Traveling Through Another World with Portable Games

For now, it deserves a 5-star rating. The protagonist's mentality has grown through experience, and he is decisive in killing. I don't know if there will be CP. After all, the protagonist is a female protagonist, and I personally don't recommend CP.

I really like the exciting stories about the heroine. The golden finger is quite big, but not to the point where you are instantly invincible like in some stories. You can feel the bigness but it is appropriate. The progress is just right to make people feel happy all the time, and the plot is not out of line, and there is no such thing as a plot that does not end after dozens of chapters. Really like it It's a mess, don't read it, there's so much foreshadowing, the plot is halfway through, and the last chapter is the finale. The outline is more words than yours in one chapter.

So far, it looks very interesting and not toxic at all. It really has a game perspective and a strong sense of immersion. The most fearful thing about this kind of novel is that it will collapse. And it's easy to fall apart. I don't know when a game setting I wrote will finally be logically consistent with the subsequent chapters and never come back. Anyway, cheers for the author, it's quite interesting and I don't want it to collapse. The very interesting point is that the heroine does a lot of things for mission rewards and upgrades, and does not think that the heroine is a virgin or anything like that. This kind of setting is not easy to break the plot, but it is very easy to break the game setting. Moreover, the heroine is also very decisive and cautious, and will not bluff or act stupid or childish. Overall good. Come on, author, be careful not to crash the game settings.

It was quite interesting in the early stage, but later on it felt like the author wanted to end it quickly. The progress bar of the story was just halfway through, but it came to the end in a blink of an eye. There were still a lot of holes to fill in, and many of the foreshadowings in the early stage were not effective. I just finished it in a hasty stroke [I almost cried] It is worth reading. I suggest that you write a follow-up after reading it and send it to me in the book circle. (I have many ideas, but my writing skills are not good, so I can't write them [face covering]) Ahhhh w(ﾟДﾟ)w, the early writing is really good! ! ! Why did it end so hastily? ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

I have read the latest one, it is generally good, but the plot is not good, and it is a little bit poisonous. For example, there is no follow-up on the disposal of the items obtained from the mission, and there is also the cold-bloodedness and exploitation between people. That Wang Juan is really full of twists and turns. Fortunately, she is not always rewarded for being a "nanny". The same goes for that apprentice, tsk tsk, just using him. Fortunately, it feels better to think that the heroine is on a mission. It would be better if the gangs started to recruit people there to look better and feel a little bit more refreshed. Let me tell you something, this game system is really powerful

I don't understand why the score is so low, but my writing is better than many scores of 9. The plot is compact and the plot is reasonable. The heroine's character is decisive and not like a virgin. It suits my taste very well. It's beautiful and deserves a five-star rating. The writing is very good and the plot is novel. But it is obvious that the cliffhanger ended quickly. What a pity ah ah ah ah

Beautiful, very beautiful! I want to ask if there is a male protagonist?

The pace is appropriate, the main plot is not sluggish, and there are no annoying embarrassing scenes so far. It fits the subject matter. It is one of the few articles of this type that I can continue to read. However, I feel that the characterization is a bit thin. I hope that there will be more character events in the follow-up to improve the character image. If the protagonist is a lone wolf, upgrade and change the map, just pretend that I didn't say anything. Finally, I'm urging you to update it. It's so good that if you like it, you'll want to read it again [Sending my heart]

It's so exciting for the heroine to travel through the past with the game system. Others have worked hard to practice. The heroine can upgrade as long as she completes the tasks released by the game. In the early stage, the heroine was a little trembling kind of person. She faced beings that were stronger than her. Fortunately, the game system upgraded quickly. She ran tasks while collecting garbage and decomposing it in the early stage. Finally, her realm improved greatly. When she first started to establish the gang, she took in Aunt Wang. I was not very happy. Later, the gang took in some people and watched the gang become more and more powerful. Very happy for the heroine I just didn't expect the ending to be so sudden. The villain was quickly defeated and that's the end. I haven't seen the heroine carry the gang forward yet.

Why is it so short😟? According to the previous rhythm, there should be at least a thousand chapters. Why is it so short😟The content is very good and the pace is well grasped. I also thought about saving up to read it. It took me a month to save more than a dozen chapters. I originally wanted to see if the author stopped updating, but please tell me it's finished🥴

I really like the author's story structure and game system. Many of the settings are also very interesting. It's a pity that there is not much ink. The ending is also a bit rushed. I feel that I have just begun to slowly understand the Bahuang Continent and I have already read more than half of the article. The heroine encountered a lot of calculations in Bahuang, as well as mixed dangers and opportunities. It was not until the end that she met the Lord of the Saint. The power of the Lord made people feel that his death was too hasty, but maybe it was because he was almost invincible that he underestimated the enemy, which led to his defeat and death.

