I Am Here********

①The subject matter is well chosen and I can read it. However, the plot and details of the original work are not very particular, there are many discrepancies, and many of the jokes in the HP circle are missing. Putting aside everything else, when did the dining table of the four deans in the cafeteria turn into many small round dining tables? This makes the original party really uncomfortable. But for now, the plot doesn't have any poisonous points, and it can be considered as a fanfic. Come on! ②According to the setting of the protagonist, he is a great magician who can delve into new magic systems and magical creatures. If it is convenient, the author can buy "Harry Potter Encyclopedia", "Harry Potter Analysis·Character Settings/Prop Settings/Creature Settings", and "Harry Potter and History" as reference, which can be innovative without deviating too much from the original magic system and turning it into a poisonous point. I am still very optimistic about the author, come on, update quickly! PS: The movie has deleted and changed many plot settings and exciting parts. It is recommended to write based on the settings of the novel. I take back what I said before. The author's magical modifications no longer care about the life or death of the original work. It gives me the feeling that I haven't read the original work carefully and just wrote it according to my own mood, just wearing the cloak of Harry Potter. When I said before that the character setting or scene setting is different from the original work, I can understand that it is a second creation. But in the first Philosopher's Stone Quidditch, Gryffindor defeated Slytherin because Harry swallowed the Golden Snitch! Not grabbing it with your hands! ! This was also the foreshadowing that Dumbledore later left the Golden Snitch to Harry as a legacy, and Harry kissed him on the lips before opening the mechanism and getting the Resurrection Stone hidden in the Snitch! ! ! This is also the key to why Scrimgeour, the Minister of Magic at the time, personally handed over Harry's inheritance and wanted to know the secret of the Golden Snitch but did not discover it! ! If you haven't read the original work, why don't you write fan fiction? It neither respects the original author nor is responsible for the readers.

It's pretty good. He didn't look for a wife as soon as he appeared. The setting is basically nothing outrageous. The causes and consequences are reasonable and orderly, and the protagonist is rational.

As an old bookworm, this book is quite good, but it is a little lacking. I look forward to more updates! ! ! It's quite real, the characters are not OOC, there is no outrageous plot, and there is no ridiculous Long Aotian. I really like this type of male protagonist! ! !

Everything is good, but the Iron Hat King is gone, so I can only give it four stars.

In fact, overall the narrative style is quite good. The characters have good personalities, but the author should understand the original work. Originally, the first-year Harry and his friends in the original work should have finished the final exam, but this can be solved by Dumbledore discovering the Horcruxes in advance and leaving school early. Voldemort seized the loophole, but in the original work, the trio should have discovered the dragon egg before it hatched. The most important thing is that the divination class should be an elective for the third grade. But why does this plot happen in the first grade?

Emmmmm To be honest, the writing is really good, but there are often things that should not appear in the original timeline or some things are missing. For example, Hermione found the potion in the first-grade level, and then changed it to her taking Ron for help after the wizard chess was over, and the potion level was omitted. The divination class was actually an elective in the third grade and then moved to the first grade. The Crown of Wisdom is not in the box but somewhere else. I don't remember much about other things, but I vaguely remember someone saying it several times. All in all, the book is very interesting, but if you pay more attention to the details of the original work, it will be quite uncomfortable (:з っ )っ

The protagonist of this book is very sensible. Highly recommended.

This is the best fanfic I have ever read so far. The protagonist is very unique and is the type of protagonist I prefer. The author's writing style is also very good. Overall, this book is very good. I highly recommend everyone to read it.

Personally, I think it's okay. Fans don't have to be more than 90% like the original work, otherwise there's no point in adding a person to the original work. Like the first adventure, how many fans have written about it, eight out of ten are about the same. I personally think it is necessary to slightly change the settings to broaden the world view. Otherwise, if each fan adds a character according to the original plot details, the heroine Hermione will feel that she has seen too much. I'm more looking forward to the protagonist's research on transforming the magical world and making it powerful and diverse.

The protagonist of the novel is too rational. I suspect that Isabel is a time traveler or the owner of the system.

It looks good, you can take a look

Reason, pursuit of knowledge, and exploration of the true meaning of magic. I thought I would be a Ravenclaw, but I didn't expect that I would be a Slytherin.

Better than most of the books I've read. Especially since the protagonist didn't start looking for his girlfriend, and he was very rational and could be treated as an equal.

The writing is good, there is no miscellaneous love, only the pursuit of magic [Thinking][Thinking]

The protagonist is calm, a genius, and likes to study and study; I read 100 chapters in one go, and the content is smooth and not boring.

Tomato HP fan, it is relatively good-looking, come on

Looks good, but too short

Why is such a beautiful book rated so low?

[Like] [Like] [Like] The nanny plot is not much, more like a teacher teaching students

It's pretty cool. The protagonist of the invincible style is at least invincible for now.

It's beautiful, I like it very much, I'm addicted to watching it [Sending my heart]

The male protagonist of this book is calm and knowledgeable. It can be seen that the author has good intentions and a grand world view. Not limited to the original work.

Very well written, keep it up [like][like]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking

Good book with reasonable logic

Five stars, just a little less

It's really beautiful, I like it so much.

Very nice and the plot is reasonable

Well written, keep up the good work