There Is Indeed Something Wrong with Eriyi's Boyfriend

In fact, this book is quite good. The author's grasp of the characters and personalities is generally good. However, there are too many problems in the early stage. Not only is the pace fast, but there are also some problems in controlling the characters of the threesome. But the later stage is still good. The author has a clear understanding of himself. There is no problem with the general direction. However, there are not many people who read it. The title of the book may also account for some of the problems. But it is much better than Jiangnan. There is no dead movement. The high-rise buildings rebuilt on the ruins of the original work are already very beautiful.

Come on, author, it's best to update three times a day, otherwise it won't be enough [please update]

The writing is good but too little. The author should update more and add more descriptions of the relationship between Lu Mingfei and Eli Yi.

After reading so many fics, I feel like this is the only one that captures Lu Mingfei's feeling of becoming a king. Everything else relies on Lu Mingze. I'm looking forward to the next one.

It's good, but not enough. I finished it after 30 minutes.

The overall storyline is well designed. Although there are shortcomings, the writing style makes up for it. It's beautiful and I love reading it.

A good Dragon Clan fan, although the relationship between Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi is a bit too hasty, it is still enjoyable. And the author's own originality is very good, and the world view is interesting. It was very happy and comfortable to read, and it allowed me to see different "Sad Boys"

Come on, the author writes very well.

It's a very good book. Many contents have changed, making it more comfortable to read and closer to what we have now.

Dear author, it's been two days and there's no news?

Come on, it's really beautiful [love]

Very good, the content is very good

Looks good, makes up for the regrets

It's beautiful. It's beautiful. Highly recommended.

The emotional line is too short

Not bad, I hope a new book will be released soon

In fact, it's pretty good, a bold idea, the logic in front of it is a bit confusing, but generally it's pretty good! Come on!

The writing style in the previous section is pretty good, much better than those who are writing books for the first time.

It looks good, but I feel like there's something wrong with it

This should be the king

Beautiful, so beautiful

Support support support support

It's so beautiful, come on

Much better than Jiangnan

That's awesome! So awesome

Okay, looking forward to the follow-up

It's pretty good. I never rate books, and this is the first one.

It's a dream come true. Looking forward to a happy ending.

Good looking, a leader among Dragon Clan fans.

The writing of the book is good, the plot is arranged in an orderly manner, and the characters are perfectly created. The author is very active and can communicate more with readers