Senior Sister, She Practices the Ruthless Way, and the Protagonist Kneels Down and Croaks

Received the goods, very delicious, both adults and children love it.

It feels good to watch. There is no golden finger of the system, only Wen's efforts. It feels very real but also has a sense of powerlessness. But even so, Wen is also using his own way to protect the senior sister, and the senior sister is also silently protecting her, running in both directions.

It's both sharp and sweet, and there are also some funny scenes. It's really good, but the writing at the beginning is a bit messy, the logic is not very clear, and some places are inexplicable, but! Except for the first twenty or so chapters, which are a bit messy, the following chapters are very well written, and the foreshadowing is very good. Although the writing is a bit obvious, it is the best to arouse curiosity without giving the full picture. The emotional descriptions are very delicate, and the relationship between the protagonists transitions very smoothly. There has always been a foundation for their relationship, and it is not abrupt at all when they actually become lovers.

Very well written! ! ! When I first saw it, I just thought it would be a good one about cultivating immortals. Then after reading the introduction, I felt that it suited my taste. When I read the early part, it was actually not bad. Then I became more and more addicted to it, so I finished it in less than a day. Then I felt that the relationship between Shen and Su was very stretched and tortuous, and I could only The ending is good. To be honest, when I saw the descriptions of our Senior Sister Shen, I wanted to cry when I saw those descriptions, because her background is really too tortuous and pitiful. Anyway, I think the character creation and environment rendering are very good. I hope that she will write better in the future.

Oh my god, it's really good to watch. I can finish it in one night. It's really cool! Recommended, the senior sister is the talkative one, the junior sister is a little funny, most of the text is ambiguous, and it is also very interesting. Because it is not a long article, I read it with gusto, and I don't have the urge to skip reading because it is too long and I lose patience. Those who like to read ambiguous teases are in luck! The worldview is neither too big nor too small, and the author writes it very well. After reading it, you won't feel that the whole world is only described by two female protagonists, which is too long and uncomfortable. Anyway, it is a book suitable for office workers who have a day off and want to read it in one night! Although the first few chapters are not that attractive to me, the later chapters are quite interesting. The Gospel of Pure Love [Shy] Anyway, I enjoyed it after reading it.

I've seen a lot of double heroine movies before, and this one is the best one I think. Basically, I just didn't have any interest in the previous ones. It's so well written🌹😘Thanks to the author, hehe

It looks good, but the author sometimes writes unnatural transitions. Overall, it's pretty good. The first Lily book I read on Tomato [I learned it] ——2024.11.2

Some plots are not perfect and the connection is not very good, but I personally think that the overall story is very good. I like the main plot. There are no surprises in the plot, and the emotional line is quite clear. Moreover, this kind of redemption story really pokes me. The way Wen Wen Fen Fen is determined to redeem Shen Shui regardless of his own safety is so enviable. I hope everyone can meet their own redemption and enjoy the beautiful happiness that goes in both directions [almost crying] There are no redundant systems or anything like that (it's annoying to see redundant and brainless systems now), and the plot is fast-paced (although I like it, but I feel that there are foreshadowings and some nodes that could have written a lot of interesting plots but I didn't write them, which is a bit regretful). It's a bit rushed, and it will definitely be better if more time is spent polishing it. I was very envious of my junior sister's relationship. The two of them hugged each other to keep each other warm. I've seen people say that it's not a bit sadistic and it's just mediocre (although I also like sadomasochism sometimes), but in this article I think it's pretty good. I think real love should be open and generous, and doesn't need so many twists and turns. Su Shangwen, a real person, has such strong emotions for Shen Shui, a person in the book. In the past, he was just a walk-on and tried hard to change Shen Shui's ending (although the plot later became a small one). I was moved by the way Su Shangwen risked his own life to save Shen Shui. The miserable senior sister Shen Shui is saved by Su Shangwen on the verge of collapse. Su Shangwen, who is lonely in reality, can wear a book and embrace his single push. It is really a great blessing for both parties. It's also a pity that I think Shen Shui's character portrayal is not perfect. Even if there is a background and life experience, the changes in his feelings for Su Shangwen are not natural (the pace is too fast). Su Sangwen at least sees Shen Shui's story from beginning to end. He is so moved by her character that he likes her and even dreams of exchanging comments with other netizens (maybe this is how a miracle gave them a chance to be happy [laughing]) I am a relatively emotional person but not good at expressing myself. There is a lot I want to say but I can't write it down. I can only write something casually to express my feelings (a poor comment) It was hard to calm down after reading it for a long time, and I was full of envy and blessings for their happiness. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. I'm just a rat who wants to continue to spy on their happiness [crying]

