Naruto: Start as a Civilian

It's really beautiful. When you have nothing, you are thick-skinned and you have everything. I ask you if you dare to ask, if you dare to ask the civilians for advice. That's how it is. I don't want to be cannon fodder. I just have to work hard. The plot is rich. It may be a bit boring at the beginning, but it starts to get better later. Please give the author a good update. New, the combat power should not collapse too seriously in the later stage, and the heroine should also be arranged individually. Haha, I think (single heroine) will be enough. The details are arranged in place, and I use my imagination. I suggest that the author just write it with tens of millions of words. Boruto should be able to use his imagination of the world outside the ninja world [laugh][laugh]

Although there are many flaws in the early stage, and some of the author's expressions are very different from the original work. For example, the author likes to call the rebel ninja a rogue ninja, but leaving aside some of Naruto's settings, it is still a good Naruto fanfic.

This Naruto fanfic can be said to be the best Naruto fanfic I have read in recent years. There is no system. The protagonist has ideas and a lot of details. He will not be invincible right away. You can see how an ordinary person grows up step by step from an orphan, and the eight biggest cheats for civilians are only briefly touched, allowing the protagonist to find his own way. There are also many more characters that were hidden in the original work, such as the Senju clan and the Hinata branch, giving people the feeling of a real shadow world. The only drawback is that the author is steadily writing two chapters of 4,000 words per day, and the progress is too slow. However, the protagonist has now grown to a strong film level. Those who have not seen it can start killing it without raising it anymore. All that's left is for the protagonist to complete the puzzle pieces and surpass the shadow level to be able to fight Gundam and Otsutsuki. It is estimated to be only a few hundred thousand to a million words, so it's no wonder the author is so slow to update. The protagonist majors in wind ninjutsu, which greatly complements the original wind ninjutsu setting. It also adds some B, C, and D level ninjutsu in the early stage of Thunder, Water, Fire, and Earth. The comprehensively supplemented characters really add new vitality to Naruto. I don't know how the score is only 7.7. I personally would like to give it more than 9 points. There are no more than 10 Naruto fans who can match it.

The real reason for the low rating is because the author said that Naruto's world view is independent from the anime, which is significantly different from other fanfics, because most of the people who read this kind of article are readers who want to conform to the existing world view to make them feel better. As a result, many people feel that "the etiquette and music are broken" at the beginning of reading, and they are wrong and lose the reading situation. They feel: There is a reason for the low rating. This is the shortcoming of this book on Tomato. At the same time, later The continued content is also his highlight. If you insist on reading, you will find a unique experience. In fact, most people who read for a long time and can continue reading will give objective, positive and considerable comments, and those who only read for no more than thirty minutes are undoubtedly one-sided comments, so don't just give good reviews, and don't randomly give negative reviews. If you think it's ugly, you don't have to read it, or you can directly criticize the author. After all, it's free. The author can be scolded, but don't damage his income (although in Tomato, there are ghosts only when there is income)

In fact, it is a very good book. The fighting scenes and intrigues are all well described. The process of the protagonist's development of ninjutsu is also slowly discovered and formed step by step. It is well-founded and it can be seen that the author has also researched a lot of information on ninjutsu. No, I just want to raise one, but I can't raise it right away? ?

It's pretty good, and the setting is much richer, but there is a plot question I want to ask. I remember that in the original book, the Blood Mist was caused by the Fourth Mizukage being controlled by Obito, and Juzo died before the Fourth Mizukage was controlled. Is there something wrong in the book?

It's a very good civilian novel. The protagonist's path is still too smooth, and he doesn't bring enough changes to the world. To directly establish a country, the top-notch screenplayer can use various sealing techniques to go into battle. The ancient military formations of the previous life can be expressed with sealing techniques. Coupled with Orochimaru's biotechnology, I can directly build an army of millions. Let's see who dares to stop me. Other countries will definitely follow your example and secretly send various ideological articles to the village shadows of a few countries. Soon within a dozen years, the ninja world will become a real war between countries [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] Finally, the continent can be separated. Each country occupies a land, and it can also expand the continent, and use the middle as a PK battlefield for chaos. The lives of millions of people can nourish their own qualifications, etc. [Sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

A good novel. I feel like the author just borrowed the world setting from the Naruto manga and wrote a more detailed and interesting fan novel. Don't pay attention to the original work when watching it, just think of it as an if line, a parallel world similar to the original work?

It's pretty good. The author has the potential to write a good book (although I haven't read the back yet), and he still has some good character development in the early stages. Come on. Although you are on Tomato, don't be fooled by the white people [Like] [Like]

Even in Naruto, a civilian who traveled through time was struggling to stay alive. There is no blood inheritance, no talent. As long as you work hard and make realistic progress, this book is more technical and a little boring, but it is still smooth. A good Naruto fanfic, no cheats or anything like that. It can be passed down and viewed.

The details are in place, and the short stories of the missions are connected together with the growth experience along the way. If it is not a time-travel, it will point out the country and show off. If it is a time-travel, it will be invincible for no reason, and the story will be less exciting!

