[Two male protagonists + national luck + unlimited streaming + no CP]
Human nature is ugly, and only ruthlessness will prevent it from being hurt.
(The male protagonist is a bit timid and stupid in the early stage, but he will get better in the later stage. Don't worry and watch. The author will work hard to write every little story.)
(The first copy is very ugly, so you can skip reading it.)
Reader comments
This novel is a lot better than the previous one, and the environment is also very good. There is a lot of room for improvement in character descriptions. I can write more about the psychological activities, language, and demeanor of the characters. Overall, it is good. I wish the author a novel with twists and turns, smooth writing, vivid characters, and good progress. It will gain more readers, become famous, and achieve great things. "[Top post][Top post][Top post]
I hope the author can update more and more stably.
A ghost story is a little shorter
You can write it a little more horrifyingly
Let's write a little more about players from other countries. Countries are competitive and can have some cunning enemies.
The writing is okay, but the first article doesn't have the scary feeling of the weird rules. I suggest you improve it.
This novel is a lot better than the previous one, and the environment is also very good. There is a lot of room for improvement in character descriptions. I can write more about the psychological activities, language, and demeanor of the characters. Overall, it is good. I wish the author a novel with twists and turns, smooth writing, vivid characters, and good progress. It will gain more readers, become famous, and achieve great things. "[Top post][Top post][Top post] I hope the author can update more and more stably. A ghost story is a little shorter You can write it a little more horrifyingly Let's write a little more about players from other countries. Countries are competitive and can have some cunning enemies.
The writing is okay, but the first article doesn't have the scary feeling of the weird rules. I suggest you improve it.