It's really good-looking. Two people who have no home comfort each other and form a warm little home. The moment Wenwen helps Shen Shui break the prejudice of other novels, especially after returning to modern times, the extra chapters of the two of them are really super good-looking [Love] [Love] [Love]

I accidentally discovered this book and spent a day reading it. It is really beautiful. The front is a little confusing, but the writing gets better and better later on. The writing is also very good and I feel comfortable reading it. The emotional line is written very smoothly and naturally. The feelings gradually become richer and the atmosphere gradually becomes ambiguous. The writing is not abrupt at all. The ambiguous period of the two people's pull is so beautifully written. I really enjoyed it. I was so happy. I was fascinated by it. I couldn't stop laughing. It's a very refreshing little cookie. It's sour and cruel. It's very natural. Open your eyes and take a look. I won't believe that your eyes are empty after reading it! There are no subtitles in the whole text, and there is no problem of enchanting ♂ or only torturing one party. The distribution of highlights is quite even, and the characters of the two protagonists are also very good. I read it quite happily. It has been a long time since I felt so comfortable reading a text. Alas, I have done nothing but read this book all day long. Don't say anything else. You will understand after reading it, okay?

The author writes very well! ! The introduction to this book was one of the things that attracted me to it. The more I read the content of the following article, the more addictive it becomes. Both people love each other very much. The relationship is smooth and flowing, and no one's strength suddenly appears. The two people help each other instead of unilaterally absorbing each other. This is what attracts me! There was no system or any "plug-ins" in the beginning of the time travel, all due to Wenwen's efforts. She had a real and powerless feeling of wanting to protect her senior sister in her own way, and the senior sister was also silently protecting her and paying attention to her, running in both directions. Then, the relationship between Ah Shui and Wen Wen is also mixed with a bit of extreme tension, and there are some twists and turns in the middle, but it is not abusive and can really be ignored! But the ending is very good. I just saw the description of Ah Shui in the early stage, and it was like a little bitter gourd in the world, because Ah Shui's background is so pitiful, I really cried to death QWQ. It felt like it was fate that she met Wenwen. Wenwen was a person similar to a little sun, lighting up the darkness in Ah Shui's life. I followed this novel from beginning to end without reading other novels in the middle, which is a very good point. I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Notice]

Hey, the writing is not bad, the plot is pretty good, the twists are great, and there are plenty of laughs. Why isn't it popular? [What]

This is a very sweet lily novel, with the two-way running of senior and junior sisters as the core. What I watched in the early stage was that I was really frustrated that the heroine has no abilities and can't do anything, and some of the plots are too simple and have no visual sense, making it confusing. Overall, it is worth reading. The transition from the world of immortality to modern times at the end of the text is a highlight (a novel with obvious advantages and disadvantages)

Well, the plot is as smooth and delicate as eating Dove chocolate, it's beautiful! ! Is there any extra episode about Shen Su's marriage? Please write more. [Crying] [Crying] It would be better if there are other people joining in, such as Senior Sister Fang and Ye Qingqing (I probably didn't remember the names^ V^)

The writing is really good, whether it is about the world of immortality or modern times, it made me smile. And let me reiterate, there is no possibility for Chi Moumou and the heroine, I will go to your happy enemy. Su Shangwen and Shen Shui are a perfect match. They don't accept any refutation. If you refute, there's nothing I can do about it. Dogs always like to bark, so there's nothing I can do about it.

