How Difficult Is It to Become the Sub-Fourteenth?

It's pretty good to watch, but the ending is a bit uncomfortable to watch. Maybe it's my problem, but I just want to say that with an ending like this, I hope the heroine won't think so much and just ask the system about the task progress. If there's anything you can't ask, or if there's any hesitation, if the task isn't completed, you can't leave even if you want to. Once the task is completed, the system has also said that you can choose to stay or leave. If that's the case, then what are you worried about? If you want to stay, you can stay. If the task is completed, it feels like this way of writing, it feels like it is forced. Hmm... I don't know how to describe it. It would be better if it could not be written like this. Of course, the above are my feelings and thoughts after reading this book, and they are not just for the sake of spraying. It also feels like a pity, as written before It's quite good. I read this book for all, but I saw that it seemed that it was due to censorship issues, and then it couldn't be written or something, and then it was changed to a friendship line. It was a bit of a pity, but the writing in other places was good, but it was a pity. After all, there were two male protagonists in the front, but not in the back. , Anyone can do it, if you are here because you want to read this, and what I want to say is that if the author can, he should not write so many variety shows, he can write less. Some variety shows can be shorter, interesting ones can be slightly longer, and there is no need for barrages to appear at the end. I know this book is finished, but I still want to For example, for example, if the male protagonist goes to a concert, the interaction with the fans can be longer, the performance can be longer, and the daily life can be longer. Maybe I personally prefer to watch daily life, but if it is completely daily life, it will not look good. Then there is also the male protagonist and others who go abroad, even if it is just because of variety shows. And then, I also hope that the author can write some, and then after writing, it can be longer, not so short, you can write about the male protagonist, some things about him returning to China can be longer, and sometimes the male protagonist has a fever, so I hope it can be written longer, and don't write about the other members preparing to send the male protagonist to the hospital, and then it ends there. It feels like a pity, but I feel that this is a bit bad. I can say that there are many things, just write some things, Don't stop writing in the middle, or stop writing in the middle. I just want to express my hope that I can write a longer follow-up, and don't stop at a certain point, really, and then start the next variety show. It may also be that I personally don't like variety shows, but it's not that I hate it. It's just that there are too many variety shows, so I hope other ones can be longer. Don't just come for the next variety show and then stop. It doesn't matter if you write longer in some places, such as some It's an interesting variety show. I hope I can write more chapters instead of just two chapters. Some variety shows feel quite long, but I feel it's better to write them longer. I don't mean to cut short variety shows like this. I just hope that interesting variety shows like this can be longer, and there is no need to add a barrage at the end. This is a bit bad. I don't know what the function of this barrage is, so I won't comment too much. After all, it's not me who writes the article, but the author. It's up to you how you want to write it. It depends on what you think. I can't interfere in this aspect. I just want to express my opinions and my thoughts. Don't criticize me for saying this. It may be because I don't like barrages. But whether I like barrages or not, I just hope it can be longer. Variety shows can be less, more daily, and more interesting. Even if you don't write about love, but only about friendship, now, I still hope it will be longer like this, but it's true, it's a pity, a pity. Ah, I can't write about love. It's all the fault of the censors. It doesn't mean that I can't write about love. It's just that once I write some fragments, even if I don't do anything, it just doesn't work and that doesn't work. I really suspect that the censors are deliberately looking for trouble. Some are even worse than It's okay. Instead of reviewing their works, I came to this one instead. It's other authors, because most of them must have abandoned the article. I should say it or not. I admire this about you, author, and I like you very much. You haven't abandoned the article. You are still here. I insist on confronting the review and still insist on writing, but I can understand those who abandon the article. After all, who else can't lose their mentality? There is a sentence mmp that I don't know whether to say or not. Finally, I know that this book is finished. I just want to express my opinion. I have said this several times. Let me say it again. I hope the author can improve this aspect in the next article. Some things should not be interrupted at a certain point and can be longer. That's okay. If the author still writes articles. , And whether you write it or not, let me say it first, don't stop at a certain point, and then you can write about the protagonist. He returns to China or goes to some other country. Even if it is because of a variety show or other reasons, it can be longer. Don't just write a few sentences and then return to Korea. It's like a live broadcast. You are an idol and you live broadcast. As an author, you can write this aspect longer, one or two chapters. If it is an ordinary live broadcast, it does not need to be particularly long. If it is an ordinary live broadcast, If there are too many live broadcasts, there is no need to be so long. Half a chapter is enough. If there are not too many ordinary live broadcasts, then one chapter or two chapters is just right. This is still necessary. One or two chapters can be longer because of birthdays or other reasons, but not too long. Try not to exceed 5 chapters. Personal thoughts, such as concerts, performances, fan interactions, longer, more, and I want to say, it seems that before reaching 100 chapters, didn't the male protagonist add exo and their relationship? Why didn't you write a follow-up? If that's the case, then don't write it here. After all, you don't want to write a follow-up, right? Or maybe you don't want to write anymore and just want to finish it, so what else should you write? I think this kind of writing should have some follow-up, so since you choose to write it like this, you should let the male protagonist have some follow-up with them, some chance encounters, right? It is very good to write about the relationship between the male protagonist and his group and other groups. It is a pity that I have not seen it written like this. Well, I have finished my thoughts after reading this book. Generally speaking, it is good, but some things can be changed. Even if this one is not changed, I hope the next one can be better and stronger, not like this one.

