HPI Dominate Hogwarts with Magic

The heroine is so cute, polite and capable, knows her responsibilities, behaves like a qualified young heroine, and has the character of a child. I really like the twins in this book, they will tie the heroine's hair, he is a good brother, the heroine's twin brother is also super good, he likes to dress up the heroine, in short, it is very comfortable to watch.

On a whim, the author could write: A large number of oriental people wearing uniform clothes come here to do business or something, and then the heroine orders everyone else to salute and call them "Young Master"? I'm a local, I like it😍I can write it in the article or write a side story, is that okay? It's okay🥺

I stayed up late and finished reading it. Wow, it's amazing. I really like how this book portrays Draco. He is growing up on his own. The relationship with Little Al is very sweet. It's not an industrial saccharine. He really starts to care about each other and likes him little by little. The family relationship between Al and the Weasley brothers and the friendship between Al and Hermione are heart-warming to watch. Da Da handles each character very well. I like watching Al develop his own society, and I like watching the proud Draco do what he likes. Oh, there is a small flaw. The portrayal of Lucius Narcissa is quite interesting, but it doesn't matter that there are not many scenes. Another point is that there are too many oriental elements. Lu Qing, who appears later, really wants to complain. Fortunately, there are not many scenes, just routines. Although there are many oriental elements in it, it is undeniable that the logic and closed loop are perfect.

There are really no places that don't have OC right now.

9 Points, the original heroine Tianlin/Alcia, a strong woman, a hidden savior, prophesied thousands of years ago by both the East and the West, the heroine came a thousand years later, entered Hogwarts, CP Draco.

Alshea was born out of our love and disagreement. She secretly felt that she had a mission and was extremely strong. The club she founded brought new power to the magic world. The Eastern warlocks also integrated harmoniously, and she was the leader of the students. Alshea was not used to Draco's bad habits at first, but later urged Draco to practice physical skills. Draco found his own direction and became stronger little by little. The relationship between the two was sweet but not greasy.

Nice. The writing is good, the heroine has an outstanding image, is powerful, and is a cute little potato with two ball heads [I learned it]. I don't know if the CP is Draco, I want to see a sweet love. And the ending must be happy, not cruel.

It's really, really, really beautiful! My poor language cannot describe it. I was so excited to see the male and female protagonists together. Although I was prepared for it, this was the first time I read a CP novel in my life. I used to think that there were no romance or CP novels that could give the heroine respect. This was the first time I was so satisfied with a CP novel.

It's so pretty! It's not OOC at all. The heroine's character is very three-dimensional! I really like this calm yet powerful one, it's so cool to watch! There are no loopholes in the background setting and story logic! Press your head and push! (I dare not give five stars but it is really worth giving five stars)

The female protagonist has very upright views, and the male protagonist also makes changes for the female protagonist. I really like Hermione! The theme is novel! Witness the encounter between Eastern magic and Western magic!

It is in line with the logical system I created, and the dialogues between the plot characters are also in line with the characteristics of the characters. It truly makes each character three-dimensional. In the end, it is not a death-defying victory. Draco is not a sun that cannot rise or a dusk that cannot set. It is everyone's love for Draco that brings Tianlin here. Tianlin is a truly independent person. He is not too close to the protagonists. Everything is a natural development of the plot.

This is the oriental heroine x Xiaolong with the smoothest and most seamless setting that I have ever seen. But it's still being serialized. Woohoo.

It's beautiful [sends my heart][sends my heart], the heroine is very cute and powerful

It's beautiful. The heroine didn't dote on Xiaolong, but pointed out his mistakes. I like this [Adoration]

Very well written fanfic [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] It took me a long time to find the one that suits my taste [Adoration] I hope the author will give you a lot of support [Blow a kiss]

It's really good-looking, the heroine has a lot of personality, Draco's character is not ruined, and the plot is also interesting. It's the best of the best!

The setting is beautiful and the emotional scenes are also very good! The protagonist's image is particularly complete The pace is a little slow, and a lot of details of important scenes are written. But although the pace is slow, the emotions are all in it [full] The heroine is currently the main character's heartthrob, capable of bending and stretching.

Very nice, looking forward to updates. In fact, if the heroine is written as an otome, it would be more interesting to have multiple male protagonists. I always feel that Draco is too timid, a bit like a spoiled man in literature, just a husband specially arranged for the Queen.

Really like it! I came here from the author Xiaohongshu, and the excerpts of the articles posted by the author Xiaohongshu are also very good, so I was attracted immediately. I read half of it last night. I woke up at noon today and read it all afternoon, finishing nearly 300 chapters. I am very picky about books. If I am not very interested in some books, I will not keep reading them. If I am interested, I will keep reading them. This fanfic is my favorite besides HP and several others. The plot is very natural. The heroine's family background is also great. I wonder if with Althea, Cedric would not have died? Then my Saiqiu can come true, hahaha. The relationship between Alshea and Draco is also very good. I have read the original work and I am very pleased with the transformation of Draco and the transformation of the Malfoy family. It is really good. Hehe, the tsundere young master's character has improved and I like it too. It would be nice if I found this book later or if the author started writing it earlier. It would be better if I found this book in a completed state, so that I can read it in one sitting. Hahahaha, I like to read books in a coherent way, so that I can better understand it. (Don't mind my personal thoughts) The author must continue to write more! ! ! ! ! ! It's best to update ten times a day (no)! ! ! ! ! ! !

Increase the score. Why is it so low after not looking at it for a few days?

Come on, author, I will catch up to the ending. Just one on one, no otome required. Take good care of my Draco, Snape and Sirius, thank you so much

It's good. The writing is smooth and natural. I love the heroine's character very much.

Super pretty! ! I found the full article on Tomato from the essay posted by the author. The author writes about the transformation of the young master very delicately. The characterization of Baby Linlin is also very good. When encountering danger, not only does other characters feel at ease when they see her, but it also makes readers feel the same way.

The collision of Eastern magic and Western magic is a HP theme that I like very much. However, many of the Eastern magic techniques were lost in the end, but this one is different. It can be said that it has always existed. Little Al is very powerful, and the interaction with the little dragon at the back is also sweet [shy] [shy] Alshia's life experience is finally revealed, and it's true that I keep following the update. Although I can understand her mother, I still feel sorry for Little Al. Big cheers for the author, more updates! !

It looks good, but when will the emotional line develop? [Adoration]

It's a great HP. The author would like to ask if it can enhance the heroine's strength in potions class and help her find a wand that suits her [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

It's very beautiful, and the author writes it very well. Why is the rating so low?

It's a very long and enjoyable story for me to read [Sending my heart]. It's a very complete story. It's richly written in every school year, and it's not a boring anecdote plot. It integrates well with Eastern content. Finally, it's not a mindless and enjoyable article! The relationship with Draco is also a natural one, very interesting and sweet. There is a slight problem. Because Draco gets along with the heroine (?) More, his character will be quite different from the original work, but overall he is still very good.

The writing is really good. Work hard to update it. I believe many people will read it. Come on, the writing is really good. I hope it won't stop updating. It's rare to see such good writing. I really, really like it.

It's a good read [heartfelt]. It's the first time I read an HP fanfic. The heroine is the young head of a big family in the Eastern Hidden World. I like watching strong women.