Snowbound: The Blind Sword Immortal Challenges the Martial Emperor City from the Start

If I keep writing like this, I will write about Jian Lai. I hope I can write about Jian Lai [please update]

If you don't know how to name the moves, you don't have to choose them.

This section of Jian Jiu Huang Wen Jian feels very well written. Come on:

The writing is too fictitious and exaggerated. It seems that why is it so exaggerated? Reporting on New China from Xia, Shang and Zhou? Why don't you report all the cuisines? Writing a novel is about portraying the image of the characters and controlling the flow of the story. By writing this, you seem to have forgotten the original purpose of writing a novel, and instead wrote about some high-end, very empty tricks. The foundation is unstable. When I watched the second chapter, I felt that it was too weak to live up to the time. If the story was well written, the protagonist would feel very high-level even if he held a stick. Deliberately depicting exaggerated and exaggerated moves, I feel that it is a bit of a waste of time. You want to write a story, not the kind: Look at me, the best sword in the world, the sword of sadness and loneliness in autumn, the sword that breaks the sun in the long wind, the sword that hangs directly on the clouds and sails across the sea, the sword that carries the man in a coir boat in a lone boat, the sword that fishes alone in the cold river with snow. I can also write. I wrote three hundred Tang poems one after another, and I got the three hundred swordsmanship of the protagonist. Writing a story is not about giving the name of the dish, it is about writing it so that it is reasonable for readers to read and can keep them reading. . I hope you can sort out your story carefully, instead of just sorting out all the tricks.

The scene was well written, but the original characters were completely ruined. It elevated the protagonist too much and belittled the others.

This is the first time I have seen such an excellent snow fanfic, and it is also the only snow fanfic I currently recognize. I feel that the author has shaped the characters and plot very well, which I am very emotional about. I have read many fanfics before, but compared to this, I can only say that the others are lacking. Come on author, I hope you can continue to work hard and believe in yourself

When I saw the name of the sword move, I couldn't stand it anymore. Why did the Spring and Autumn and Warring States Period have anything to do with swords?

The writing is fantastic!! Forgive me for not reading enough 🤦🤦🤦I saw dozens of pictures but didn't understand them! I don't understand martial arts! I don't understand the structure of the imperial court either! The protagonist has a nuclear weapon in the world plus Garrett who is eight hundred miles away! No conspiracy

I didn't feel as cool as Shuangwen! It's so embarrassing

Just two words from beginning to end, show off.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,? He talks in a vague way and looks like a magician, which is annoying.