Rebirth in Another World: You Practice Magic and I Will Practice Immortality

Not bad, but don't exaggerate too much about the power of cultivating immortals. It can be inclusive, but it must also reflect the unique advantages of magic.

Bro, I give you five stars. It's not because you write well. But there are too few people writing about it. When I was a child, I felt like a hundred schools of thought were contending. What are the disadvantages here? Brother, you can learn from other fantasy novels. For example, fields, laws, sword intent, sword power, etc., And career issues are a continent at the same time. Even if they were all pigs, some of them would become sperm. Therefore, careers should also let a hundred flowers bloom. Of course, the main system must include warriors and mages. But subordinate branches, such as shooters. Potion master, formation mage, etc. Only in this way can a complete world view be written. At the same time, the levels of power are not equal, and some Western ones contain gods. In other words, this world is just the lowest world. Then it will be expanded from there to all the heavens and worlds, etc. I am just giving it as a suggestion. As for the rest, you need buddies, you can think of it yourself. Brother, write well and write with your heart!

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and walked slowly to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy. Gradually, it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know if it was me crying or the rain was getting heavier. It might be both. I My mood became even more melancholy, and I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who am I looking down on in the next few chapters? (Author, your writing is very good, there is no need to update more, you can just keep updating five times a day)

Can we unify the titles? Sometimes father, sometimes father, it would be too disturbing to watch. Also, we could describe less about the power and magic of the protagonist's skills. We all know that the protagonist's own skills are powerful. Personally, I feel like this. If you like this kind of article, you can read it...

The content is compact, nothing rambling, I like it

Apart from anything else, the first few chapters are really well written, with a good historical background. The male protagonist's ability to become stronger is well-founded and reasonable, as long as the male protagonist is not a father-in-law [laughing], but it is best not to be a stallion, and the plot is also relatively detailed in Tomato, Tomato. Most of the articles are the kind that are full of nonsense articles. If the male protagonist is a father-in-law, I may downgrade four stars. But if the subsequent articles remain as well-written and detailed, I'm sorry to say that I don't want to use any female ones. It will only affect my reading speed [get it]

It's a good read, but it's too short.

My favorite theme since I was a child is still this time-travel fantasy world. I started reading novels about mice bullying cats and then falling into the trap, and then reading miscellaneous travels in other worlds, and then some transformations into Behemoth, mosquitoes, and orcs. It's rare for Tomato to see this kind of subject, come on!

I like this type of book very much. I just started reading it. I will review it after I read it.

The overall performance of this book is very good. There is no bloody plot in the book. Especially the family love is written very realistically. There is no intrigue. The other details are also in place, not to mention that the word count is not deliberately crammed. It is a good book worth collecting.

I really like this style. It's very comfortable to write in daily life, but I feel that the supporting characters are not three-dimensional and deep enough.

The writing is very good, with a subtle and subtle style, and there are no brainless plots that appear because of concealing strength. It feels more real to people, come on. Why not add alchemy?

Thank you author. Let me see your work when I have no books to read. Liked

This subject matter is so reminiscent of that time.

How can I put it, the topic selection is okay, it is a bit of a reference to Japanese comics about another world, which is harmless. The main problem is that the author's portrayal of the characters is not three-dimensional enough. I always feel that it is almost meaningless and uncomfortable. I hope it can be polished a little bit.

It's good to watch, but there's no emotional foreshadowing. It feels like the main character is just for training.

Reminds me of the first novel I read [laughs].

You are the glory of the Creator, the unchanging lushness of the four seasons, and the gentle wind in the clouds of mountains and seas. It is the eternal dream of all my years. God's jewels fell to the ground, so I saw the sky full of stars and your eyes.

I quite like the subject matter and the plot. It's pretty good, but a bit short.

A very rare Western fantasy novel, very good and worthy of five stars!

I think the protagonist can bring his brother with him

Really good! I really miss the previous division of realms! It doesn't look messy or uncomfortable

Not bad, it looks more logical and doesn't contain much water.

It's a pretty good light novel. It's light and easy to read. You can read it every day.

Come on, the writing is good. I hope there will be some elements about cultivating immortals such as the skills of cultivating immortals, refining alchemy, refining weapons, formations, drawing talismans, puppets, etc. I hope there will be some fighting plots later.

1. The rhythm of the plot is just right, and there are more descriptions, but it is not yet a literary novel. 2. The strength setting is stable, and there is no point where the combat power collapses in the early stage. You can roughly guess the protagonist's position in the world, and you have a good idea. 3. The characters are relatively real. There is no classic brainless villain. There are some flaws in the portrayal, but after reading so many Tomatoes, these flaws can be ignored. 4. The worldview setting is novel and has a certain degree of independence. There will be some mutual integration between different worlds, within an acceptable range. Overall, with the first 50 or so chapters, it is a relatively new and well-written novel, and it is fully worthy of a score of 9 or more. I don't know why it only scores 8.1 At the moment.

It's okay, I haven't read this kind of magical fantasy novel in a long time. What's surprising is that shouldn't there be a magic storage bag? There is also the magic storage ring, storage belt, and storage necklace. These are normal things in the wizarding world. I've been reading it for a long time and haven't mentioned anything similar. Why don't pig trotters catch some pets for the family, so as to better protect the family or partners?

Ha, meow, meow, meow, have you handed me over? Take a good look.

Nothing exciting, nothing exciting at all

I don't know why the rating is so low. Although I have only read Chapter 47, I feel that this book is really good. At least so far, it looks very smooth, without any feeling of sluggishness or dissonance. I look forward to more exciting chapters in the future.