Apocalypse Shuttle: Stockpile My Safe House to the Brim!

The plot writing is pretty good, the characters are relatively calm and studious, there are some minor bugs but nothing major. The heroine has a female teacher in the mission world. She is 1.8 Meters tall. She is a powerful woman and is calm and reliable. This is very well received. In the first mission world, there is a pregnant woman who gave birth to twin girls. It is well received. Some small suggestions: I hope to see more reliable female companions and leaders; sanitary napkins don't need to be called aunt's napkins

It's a pretty good novel, but there are some flaws that need attention. In the second world, task one requires the heroine to stay for three months? This task feels inexplicable and pointless. [It is recommended that next time the author wants to slow down the progress of the heroine, he can set some "exploration" tasks, such as looking for a certain mission item in a certain area (X city), or exploring the secrets of (X city) within a limited time... Etc. It is better than simply asking the heroine to stay for a few months. (Unless the system tries every means to kill the heroine, why does it repeatedly give the heroine material conveniences?) One of the female protagonists cried while climbing a mountain. You shouldn't cry casually when the snowy mountains are freezing and it's easy to go blind. (A little common sense, this has nothing to do with being strong or not, tears will turn into ice the moment they come out) In the third world, when the heroine enters the fantasy world, it is said that the most important people in your heart will be reflected. The author wrote about the heroine's companions, but why didn't he write about the heroine's parents? Forehead? And that golden shovel, isn't it in the heroine's space? Did he become a spirit and appear out of thin air? (It feels like a bug and needs to be fixed...) Finally, the author wrote quite well and I look forward to the follow-up plot. (As for why it's not five stars, I like to leave some leeway and decide whether to modify the rating after it's finished.) Final review: Very sloppy ending.

I like the author's setting. After completing the task, there is still time to improve yourself. Physical fitness can also be synchronized to itself. Some writers are working non-stop to survive and have no time to study and settle. Then the golden finger has nothing to do with learning to exercise. It's just a space, and I feel like I can hide and stay alive. All I know is eating and drinking. And then rely on a man to get through it all the way.

Every apocalyptic dungeon is exciting, and the heroine has to work hard to survive. And the author really loves girls very much! Almost every important and shining character is a woman! Moreover, Captain Qing and Ding Yu are both over 180cm tall, with strong figures and high martial arts. This kind of character used to only appear on male protagonists. Who knows, finally an author is willing to break the stereotype. Being tall, strong and able to fight is not exclusive to male characters. Female characters can also have such charm! I really like this book. My first long review is for the author. You wrote very well. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I am very optimistic about you becoming the next great author!

It's a very good book, but it made me collapse. The second world is very exciting and wonderful. I cried half a pack of paper towels as a sequel. The plot logic is good, and the heroine's step-by-step growth is also very inspiring. But do you really not consider lowering the difficulty level? That's not to say lowering the level. A lot, but the speed of the heroine's efforts cannot keep up with the difficulty of the dungeon. This is the second world. The heroine has been hovering on the edge of death. The physical torture is nothing. The mental breakdown makes me feel that the heroine will become a madman in the next two worlds.

The writing is so good, I dare say that this book can beat 95% of Tomato's natural disaster survival novels in an instant. Firstly, the content of the copy is rich and reasonable. It is not the same as some other novels. I can know the plot development after reading one chapter. This book is completely different, especially the second copy. The final ending really surprised me. Really, as long as the author is willing to keep writing, this will definitely be one of Tomato's best survival novels!

The score is low, but this article should be improved in the future. I feel it should be around 9.4. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking post-apocalyptic novel. The author's writing style is good, the plot is handled very well, and the heroine also grows up step by step. I feel like the author has laid a lot of groundwork. I hope it won't end badly. Come on ❤️ ❤️

Absolutely non-toxic fairy grass. The heroine is calm, thoughtful and responsible. She is also very three-dimensional and like a living person. The other positive characters are strong women. Tomato is amazing because of you.

The first few dungeons were okay, especially the snowy mountain section, where you felt powerless as your companions lost their lives one by one and fell in front of you, but the presence of your parents was too weak, and the reality was not as interesting as the dungeons.

It's good-looking. It caught my attention from the first arctic monster fish world. The heroine has a keen intuition of danger and is very decisive. The description of the disaster is even more touching. Especially when the Mangjiang River burst its banks, the writing was really nervous. The tragedies caused by many people due to disasters and accidents made people feel sad and helpless... Keep up the good work! [Top post][top post][top post]