Naruto: From the Start as a Commoner

It's really beautiful. When you have nothing, you are thick-skinned and you have everything. I ask you if you dare to ask, if you dare to ask the civilians for advice. That's how it is. I don't want to be cannon fodder. I just have to work hard. The plot is rich. It may be a bit boring at the beginning, but it starts to get better later. Please give the author a good update. New, the combat power should not collapse too seriously in the later stage, and the heroine should also be arranged individually. Haha, I think (single heroine) will be enough. The details are arranged in place, and I use my imagination. I suggest that the author just write it with tens of millions of words. Boruto should be able to use his imagination of the world outside the ninja world [laugh][laugh]

This Naruto fanfic can be said to be the best Naruto fanfic I have read in recent years. There is no system. The protagonist has ideas and a lot of details. He will not be invincible right away. You can see how an ordinary person grows up step by step from an orphan, and the eight biggest cheats for civilians are only briefly touched, allowing the protagonist to find his own way. There are also many more characters that were hidden in the original work, such as the Senju clan and the Hinata branch, giving people the feeling of a real shadow world. The only drawback is that the author is steadily writing two chapters of 4,000 words per day, and the progress is too slow. However, the protagonist has now grown to a strong film level. Those who have not seen it can start killing it without raising it anymore. All that's left is for the protagonist to complete the puzzle pieces and surpass the shadow level to be able to fight Gundam and Otsutsuki. It is estimated to be only a few hundred thousand to a million words, so it's no wonder the author is so slow to update. The protagonist majors in wind ninjutsu, which greatly complements the original wind ninjutsu setting. It also adds some B, C, and D level ninjutsu in the early stage of Thunder, Water, Fire, and Earth. The comprehensively supplemented characters really add new vitality to Naruto. I don't know how the score is only 7.7. I personally would like to give it more than 9 points. There are no more than 10 Naruto fans who can match it.

Although there are many flaws in the early stage, and some of the author's expressions are very different from the original work. For example, the author likes to call the rebel ninja a rogue ninja, but leaving aside some of Naruto's settings, it is still a good Naruto fanfic.

The real reason for the low rating is because the author said that Naruto's world view is independent from the anime, which is significantly different from other fanfics, because most of the people who read this kind of article are readers who want to conform to the existing world view to make them feel better. As a result, many people feel that "the etiquette and music are broken" at the beginning of reading, and they are wrong and lose the reading situation. They feel: There is a reason for the low rating. This is the shortcoming of this book on Tomato. At the same time, later The continued content is also his highlight. If you insist on reading, you will find a unique experience. In fact, most people who read for a long time and can continue reading will give objective, positive and considerable comments, and those who only read for no more than thirty minutes are undoubtedly one-sided comments, so don't just give good reviews, and don't randomly give negative reviews. If you think it's ugly, you don't have to read it, or you can directly criticize the author. After all, it's free. The author can be scolded, but don't damage his income (although in Tomato, there are ghosts only when there is income)

In fact, it is a very good book. The fighting scenes and intrigues are all well described. The process of the protagonist's development of ninjutsu is also slowly discovered and formed step by step. It is well-founded and it can be seen that the author has also researched a lot of information on ninjutsu. No, I just want to raise one, but I can't raise it right away? ?

It's pretty good, and the setting is much richer, but there is a plot question I want to ask. I remember that in the original book, the Blood Mist was caused by the Fourth Mizukage being controlled by Obito, and Juzo died before the Fourth Mizukage was controlled. Is there something wrong in the book?

A good novel. I feel like the author just borrowed the world setting from the Naruto manga and wrote a more detailed and interesting fan novel. Don't pay attention to the original work when watching it, just think of it as an if line, a parallel world similar to the original work?

It's a very good civilian novel. The protagonist's path is still too smooth, and he doesn't bring enough changes to the world. To directly establish a country, the top-notch screenplayer can use various sealing techniques to go into battle. The ancient military formations of the previous life can be expressed with sealing techniques. Coupled with Orochimaru's biotechnology, I can directly build an army of millions. Let's see who dares to stop me. Other countries will definitely follow your example and secretly send various ideological articles to the village shadows of a few countries. Soon within a dozen years, the ninja world will become a real war between countries [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] Finally, the continent can be separated. Each country occupies a land, and it can also expand the continent, and use the middle as a PK battlefield for chaos. The lives of millions of people can nourish their own qualifications, etc. [Sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

It's pretty good. The author has the potential to write a good book (although I haven't read the back yet), and he still has some good character development in the early stages. Come on. Although you are on Tomato, don't be fooled by the white people [Like] [Like]

The details are in place, and the short stories of the missions are connected together with the growth experience along the way. If it is not a time-travel, it will point out the country and show off. If it is a time-travel, it will be invincible for no reason, and the story will be less exciting!