一人：传承三真法门，震惊张之维

How can I put it this way? It's usually nanny stories that tie the protagonist to death.

Good book, five-star praise, very novel point of view, good luck to the author! Advantages: 1. The author has obviously done his homework, and has his own understanding of some explanations and opinions. There are no obvious logical errors, and there is no magical modification of the characters, but an extension on this basis. Unlike some fans who completely masked one person and changed the characters beyond recognition. Especially the part about the boy who pays the bill, I feel that the psychological description of Zhang Chulan is very suitable. 2. There is no heroine, and Xia He is not praised. All the fans are like Teddy. They can't walk around when they see a girl. I will scold you if you start a harem later. 3. I like the part about threatening Zhang Chulan. I want to see how the author will consummate the relationship between Zhang Chulan and Tang Men later. This part makes me feel like the world of one person becomes real. Disadvantages: 1. The early stage is not exciting enough, and it is still following the plot. Although there are pits of Nirvana corpses, there is not much to expand the plot. 2. The combat power of Sun and Moon Tongcuo is too high. Although the author limited the performance in the early stage, I feel that the combat power will collapse in the later stage and it will become an invincible novel. Overall good, keep going. Also, with Zhang Chulan's character, is it too touching to be touched?

There are too few books about Jiang Mingzi, the Sun and the Moon. [Thinking] Please support me. The heroine turned into Chen Duo for no reason?

It's not bad, but I feel that the three true inheritance has no sense of existence.

The plot of Luo Tian Dajiao is over, give yourself a five-star praise to encourage you [Sending Hearts]

Keep it up, I really like watching it. This subject matter is very new. Come on, author!

Can you keep going? [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

This invitation to gods is quite interesting. Although it is the ability to invite gods, it seems that even non-gods can be invited. Jiang Mingzi, he should not be considered a god, but he also invited him. Then you think, can the supreme divinity also be invited over?

Love to watch, love to watch, post more

In fact, I don't like the protagonist's character very much. He is mercenary, selfish, and goes to great lengths for his own interests, which makes me tired just watching it. But the author's psychological descriptions from time to time are much more vivid than those of similar characters. I give full marks not because this book is so interesting, but to tell the author that some realistic ideas are really good.

This is the first time I saw someone write this, so I gave it 5 stars [I learned it]

It's okay, but the skills are a bit sharp.

What I wrote before also made me suddenly curious and I went to touch up the sun and the moon. I made a mistake and fell into it. I suggest you go and touch up. It's really good.

Yes, the linkage between the aliens and the sun and the moon is indeed possible. I hope to write a different one-person world, and there is no need to follow the original plot. Also, don't be a nanny for others. He is not your father, and you are not his son. The biggest failure is to be someone else's son in the early stage. You haven't done it yet.

To be honest, I feel that the protagonist is too reckless and does not know how to leave a way out for himself. After awakening the system, he is a little too desperate and a little arrogant. But overall this book is still very good

Very good, the combination of the sun and the moon and the combination of one person [like]

There are some details, such as the baby's figure. Xu Si is not an ordinary person, but the rest are okay so far.

This is the nanny article I'm reading so far.

It's too short. I feel like I'm looking forward to the update every day and it's over without any content. Because the pace is too slow, it seems that fewer and fewer people are watching. Does the author know what he means? Stop being stupid and speed up the pace.

I really like the story and setting of Sun and Moon Together. This is one of the many fanfics I have read, and it is relatively good. However, I suggest you give it a try before reading it. Some of the plot lags are still very uncomfortable. Overall, it is worth reading.

At present, there is no big problem, at least I can personally watch it, but there is another question, who is the heroine?

It's quite interesting, although I don't know which anime or novel the Three True Methods are from, but it doesn't affect my viewing. [Learned]

It's pretty good. As for why I gave it four stars, it's because the author is a bit too short and weak. It's really too fast.

It's okay, but I can't handle the time-traveling part well.

It's not bad. It's semi-invincible. It's not like some people who are invincible at the beginning. You can get whatever you want.

It is rare for a fan to have the same mistakes as the sun and the moon. I think this book is relatively good so far.

The content is good and the writing is delicate. Come on, don't be a eunuch.

The sun and the moon are both wrong and must be supported.

The content is just like that, but I just want to watch it [laughing]

I hope the author can persevere