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This novel is a lot better than the previous one, and the environment is also very good. There is a lot of room for improvement in character descriptions. I can write more about the psychological activities, language, and demeanor of the characters. Overall, it is good. I wish the author a novel with twists and turns, smooth writing, vivid characters, and good progress. It will gain more readers, become famous, and achieve great things. "[Top post][Top post][Top post] I hope the author can update more and more stably. A ghost story is a little shorter You can write it a little more horrifyingly Let's write a little more about players from other countries. Countries are competitive and can have some cunning enemies.

The writing is okay, but the first article doesn't have the scary feeling of the weird rules. I suggest you improve it.