Okay, I just read this book recently. It takes us into the world of ninjas. I like this kind of book that doesn't cheat or cheat. It's good so far. Don't let it fall apart in the future [laughter][laughter][laughter]

To be honest, it is really worth watching. One is that the protagonist is a real civilian at the beginning, which leads to the key points such as the genocide of the Uchiha in the early stage that cannot be changed at all, and is very "cautious". Even an Uchiha team member who has a good relationship in the early stage is completely hopeless. Secondly, the rhythm is relatively slow. But I can really see it, the logic is self-consistent, and the growth curve is quite reasonable.

The original part is good, but the Chuunin exam, which is one year older than the protagonist, is still a joint exam, so grab the scroll set. The protagonist is four or five years older than Naruto After a year, the protagonists' exam content is still the Forest of Death and the Scroll of Heaven and Earth. Can't there be something else?

I have seen 70 photos so far. There are many better plot supplements. The protagonist is still in his infancy and is relatively dull, but we can see the protagonist's down-to-earth progress. Not a bad summary. [Praise]

This is a slow-paced Naruto book, and it provides a comprehensive supplement to some of the settings of Naruto. It does seem boring in the early stage, but starting from the night when the Uchiha clan was exterminated, it entered a gradually interesting stage. This reminds me of the first time I watched Naruto, the early foreshadowing and a lot of psychological descriptions made it very exciting later on. However, there are still some shortcomings. The descriptions of the people of Konoha and important figures in other villages are basically consistent with the original work. The few people who appear are a little deviated from the characters. There is also the fact that Tsunade should be the only one among the Senju. This may be written by the author for better foreshadowing. The psychological description can be reduced to an appropriate extent, which is also where most readers of this work find it uncomfortable. Overall, this is a very good fan novel, especially since there is no frivolous system. Come on, try to reach a 9.0 Rating as soon as possible!

In my opinion, it is the best Naruto movie I have ever seen. The entire education and ninjutsu system has been well organized by the author. It is very comfortable to watch without any sense of disobedience. Thank you🙏 for the author's hard work and support!

At first glance, this book just feels like a running account, but to be honest, you can skip some chapters that you are not interested in. Some of the strategies, tactics, and battles are really well written. In addition, there are no cheats. You just become stronger step by step. The more interesting it is to read it.

I have read a lot of the same novels, but this one is very different. I feel that the author is really a member of Naruto, rather than following the Naruto plot routine. It is very good. It does not say that any ninjutsu comes suddenly and fills in the pits. They are all obtained in the library and as rewards for tasks. Take the simple shadow clone jutsu, for example. Other authors just play the main character and don't tell how they got it or how to practice it. After all, B-level ninjutsu can't be obtained casually, okay? The author writes with great care [Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's refreshing to watch without feeling bored at all, and the characters are rich in emotions and can leave a deep impression on people. The only drawback is that there are no drawbacks, what a shame!

It's very consistent with Lao Bai's book, and its logic is very strict.

I have only read the first part of it so far. I think the content is good, but it has a fatal flaw: it has no emotion. It is dead, not alive. Come on [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] @ the fish that can't walk From my personal point of view, I can take Xiang Ling and Bai in and try to find them. It can not only help them, but also harvest talents.

It took me two weeks to read it carefully. I think it is quite good. The only bad thing is that there is no female protagonist. The author can arrange some emotional scenes later, so it will be perfect (Kurotsuchi is pretty good) [Like]

After activating the cells, you will become the top S, learn the Sage Mode and progress to the Super Shadow, combine the Quick Release to further increase the speed, and get the ability of Zhonggo to continuously absorb natural energy to increase the endurance of the Sage Mode. This is the top Super Shadow. The combination of the evil god's immortality ability and the Hashirama-level medical ninjutsu can normalize the Eight Door Dungeon. It can provide a chakra amount dozens of times beyond the sum of the five shadows, which is the sign of the Six Paths level. As you go up, you have to find the Ten-Tails seedlings to cultivate the chakra fruit, which can further surpass Otsutsuki.

From what I've read so far, it's generally good, but the author has his own views on ninjutsu in Naruto, which may be somewhat different from other fanfics. Ignore this, this is a very high quality Naruto fanfic

A very nice book. There is no exaggerated halo of the protagonist. The author is very thoughtful.

This book is very good, but the author's narrative style is a bit strange, but once you get used to it, it's really good. The content outside the original plot is written very logically.

It's good-looking, and you can write your own thoughts and characteristics about Naruto. These are the characteristics of a good fan.

This Naruto novel is pretty good. It's the kind of character that climbs up from a small character step by step. The rhythm is very steady, but it feels like it was translated. Sometimes the words are a bit inconsistent with Chinese thinking. Generally speaking, the flaws are not concealed. Naruto Party is still worth reading.

Super pretty! I really like this kind of detailed analysis and step-by-step upgrade flow. The protagonist is a civilian, and his brain is very online. Various abilities develop in multiple lines. The analysis is very well-founded, but it is a pity that it is not finished yet.