Is It Difficult to Do the Task? the End of the Female Speedrun

The plot writing is pretty good, the characters are relatively calm and studious, there are some minor bugs but nothing major. The heroine has a female teacher in the mission world. She is 1.8 Meters tall. She is a powerful woman and is calm and reliable. This is very well received. In the first mission world, there is a pregnant woman who gave birth to twin girls. It is well received. Some small suggestions: I hope to see more reliable female companions and leaders; sanitary napkins don't need to be called aunt's napkins

It's a pretty good novel, but there are some flaws that need attention. In the second world, task one requires the heroine to stay for three months? This task feels inexplicable and pointless. [It is recommended that next time the author wants to slow down the progress of the heroine, he can set some "exploration" tasks, such as looking for a certain mission item in a certain area (X city), or exploring the secrets of (X city) within a limited time... Etc. It is better than simply asking the heroine to stay for a few months. (Unless the system tries every means to kill the heroine, why does it repeatedly give the heroine material conveniences?) One of the female protagonists cried while climbing a mountain. You shouldn't cry casually when the snowy mountains are freezing and it's easy to go blind. (A little common sense, this has nothing to do with being strong or not, tears will turn into ice the moment they come out) In the third world, when the heroine enters the fantasy world, it is said that the most important people in your heart will be reflected. The author wrote about the heroine's companions, but why didn't he write about the heroine's parents? Forehead? And that golden shovel, isn't it in the heroine's space? Did he become a spirit and appear out of thin air? (It feels like a bug and needs to be fixed...) Finally, the author wrote quite well and I look forward to the follow-up plot. (As for why it's not five stars, I like to leave some leeway and decide whether to modify the rating after it's finished.) Final review: Very sloppy ending.

I like the author's setting. After completing the task, there is still time to improve yourself. Physical fitness can also be synchronized to itself. Some writers are working non-stop to survive and have no time to study and settle. Then the golden finger has nothing to do with learning to exercise. It's just a space, and I feel like I can hide and stay alive. All I know is eating and drinking. And then rely on a man to get through it all the way.

Every apocalyptic dungeon is exciting, and the heroine has to work hard to survive. And the author really loves girls very much! Almost every important and shining character is a woman! Moreover, Captain Qing and Ding Yu are both over 180cm tall, with strong figures and high martial arts. This kind of character used to only appear on male protagonists. Who knows, finally an author is willing to break the stereotype. Being tall, strong and able to fight is not exclusive to male characters. Female characters can also have such charm! I really like this book. My first long review is for the author. You wrote very well. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I am very optimistic about you becoming the next great author!

It's a very good book, but it made me collapse. The second world is very exciting and wonderful. I cried half a pack of paper towels as a sequel. The plot logic is good, and the heroine's step-by-step growth is also very inspiring. But do you really not consider lowering the difficulty level? That's not to say lowering the level. A lot, but the speed of the heroine's efforts cannot keep up with the difficulty of the dungeon. This is the second world. The heroine has been hovering on the edge of death. The physical torture is nothing. The mental breakdown makes me feel that the heroine will become a madman in the next two worlds.

The writing is so good, I dare say that this book can beat 95% of Tomato's natural disaster survival novels in an instant. Firstly, the content of the copy is rich and reasonable. It is not the same as some other novels. I can know the plot development after reading one chapter. This book is completely different, especially the second copy. The final ending really surprised me. Really, as long as the author is willing to keep writing, this will definitely be one of Tomato's best survival novels!

Absolutely non-toxic fairy grass. The heroine is calm, thoughtful and responsible. She is also very three-dimensional and like a living person. The other positive characters are strong women. Tomato is amazing because of you.

The score is low, but this article should be improved in the future. I feel it should be around 9.4. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking post-apocalyptic novel. The author's writing style is good, the plot is handled very well, and the heroine also grows up step by step. I feel like the author has laid a lot of groundwork. I hope it won't end badly. Come on [love] [love]

The first few dungeons were okay, especially the snowy mountain section, where you felt powerless as your companions lost their lives one by one and fell in front of you, but the presence of your parents was too weak, and the reality was not as interesting as the dungeons.

