Everyone Has Just Awakened, and You're Rubbing Your Hands with Supernatural Weapons?

I am not an expert in this field, but I still want to comment. After I read your book carefully and thought about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to comment. As I said at the beginning, I am not an expert in this field.

How should I put it, the first paragraph of this novel still makes people very willing to read it. But since it starts with family, the relative text is a bit weak which makes it a bit uncomfortable. Plus. . Personally, I feel that at least the first few pictures made me feel uncomfortable with my sister's ideas. (Maybe I feel differently without a sister?) When it appeared, I thought it was a live broadcast by a family and they made all kinds of strange props and weapons. I was looking forward to it. . But I only lasted one. . . Personally, I think it's quite out of the ordinary for my sister to help me register for college. . . After finishing college, I went through it very sloppily, and I quickly took up the leadership position. . . It was as if I suddenly became a leader while singing this song while eating hot pot. . . Later, there are less and less descriptions of forging weapons. . . . There is only the continuous pursuit of blood with various powers. . . This book gave me the feeling that I was hitting a pole here and there. . After being attracted by the title of the book. . . It can't be said that the protagonist is selling equipment. I can only say that the protagonist is constantly buying equipment. . . An indescribable feeling. . . Very uncomfortable. . . Hope it gets better in the future. . .

If the brother doesn't want to break the news, just say so. Why bother to deal with the sister so casually? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. The brother is weak and needs more rest. The sister is urging the brother so much. It is the sister's fault. It hurts the brother's body and makes the sister feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether the brother hurts the body or not has nothing to do with the sister? Hurry up and add the update! Brother

It's very beautiful, not bad, come on author

There is fun in the ordinary. The description of the dynamic psychological activities of young people is very immersive. It can only be said that this is a novel with potential. The author is not a novice and has no major poisonous points. It is safe to eat. [Like][Like][Like] Why do you show that it took less than 30 minutes to read? Is it because I read the book too fast?

No, why didn't his sister tell his brother that he was bullied? He also called his sister a lady. A lady wouldn't give his brother a mouthful to tell him to get up. Just skip the process of your brother's revenge and just give him the result [face covering]

It's quite interesting, but when the teacher questioned the protagonist's talent for blacksmithing, why did he say he was proficient in combat? How could he explain that he wanted the blood of his classmates to give them special equipment?

The author is good at making jokes, and it is still unsystematic, and the character development is also very good. It is suitable to read when you are in a book shortage [laughing]

Yes, the creative plot is very good. Also, why didn't the protagonist think of transferring the transformation of Transformers toys to the car? It should be possible. After all, even the elements can be transferred to the ring. There is no reason why Transformers can't.

This book is more about daily life. The author updates it steadily in two chapters a day. The main character is not the Virgin, and there are various weapons. You can take a look at it.

Compared to today's bloody plots, it's okay. The plot hasn't collapsed yet. As long as the author keeps reading more, it definitely won't be considered good, but it's still okay for a bloody novel like Tomato.

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It looks good, and the character of the protagonist is also good, but there are too few updates. When I see this, the author will add more for me.

I really like this feeling of slowly growing and becoming stronger in daily life. There is still blood in the calmness. It is very beautiful! [Adoration]

I came to review after reading the latest one. The book is very good. It doesn't give us readers any riddles about the protagonist's abilities (the Riddler deserves to die [punch out]). The plot is a bit bland for me personally. Maybe I personally like to watch fighting plots. The characters are a bit more flimsy but they are reliable if they happen. Finally, the author should update quickly [please update]

Everything else is good, but I don't quite understand why you must have so much malice towards the government, and why you have persecution paranoia against the government for no reason. Why can't you trust these lovely people who built the country?

How to say it? Not bad, I think the potential is huge, there's not much to say, just click in and take a look🥰

The content is pretty good, but I just feel like there aren't many fighting scenes of the protagonist.

The book is a good book. In fact, it would be better to change the sister to the protagonist. Each of the first few books is about the sister, and the protagonist only mentions a few words, and the school is about classmates. I read it in a skip, and felt that the school was just water. I really couldn't stand it anymore. I still like this Golden Finger. The five stars are to encourage the author. I hope the next book will be better.

It's okay. There's no poisonous point so far. The emotions and battles are well written. I feel like this book will be popular. Please leave a review first. And is Sister Tiejun the heroine? The character is well written

New theme, very interesting [Chigua] Come on, author [Like]

The plot is very good and the description is also very good. Come on, author

Author, is there a female protagonist?

The protagonist has interesting abilities

Keep up the hard work, come on!

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good.

Let me see what's going on [exploration]

So far so good

You can watch it if you're not picky.

The main reason is that there are too few. Can the author write 100 memes a day?