enough. You can start by looking at the impact of moves on the environment, and some tricky perspectives must be taken into consideration. The writing and pacing are fine... It would be better if there were more decisive and hearty one-on-many killings from time to time.

It feels a bit like a potato, the writing is good, the main line of foreshadowing is clear, and the subplots are also interesting. I look forward to a million words. It's so beautiful. Let's see how long it lasts. How long?

The plot is compact and the writing is good. The inheritance written earlier is the Wine Sword Immortal Lord, but later it became the Red Dust Sword Immortal. There is a bit of conflict. I hope it can be changed. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more, and his works will become a hit! ! !

The writing is very good, keep up the hard work, it won't be enough if you haven't enjoyed it yet, I hope to write more

It feels like a fusion of many novels, giving me a very familiar feeling. The theme is quite engaging and pretty good.

It's so good, but the author is very slow in updating. A very nice book It's super nice, but the update is too slow. Can I update it 3 times a day? Recommend! ! ! !

Very nice. There is a section in the middle that is really ink-stained. The male lead grows up too slowly. There is still a lot to do. It's so difficult for the male and female protagonists to meet each other. If you don't want to watch the male protagonist's growth after the male and female protagonists separate, you can skip and watch. I hope the author will write better and better

It feels a bit like Jianlai. After watching the Jianlai anime and then reading this novel, it really made me feel like I was in the mirror. It was very immersive. It's just that this town's book is a bit slow to update. I still hope the author will update it soon.

I haven't read much of this book yet, so I took a look at the comment section, and flipped through the chapters about snatching a bride. At the beginning of chapter 65, I said that I need to find an opportunity to make it clear to that woman. Now it's over 200 chapters. Have you found the opportunity? Have you made it clear?

It's quite good, but there are a lot of mistakes. I hope the author can make corrections. Also, I hope the writing will be more passionate and innovative. Finally, I hope this novel will become a big hit, as good-looking as Tian Yuan and as passionate as Jian Lai. Then, the author will update it faster, 5 chapters a day [laugh][laugh][laugh]

I can only say that this book is one of the better-looking among the traditional fairy tales. Although it is step by step like traditional fantasy novels, its overall framework is not as rigid as traditional fantasy novels. It makes up for a lot of shortcomings, and it is not like that kind of formulaic novel. There are many innovations and a very novel feeling. Highly recommended.

In the early stage, the heroine was a guardian and fell in love with the protagonist. She was indeed a wife who needed to be taken care of in advance.

Very, very good. This is the best fantasy novel I have ever read.

How should I put it? If you look carefully, there is a hint of something similar to Yuan Zun. In short, this article is very well written. Please keep up the good work, the author.

It's very interesting. Please describe the characters clearly.

Overall, this book is quite good, and the instant noodles are quite thoughtful. I have a small comment for you, that is, the continuity between the front and back of this book is not very strong. For example, those classmates in Beihuang, or Lonely Sword, I have to mention it, and isn't there a Sendai realm soul in Ping An's body? Maybe I forgot about it after looking at it, but I have to mention it even if it disappeared. Or maybe the sword spirit of Hongchen Sword disappeared later. Doesn't it mean that it can be restored? Also, this combat power is a bit confusing. I think it can be explained. That is to say, the Lonely Sword can go to the extraterritorial battlefield, but those big guys also go to the extraterritorial battlefield, and some of them have died. Regarding the extraterritorial battlefield, you can mention... Beihuang is the starting point of the protagonist after all. It cannot be because Now that the protagonist has become stronger, I won't mention it at all. I can also mention the path to unparalleled nirvana. Otherwise, I won't be able to continue writing the more I mention the combat power later. I can explain the general process first, so that it will be easier to write later. In short, I still hope that this book will get better and better, instant noodles, come on!

Looks good, but looks a bit like a Xiao family genius, hahaha

It's quite good to read, sometimes it's explosive, and sometimes it's sensational. It's a good book.

There was the shadow of Yuan Zun in the front, and now there is the shadow of Tian Yuan.

It's been 2 years since I read it and it still hasn't been finished. Now the protagonist has just reached death from the Mysterious Realm to the Great Emperor Realm. I don't know when. I hope the author will update more.

The content is pretty good, keep up the good work! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

The plot is very good, a traditional fantasy novel.

It's a rare good-looking old fantasy, very comfortable, with a single female protagonist. Give 5 stars to the author 🔥 and take a look at the reading time [Thinking] [Laughing]

Zundu is good-looking, not brainless, and not ambiguous with the female co-star. It's good-looking and I love watching it!

In fact, this book is quite good, but some fools keep asking whether the heroine's surname is Liu or Shen [laughing and crying]

This feeling is unprecedented and may help me escape from the loneliness in this world.

Very good looking, I hope the heroine appears more often

It's very beautiful. The relationship between the heroine and the hero is also very good. I've been following it till now. It's a fantasy book that I like very much.

A relatively good novel, it has the feeling of a combination of fighting and martial arts.

It's so beautiful. The plot is complicated and confusing without losing the elegance of the article. I love it.