The heroine is very calm, prudent and careful in situations, and the logic is very clear. The parents in the first world are also very helpful. The stocking up process is also comfortable to watch. The only drawback is that the current text is a bit thin and not enough to read [crying]

It's good-looking. It caught my attention from the first arctic monster fish world. The heroine has a keen intuition of danger and is very decisive. The description of the disaster is even more touching. Especially when the Mangjiang River burst its banks, the writing was really nervous. The tragedies caused by many people due to disasters and accidents made people feel sad and helpless... Keep up the good work! [Top post][top post][top post]

I don't understand why the rating is so low, because the novel is really well written. First of all, I have never seen anyone write about the end of the world from this perspective. Secondly, each of his stories is well written, except for the inexplicable ending of the last story. I cried when they died on the snowy mountain in the second story. The first story is certainly recognized as the best. I hope the author can write more novels in the future and try to make them longer.

The writing is fairly fluent and the plot is attractive, but the text is not concise enough and there are a lot of colloquial sentences. The heroine is quite cautious, but she seems to be hasty when choosing someone she can trust. For example, when she meets a high school classmate with a mission identity, she can be trusted because she is a high school classmate [face covering] Anyway, it's okay to pass the time and watch.

Super beautiful🤩The growth of the heroine is not achieved overnight, but is slowly honed in various worlds. It feels more and more exciting, and I'm also worried that what happened in the heroine's past world will become increasingly unacceptable. I'm looking forward to the next world [currently in development]

It does seem to work, she is a growth-type heroine, and the heroine is not particularly naive. I personally feel that she should be ruthless when she should be ruthless, and she is not sloppy or anything like that. I really like to watch this type, but generally speaking, there are relatively few of this type. I hope I can keep writing [please update]

The ending is hasty and the explanation is incomplete, but the flaws are not concealed. Especially the life-and-death friendship between several sisters is touching. It is a good story. Thank you to the author for sharing it.

Like! Please update more! I really like the plot where the heroine is almost cheated by the aborigines. I feel that the supporting characters are also very flesh-and-blood and not all serve the survival of the heroine.

Can you update 100 chapters in one day [Punch Out][Punch Out][Punch Out]99 chapters are also fine

Even this 7.0 Good book can be read by me, I'm so great [laughing]

The author's writing style is very good. The whole article is very smooth and has a sense of substitution. However, as you get to the back, the main theme of the article is a bit confusing. It seems that you are addicted to the world of time travel and have no real sense of reality. Originally, these worlds are to save your father, but they are not mentioned much at the end. Come on, author.

QwQ To be honest, I didn't understand the ending very well, but that doesn't affect it, it's a good novel. Too short, Po! ! ! The tone of good novels is always sad, emo for a while

It's good to read. I like this kind of post-apocalyptic writing. Until the latest chapter, I feel that the writing rhythm is quite good. Please give it a try.

Nice! I still have fresh memories of the part of the road from the bursting of the Mangjiang River to the climb to the snow-capped mountains.

The content is well written, but it really has the same tension as if I were trying to survive in the apocalypse. My favorite is the first world. It's that tension, and that's what left a deep impression. The one with a snowy mountain in the later world is also quite heartbreaking, and the ending is a little hasty, but the rest is pretty good.

So far, it's good to watch, the plot is very compact, and the interlocking links are full of tension.

Ding Yu, Huai Yu, this is the top of the snow mountain.

Come on, author! ! Pretty cool! (It's just too short (x

Who and Dada's work directly hit me to death, it's so good, please continue to update, urge me to update ~ I rarely comment, Dada, this is my first time for you.

Not bad, not bad The writing is pretty good, but there is very little.

Except for the ending, which was a bit rushed, there were no peeing spots throughout. It's a very interesting book. Maybe the author was busy, but he tried his best to give an ending. Thank you.