OMG my family, read the book that made me discover a treasure. First of all, the heroine knows about dogs, and secondly, wow, she is invincible in the same realm and can cross the realm to fight and crush her, and then. And as long as you level up, you will become much more powerful than others. It's really cool. It's really a little bit cool in the early stage, but it's okay. It feels really cool after watching it.

The game system is very strong, and the heroine is not weak either. The plot is an upgrade-to-gang style, and the communication between the characters is very direct. There is no word count like "acting like a baby and asking for a hug and a lift". Thumbs up! ! It's a pity that it's too early to read, there are only one hundred chapters. . . . . . . . . . . .

It's very interesting. I've finished reading the latest chapter. Oh, please update it soon. I hope it will always be free of censorship, strong women, and no trash men are worthy of the heroine.

No, no, no, this one is so pretty, it's not good enough at all. The character of the protagonist is very good. He doesn't trust others all the time, and he doesn't help others unconditionally. He feels a bit like a nurturing character. He is not a virgin and is decisive in killing people. I really like the content, but I just don't like Meditation a little bit. I feel that the content should be very complicated and long. I prefer short, brainless novels. But I really like the setting of this game panel, and it's hard to find a good-looking one. I like it so much. I beg the author to make it faster. I want to read more before the summer vacation ends. No wonder, it turns out that the book "I Became a Mountain God After Feeding the Villain" was also written by this author. I really liked that book too, but it ended too quickly. I'm really looking forward to this one.

I really like this theme [full][full]

Let more people come and see it! The author's writing is really good, but the ending is too sloppy, and the last chapter is just an outline. However, it does not affect viewing overall. I hope more and more people will read it and the author will continue writing from chapter 124 onwards.

Except for the finale, it's really, really, really, really exciting. ，，， Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh

The beginning has a good intention and is refreshing. It is much better than other saints or fairy tales where everyone is friends. The human nature written is more real. There will be no pure white humanity and no pure black humanity. However, many rewards in the process have been skipped. The ending is a bit too sloppy, as if there is no inspiration to write. However, this setting is really difficult to write and requires the author's super high brain cell work and imagination. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create better and more touching works [laughs]

Upgraded Liushuang article, the short length and fast pace may make it seem a bit streamlined. The routines are relatively old, but it is fun to read. The three views are not correct, and it is a typical jungle-eating-the-strong-escape-type different world setting, but there are no three-way jokes, and the heroine is also decisive in killing without procrastination, which gives a good impression. The overall evaluation is okay. If I could reduce it to half a star, I would give it 4.5 Points.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Super pretty! The protagonist is a serious player, not a virgin. What a cool article! Okay, I know why such a beautiful book has such a low rating. It ends in an anticlimax and ends suddenly and in a hurry. However, the first 98% are well written and worth reading.

What about the most exciting battle? Destroyed in one sentence? ? ? ? ? [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] What's the last option? One is that you can live with your family right away, but the time is only a hundred years. The other is that losing the system and retaining the lifeline of cultivation is a long time, but resurrecting the family is far away. After all, it is unknown how much power Tiandao needs to restore for repair and resurrection. I guess I can be satisfied with what I choose right now. After all, if it takes too long, I will forget

I feel it's okay, but I might not be able to write the finale. I just wrote a rough outline of the process and ending and ended it directly. It's not particularly forced. After all, there is an outline, but the process is gone and it's summarized in one step.

I didn't pay attention and thought it was a serialized article with more than 100 chapters. I didn't expect it to be a completed article. People who have seen the end will probably say that the ending is too hasty. The early stage is quite interesting. It is very exciting to use the cognitive gap of the game system to start an interactive dialogue with NPCs. The things that are taken out with a wave of the hand are very impressive, and the little thoughts of each person are also very rich. The plot involving the villain at the end was also very interesting, and it would have been better if it had been lengthened a little longer.

The writing is great. I like it very much in every aspect. Why did it end so hastily? I think if I can finish it well, it will definitely be very popular.

It looks really good so far. Different from other fairy tales, Wei Qun likes me very much [Adoration][Adoration] The heroine will be killed without mercy hahaha. I like it😍 There are no brainless characters. I have read so many fairy tales. This is the most refreshing. I hope it will not collapse in the future. The author must insist on writing and not waste a good book [Thoughts]

Dear author, I advise you to update quickly! There are not even 100 chapters. How can you sleep at night with a newborn like this? (Why are all the beautiful things I've met recently been newborns! [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry])

It's beautiful. There are so many of them these days. It's so enjoyable to watch.

The female protagonist game system creates a gang and fights against another Blue Star traveler, the Ming Cult (take people's bones and repair their souls). The story was okay, but it was too short, and suddenly and inexplicably came to a finale. It can only be said that it is better than the eunuch.