Bai Yunsheng's First Book

Anchor, can I make some comments? If you think what I said is wrong, don't complain. 'I'll just change it to Yin Yang Bagua. Elements are added.

I feel like this is the best-looking Jianlai fanfic on Tomato, but there are too few of them. Can the author add more? [Send heart][Send heart] It does get better and better the more I read it. After leaving Chen Ping'an's main story, I feel that the author can let go more freely. The writing feels like a manager and is not so verbose. Also, I can read more during the holidays. The rating will definitely increase. I am currently reading 200,000 yuan, come on!

Yes, Tongwen is infinitely better than other swords. But why is the score so low? Other Jianlai books on Tomato have such high ratings. Even the author of one book thought he had written it very well. He was so confused under each chapter review. He only read a few more chapters because of Jianlai's feelings. I really couldn't stand the rest of it. This book is good and I have the desire to read it.

Very good, author, keep it up, love reading

The plot is still very good and the writing style is acceptable. The author can write confidently and boldly. After the writing is long, many people will definitely read it.

As one of the few fanfics written by Jian Lai, this book is pretty good, with good ideas and overall trends. It's just that the writing is a bit lacking, and some shocking plots will be added. Overall it's good, but author, can you update it faster?

I can only say that it is the most consistent Kenlai fan I have ever seen. Kenlai's usual style is to show off invisibly, so this fits the bill perfectly. Small problem, but looks normal. The book I read last time was about Chen Pingan's Biological Brother, a speechless one Just pretending to be cool and expressing emotions.

It's very interesting, but I don't know if I can write it down.

There are so many Jianlai fan books out there, but this one is the best! Improve the update speed and it will become popular

This is the best Kenlai fanfic and doesn't accept refutation. Come on, author

Why doesn't the author update it? It's such a beautiful book [crying]

It's not bad, at least it's better than most other Jianlai doujins.

There are very few people who write about swordsmanship and they deserve support.

My heart and my actions are as clear as a clear mirror, and everything I do is righteous.

The subject matter is okay, but it hasn't crashed yet. Damn, will there be a female protagonist in the back? Through the bottom

Good-looking, very good-looking, but there are few updates [full][full][full] I'm going to stock up on a dozen of them to read. I hope this book doesn't get too cold! ! ! !

Very good, one of the best Kenlai fanfics I have ever read [Like][Like][Like]

Invincible and beautiful. When the author stabilizes the update and updates more, I think more and more people will read it.

It's quite interesting [laughing], the content is very good, but the author is a bit lazy.

The author's writing style is very good, very close to Jian Lai's writing style, and the plot is quite interesting. Overall, it is very interesting to watch. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Like]

Not bad, worth a look

Ideal type, good looking, come on!

You can give the protagonist more roles!

Rarely seen Kenlai fanfic

Very good, keep up the good work [smile][smile][smile]

Is the heroine Ruan Xiu [Adoration]

Why is the rating so low?

OK, partial restoration

Wuhu, I wish the author to take off

I hope the author can work hard and give good reviews