I Was a Little Panicked When I Traveled Through the Collapse

Why do most time-travelers become arrogant and arrogant when they go to other worlds, even though they were ordinary before they time-traveled, and some were even rich second generations. Only a small part can maintain its original character

The first three chapters are okay, well, very good. The story development (especially the conversation with Siegfried) is a little awkward, but it's not a big deal. But, dear author, remember to break up sentences and change to the next line! There is a slight impact on reading, but it is not a big problem. I hope that the subsequent plot development and emotional line development can be reasonable. I hope it won't be too OOC (I haven't found anything that is too OOC yet). I think these are just minor issues, so I can still give it five stars. Come on! Very nice. At present, I can see this through the first three chapters. I hope that after I read it completely, I can give the author a full review. Remember to write well!

Suppression, desperate situation, breakthrough, self, proof, peak, shackles, answer, dependence, end, interpretation, calmness, adversity, self-confidence, infinity, break, dilemma, questioning, reversal, temper, limit, stagnation, illusion, result, will eventually win, calmness, break away, restriction, field, pinnacle, past, farewell, memory, shackles, broken mirror, fragmentary, inferior, gap, details, talent, breakthrough, interpretation, talent, focus, calmness, details, techniques, escape, mentality, upper limit Break, stop, suppress, break free, calm, escape, see through, reversal, what is destined, break, hope, bear, despair, question, fall, strength, dusk, final state, aspire, indulge, temper, cold-hearted, self-confidence, break, illusion, promise, end, peak, answer, parting, responsibility, keep, expect, interpret, afterglow, about, technique, dependence, regain, insomnia, stop, broken, mood, change, honesty, limit Destiny is very good

It's okay, but why do I always forget to use quotation marks where I should use them?

The plot is good, but there is no knife, no knife, no big knife It is recommended to add more later [please update]

All of them are yandere, this is what I like to see the most The author has a better control, it just needs to be reviewed and it can satisfy our imagination. Don't be removed from the shelves. I still want to read [Adoration]

The last lesson is already here, I still want to watch Sinner's Elegy ~ Meteor in the Sky ~ Fire Flames Eternally Burning ~ The Story of Being Here Because of You ~ So Said Apokalis ~ Du Chen ~ You and I ~ There is still a leap ~ Another Xi'er ~ Finally, a graduation trip ~ perfect!

It looks good, but the double quotation marks are wrong. Also, when will there be a Shura Field? I can't wait to watch it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

This book might as well be renamed "I Become a Succubus in Beng Beng Beng" [laughter]

Big cheers for the author! I'm optimistic about you!

This book is really wonderful~ It needs writing style, it needs writing style, it needs plot, it has plot, it is still my favorite type of Honkai III book. The five-star rating is well deserved. It's really a rare book. I'm here to congratulate the author in advance for reaching the million-word mark. For the first 200 chapters, the five stars are well deserved. But the subsequent story of all civilizations can only be said to be average. After finishing it, I thought that you, the author, would grow to a new height, but it turned out that you fell apart.

The book is very good, please don't block it. I have already blocked 4 of the Honkai Impact books I've read.

I highly recommend this book, so the character differences in the later stages are a bit big, but as a yandere, it is to be expected how much the character changes.

Lao Tie, reading this book made my lips curl up harder than a 20x AK. Do you know how hard it is to hold back laughter in the early morning? My mother asked me why I was laughing. I said: "Not gone , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , Thank you author

Is the author here? In fact, I can make a small suggestion, because Honkai and Hontetsu are somewhat linked (Hanabi and Vita). To be honest, in the end, we can actually create an opportunity for the protagonist to link up with the Star Dome Railway. After all, it will increase the interest of the stock market. The background story of Honkaitsu is quite good [Chigua][Chigua]

How to put it this way, I haven't read much so far, the writing is relatively new, and the emotional shaping is not that good personally, but overall there are no explosive points. I can just improve more in the future. (You can read it, but only when there are no good articles. Now the volume is large, and it can last for at least 3 days)

The author begs me, please write about the emotional drama between the characters Alicia, Moonlight Pledge and Stargazing and the protagonist. I like these two characters very much. The author has written so many characters that I like, not least of them. If the author writes, please remember to reply to me. Not only the five stars are yours, but my gift is also yours.

Well, all I can say is that I won't be surprised if this book disappears [facepalm][facepalm]

Author, I am a loyal fan of yours. My last 30,000-hour account was accidentally canceled. I particularly like reading this book of yours. Can you agree with me to write a fanfic of your book? This account is a new account that was created recently.

This book may be a bit long in preparation, and sometimes I don't understand what they are doing. I just feel that it is coming out one after another. Overall, it is still very interesting. I hope the author can write it quickly. I really don't have any books to read, and I read this book because it was a trap. I hope the author will get better and better.

I think the ups and downs of emotional scenes are a bit big. Sometimes the relationship is yandere for a while, and the relationship is almost like normal love for a while. It just feels like there is a big contrast between before and after. I feel this way when I read it myself. I feel that it always maintains a kind of emotion, and then the relationship will be strengthened or weakened. The changes will be larger. I hope you can pay attention to it so that there will be no contrast in the reading [eating melon] It is only a personal subjective evaluation.

Yes, it is a book worth reading every day. I hope the author will not stop updating. OK, that's it.

The writing is very good, and the characters fit well with each other, just... Rita...

A very good book, worth reading, but the writing style is a bit poor, but it will get better later on! !

A masterpiece, needless to say, it is beautiful! [Sending Hearts]

Although the male protagonist's combat power is beyond the standard, the plot is relatively reasonable. Still available to watch. For most Honkai fans, this is a good read. After all, other novels are either about pre-civilization and Ellie, or they are cheating all the way until it is fun, and then resurrecting Ellie.

The plot is pretty good, but the shortcoming is that the male protagonist's character is too tolerable. . . . . . . .

Although your writing is very good, the punctuation mark is always wrong.

In the latest chapter, why did Lu Qiong tell Otto directly his plan before seizing Otto's soul?

It's very interesting, but the author seems to have forgotten that there is an Anna in World Snake, and there are actually Yae Sakura and Yae Rei in the protagonist Stigmata. I hope the author will write about it.