It looks good, I love watching it. When did senior sister push Su Shangwen down?

A very good emotional line. There is no big abuse point overall. It is a pure and sweet story (I like this kind!), But I am actually a little curious about the outcome of Chi Wanwan and the world of the novel. It would be better if this was written.

It was a bit awkward to read in the early stages, but the writing got better and better later on, but it was a pity that the ending was a little rushed. The emotional descriptions of Shen and Su are really good, very touching, and very real. Come on! ! !

The world of cultivating immortals ended too quickly, and many things were left unexplained. It felt unreal when the world ended in the end. Many characters in the book had no specific arrangements. In fact, I was more concerned about the original owner. Judging from her friend's description, she should be a not bad person who hopes to have a good place. However, the writing style is comfortable to read online, very sweet and refreshing. If you want to read sweet writing, just jump in and it will be done. The two heroines redeemed each other. They both lacked love when they were young and finally came together. Later, they recreated a family in the real world. It was quite touching to watch.

This book took two days and is short and concise. Some of the small details will be confusing if you don't read them carefully, but you will know a lot after reading them. Moreover, the pace of the whole book is very moderate. There is no abrupt feeling of being together at a fast pace, which makes it very soothing. Both good babies have tragic backgrounds and lack of love, so it is normal for them to be a little slow. The author's writing is not abrupt and very comfortable. It is comfortable, both bitter and sweet. Most of the bitterness comes from the character's life experience and previous sufferings. The later bitterness is not too much, it is just a small emotional episode between the two good babies, but the final result is good. They are living together in modern times. The author's writing style is also good. I look forward to more good books [Blow Kiss] (I haven't written a chapter review for a long time, it only represents my personal opinion, suitable for babies who like short stories)

National Day is a good time to catch up with other authors, hurry up and update ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy]

It's very interesting, but the connection between the previous plot and the lower plot is not very smooth, but the subsequent plot is very smooth. Also, Chi Wan Wan's hole has not been filled in, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable😣. Everything else is fine.

The two main characters are so sweet! ! ! ! ! It's just a little short [crying][crying][crying]

Really satisfied with this novel. Both of them love each other very much, and they don't seem to only highlight one person's strength. This is what I want to see, instead of one party blindly giving and being sad, or one party can only be protected. It's not very long either, and I really enjoyed reading it.

Go ahead, I haven't seen such a good-looking book about cultivating immortals for a long time. There are no routines like other books. Every time I read it, I feel the same. I have no desire to read it at all. This book is really good. I read it in one day. The characters and plot really impressed me. The fighting scenes and plot are all online.

It's very beautiful. Even if they are reunited, it's very beautiful. These two guys are happily together. I can't hold my lips together❛˓◞˂̵✧ (◍＞◡＜◍)(ᐢᴖ ·̫ ᴖᐢ)

The second gl in my life, I can express my current mood without words. My senior sister's love is too reserved, like the wet rain staining the paper. My junior sister's love is bright and bright. I am willing to give everything for my senior sister. Bing Dilian will never be annihilated. May you still be there for thousands of years.

It's very interesting. The heroine's feelings are very delicate, especially when Shen Shui's feelings for the heroine changed. The writing at this stage is very good [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Love the author greatly [Blow kiss]

Good review! It's a very nice article among Ancient Lily. Except for the fast pace at the beginning, I can't ignore the sweet couple at the end. ᖰ⌯'▾'⌯ᖳGood luck, good health. The lilies are throughout the text and correspond to the title of the book. It's very well written (◍•ᴗ•◍)

Although the story feels a bit undeveloped, such as how the senior sister came here, why the heroine wears the book, and the senior sister who has been expressed in the book from time to time can feel that she is a character in the book, many things are not expanded on, but this is also good, at least the story is sweet.