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This is a very down-to-earth cultivation novel with human connections. It is not like the previous fake and overly suppressed cultivation novels. Readers who like simplicity and seriousness can definitely read it. It does not have the routine of infinite matryoshka dolls. It is always a natural transition of survival in the cracks. It is not like boasting. Zhang's Golden Finger protagonist's routine doesn't have the heart of a saint. His attacks are ruthless and decisive, and the description of the shaking scenes is wonderful. He doesn't show off his skills or has the lackluster and perfunctory writing style of a talentless man. It's a pity that I finished reading it overnight, and now I have to look for it again. If any book friends who like similar novels can recommend similar ones to me, I would be very grateful.

Good book, good writing, good plot, good characters, except for the routine of Shengxian Linglue, everything else is very good, but it is a pity that it is not available on Tomato

Looks good. Update soon. This is a normal novel. Much better than those mindless Wai Wai Wai Wai who always rely on system cheats.

I like it very much. Among tomatoes, it is regarded as the clear stream of cultivating immortals.

I think it's okay, it's pretty good-looking, and it's much better-looking than other fairy tales anyway! ! !

I finished reading this rare good book in one day. I hope it will be updated soon. I really like the character of the main character, who is affectionate and down-to-earth. After seeing too many ruthless and unjust protagonists, I still felt very happy reading the protagonist in this book. It was really cool to hold a gun and fight against everyone in the secret realm, especially the protagonist who has never lost in a fight. He is a slow-burning but not boring type. The disadvantage is that the update is too slow.

Very good, the writing is smooth, the scenarios are close to reality and the logic is reasonable. It would be better if the protagonist is not a time traveler, because the article shows that the protagonist is a novice as the starting point (the article does not specify what age he was when he time traveled)

It's super good-looking, a very exciting traditional fantasy, but the protagonist looks like a native and doesn't look like someone from time travel at all. I don't know why this setting was added.

I quite like this. The writing is good and the plot is good.

Five stars is fine, the protagonist is very good, but the portrayal of the supporting characters is unsatisfactory. How can I put it, greatly weakening the presence of the supporting characters will make readers feel that the protagonist has always been alone, and sometimes they can't understand why the protagonist has been cultivating immortality. He clearly has not shown his fanatical pursuit of power and immortality. Therefore, I hope to strengthen the presence of a certain character, let him form a bond with the protagonist, and use this bond to guide the protagonist forward.

This one is really good-looking, but the update is a little slow. Other mortal streams have a huge opportunity at the beginning. I don't know if they are mortal streams. This one is different. I don't know how to say it. Anyway, it just feels good.

It's not a no-brainer. The protagonist has a charming personality, is low-key when nothing happens, and is decisive when it's time to take action. Be tender to your relatives and friends, but ruthless to your enemies. The early stages of the novel are immature and have some minor flaws, but nothing major. The more you write later, the better. The overall quality is top-notch among all the novels about cultivating immortals that I have read.

A good read and a good book. I haven't read such a good fantasy novel in a long time. It's fast and new.

A very good novel. The rating is low, but it could be rated 9.2 Or above. Good luck to the author! Read all comments: The author can reflect upon this: I suggest changing the title and introduction of the book! Obviously the author is talented, but he insists on tempting everyone to read the introduction and come in to read the book! The result is such a low score that I can't bear to look at it!

The writing is so real. It depicts a little person who has average talent and background, but is extremely determined to seek the truth. He struggles in the world of immortality, climbs up step by step, and finally becomes a senior from an ant.

The book is good, it has its own system, it is a slow-burning novel, and you grow up step by step. Some of the difficulties of the protagonist in the book are well laid out, and there is nothing particularly abrupt. However, this book is not a fun novel. Those who like slow-burning growth or those who are short on books can calm down and read it.

It's wonderful and wonderful. I didn't really want to read it after reading the introduction. After reading a few chapters, it was quite interesting (the story is good). I just felt that the protagonist was too miserable and there was no master who was really good to him.

This book is very well written from here to now. It's not invincible, nor is it a cool novel. I like this type of writing very much, and the author can keep it up. Many novels are good at the beginning, but the protagonist becomes invincible again at the end. The protagonist gets all the benefits, but this book is different. The protagonist knows how to do what he can. The reason why he has the current strength is because he has cultivated step by step. I hope he can continue to maintain it in the future.

It can be regarded as Goudao-ryu and Qiyun-ryu. Currently, there is no golden finger or a female protagonist. The male protagonist is still quite good and has a lot of love and righteousness, but it is too boring. The plot is full of big poisons rather than small ones. There are more logical loopholes. Overall, it is still watchable.

A good book, much better than those mindless novices and time travel novels. The more than 200 chapters in the early stage can be regarded as the best among ordinary people. I hope the author will not be impatient and strive to become a classic.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking traditional novel about cultivating immortals. Although it's slow to catch on, it still feels like I used to read Immortal Rebellion. Come on!

I think the writing is quite good. I hope the writing will be better in the future. I didn't charge money, didn't charge money, didn't charge money. I said important things three times [laughter]

Good book, worth reading. The plot is compact, the characters are well-defined, and there are no poisonous points. It is a rare good book in Tomato.

The theme is clear, the content is vivid, detailed and fascinating.

It is cleverly conceived and is one of the best among the articles about cultivating immortals. It would be even more perfect if it were updated quickly.

It feels like reading Er Gen's novel ten years ago. Old-school immortal novels such as "I Want to Seal the Heaven" and "The Rebellion of Immortals" have a sense of familiarity and are well written. Good luck to the author.

It is a very ordinary novel. In the early stage, I thought it was a bit long-winded because it was always about ordinary things, and the protagonist did not have any big opportunities. But the more I read, the more addictive it became, because the protagonist is ordinary you and me, working hard for life step by step on our own.

Personally, I think it is comparable to the Chendong Trilogy and the Ergen Five Parts!

Beautiful and interesting, logical and clear

It's so well written that I couldn't stop reading it.