Carat said, "Really, really, really!" ! ! Very nice! ! ! The main character is not a girl, which has surpassed most Tomato fics for me, and the writing is super 👍🏻👍🏻! ! !

It's super good-looking and has a strong sense of immersion. It feels like revisiting SVT's debut group. I hope the author will work hard. Don't be discouraged if the traffic is not good for a while. Enjoying the joy of writing is the first priority. I also wish that the traffic will get better and better! [Sending Hearts]

Good looking, love watching👀Come on, come on, come on [Adoration]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! Author, you have no heart! ! ! From the last chapter to the extra chapter, do you know how much I cried in these chapters! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! Author, you have no heart! ! !

It's okay, it's well written, but there are too many variety shows. In fact, I feel that it should focus on daily life, interspersed with variety shows, singing stages, concerts, live broadcasts, interactions with fans, and forums. As for Carat alone, to be honest, I have watched Ciren's variety show several times. After all, it is an original character. If I write the variety show in detail from beginning to end, I feel that the change of having one more person is not big. I can be more detailed and focus on a few key points to write. Of course, it is still very well written, and it is also a rare high-quality sub-human article.

Really pretty! Very fast update, I can read 500 chapters at once👀

To be honest, I really want to see Shuran buy other boy group photo cards and be seen by other people. [Shy]

I have reread it many times. Really, the content written here is very beautiful. I like reading this very much. I have reapplied it many times. I swipe it once, twice and three times every time. I really like it. The storyline is very well written, and the extra chapter at the end is very enjoyable. Recommended recommended.

The author needs to update it quickly. I can't read it enough. The book is so cute. I kiss, kiss, kiss, [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss]. The author needs to update more. I will stick to it as long as the author keeps updating. (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

Can the author write about the "Omniscient Intervention Perspective" variety show on Xiao Qi? I've watched this variety show before and I laughed so hard.

It's good to read [like], it's finished, I feel inexplicably reluctant to let go [I'm about to cry], those who like Seventeen Carats can read this book, it's not a loss if you invest in it [laughing], I hope there will be a sequel [heartfelt]

It is suggested that the author can take the friendship line in the future and not have that kind of...

The author would like to ask you to update more. I have saved so many articles for days, and there is not enough to read [crying][crying][crying][crying]

Woo woo woo, everything will be happy and complete [send heart]

Woohoo, my spiritual food is finished. I have followed only about 20 chapters to now. I feel so emotional (it's really good to read, long live it≧▽≦

Author, I hope you write faster, otherwise I will go up to the rooftop in two days. It's so beautiful, oooooooooooooooooooooooo

Super awesome! Come on!

Great, I eat all the books

Wuwuwuwu, I can't come out

Not enough, the author is great [Petrochemical]

What I really like about this type is that there is quite little tomato in it.

The best book I have read so far

It's really good to watch. I recommend everyone to watch it. You'll regret it if you don't watch it.

Very good. Not bad for the first time.

I finished reading it some time ago and I really couldn't bear to part with it [crying] I really like the story of Shu Ran and Xiao 17. Thank you to the author for your hard work.

It's really beautiful! Come on, great author!

It's great, it's a very attractive work in the same genre [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's beautiful. It seems to be my first fourteen articles. It's really my enlightenment.

Super, super nice, nice, nice, nice [sending my heart], but it's just a little too little.