Stopping Itachi

The author is more diligent and diligent, and the content is also good. So far, it is still a bit sweet, even with stuck CP, but it has not yet been able to stop the weeds. It's just that the content is written faster, and the writing style is still a bit green. Come on, come on, come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Zhi Itachi really kept up with the plot at the beginning, and the candies at the back were so sweet, I loved it 🥰 I will try my best to arrange the thinking logic and age timeline properly. There will be knives, but not many. I also hope to get more ratings, haha, and more comments. When I have time, I will reply and like them one by one. If you have any questions, you can @ me directly, because I don't read comments every day. But I won't spoil it. I can only guarantee that the result will be good.

I love it so much, especially with the card!!! Nice!! I've been following it, it's very well written!!

The writing is good (´∀`*), and the story is also very good. There are no self-created characters in this article. The story between Shisui and Itachi is very sweet. There is also a card attached. The Fourth Hokage did not die, and Naruto also survived safely 💕

After watching it..., The plot changes were not particularly big, I thought it was the same rebirth as the others, or the same movie viewing!! OOC also has it, which is pretty good. Some places are quite interesting, such as the Uchiha Peach Incident [laughing][laughing] The gangster was also successfully brought back to the right track by Shunshundong, and they successfully expressed their feelings together. When Shisui went on a mission, I thought Itachi would wait for Shisui for five years. However, Itachi joined the Akatsuki organization to obtain information for the sake of the village and his brother Sasuke. This journey was very difficult. With Shisui, Shisui joined the Akatsuki organization. The confession in the middle was not a success. Itachi did not fully agree and kept delaying, but they will eventually be together!!! Sasuke didn't show much performance. Now that Sasuke has defected, Orochimaru asked him to kill his teammates, and his first choice was Naruto! In the Valley of the End, Sasuke didn't kill Naruto. He wanted Sasuke to kill Naruto, gain strength, and open the Mangekyō Sharingan. I wonder what Sasuke would choose!! The writing style is also good, there is a lot of room for improvement!! Very much looking forward to it!!!

It's delicious. I haven't had such a delicious meal in a long time. 😭😭😭😭 Boss, I didn't eat enough. Is there anything else? Although I came here for the sweetness, I was still bitter and a bit sad. The boss's writing is very good. It has OOC but it doesn't affect it. He is already very close to the character, so there is still a side story for the boss 😭😭 I don't agree with why the boss's rating is not high. It's so well written [Admiration]

Goddess level, why is the rating so low? Pretty good-looking, right??! T^T There is also a sub-cp in it, including Sauna and the card. It is not a rebirth or anything. Shisui survived this article and did not die. As a Shisui fan, I am very happy (^O^), but why didn't the goddess update it later? In seclusion? Or deleted Tomato Writing Assistant? Goddess, come back soon!!! T_T

Overall, it's okay, but it doesn't bring the character of the original drama. Ooc is too serious. But the cp scenes are very sweet to watch, with cards, Zhi Weasel, and Zuo Ming, and the writing is quite good. But I think I brought the character of the original drama into the CP, I just always feel like they are supposed to have the bond with each other, but the bonds with other partners always feel like they are gone. I don't know if it's just my imagination. But I always feel a little lost And OOC, Sasuke always feels that a 16-year-old shouldn't have this kind of personality. There's also combat power. I think Sasuke's Eternal Mangekyō and Naruto's Nine Lama connection modes are stronger than those of Shisui and Itachi. There's also the part about Jiraiya. I feel like he shouldn't have been fatally injured directly. I can only say that this article is suitable for people who are into CP. But like me, I'm a little biased towards the original work, and I'm also obsessed with CP. Also, it is not suitable for those who prefer the original work.

Itachi and Shisui are so beautiful! 😍😍😍😍😍😍The author updates quickly

Many contents in it are well written. My favorite one is the pairing of Obito and Kakashi. Good luck to the author, hehe (*/∇\*)