I Have Become the Immortal Emperor After Being Fed by the Empress and Senior Sister.

Single heroine, sweet and sweet. Although the beginning is a bit classic, the characters are very concrete, everyone has their own position and thoughts, and the world view is also very grand. Although it has not been developed yet, we can already get a glimpse of it. It is either inheritance or dual timelines. It is a new book, and it is uncrowned.

This book has been updated since the beginning, and I often see friends saying that it is very similar to the previous book without changing the characters. In fact, this is not the case. This book only partially follows the character setting and part of the plot of the previous book. They are two completely different books. Friends who have read both books at the same time should find that September's performance in the latest book is obviously stronger. The design of plots and foreshadowings are also endless and unconventional. Overall, it is a qualitative improvement. In terms of characterization, many characters have more distinct images, and even have impressive memory points. For example, when we talk about showing off our literary talents, we think of Baili Changkong; when we talk about being covered with quilts, we think of Su Qingxuan; when we talk about taking photos to miss people, we think of Bai Qi... These characters all have unique character traits. Although some of them are not the protagonists, they also act in flesh and blood in the book and show their unique personality charm, which can be said to be very commendable. The book is still in the development stage and has relatively broad development potential. Friends who have read it can also give it a five-star review if they think it is good. This will help encourage the author to continue to make progress and bring us better works in the near future. At the same time, the work will be carried forward [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post] Judging from the reading time [making faces], it is still very interesting so far. It is told like a story, the system is complete, and the foreshadowing will be recycled regularly, so you can enter the game with confidence.

It doesn't matter if it has a single female lead, as long as the emotional scenes are well written. The content is quite novel, and I am very excited to read it. I really look forward to the male protagonist's identity being revealed, hurry!

Very good, the male and female protagonists are childhood sweethearts, pure love, the male protagonist is a swordsman, and he has an "evil cultivator" vest. Overall it's not brainless, it's not a trivial story, the plot and logic are pretty good, it's funny but not cliche, and I feel it's quite suitable for making anime. Different from the cruelty of the traditional world of immortality (such as Wang Mazi's cultivation of immortality), this is a world of immortality with laws (yes, in the world of immortality, anyone who kills people and breaks the law must stay in a dark room). Seeing that the current world view is okay, combined with the history of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors of the Pre-Qin Dynasty, there are human races, demon races, alien races, sword cultivators, Confucian cultivators, holy places, academies, etc. To be honest, this book's Tomato score is a bit low. I've read some novice novels that scored 9.3/9.4 And I'm really speechless.

It's okay, but it's just a bit of a novice. If you say yes, senior sister, emm... I feel like I'm a bit cheating on myself emotionally (just a bit stupid), but if I'm not honest, it's actually quite suitable for a novice's refreshing novel🌚🌚 Little Chujiu remembers which channel should be better for this book [Working on draft][Working on draft]

Well written, suitable for killing time

Very well written But I just feel awkward for no reason, and I can't explain why. I have always had a conspiracy theory [laughing] I feel that something is not right about the destiny given by Heaven to the heroine, the Immortal Emperor. Maybe he wanted to assimilate the heroine's will into his own. Then the male protagonist cut off the heroine's Immortal Emperor destiny with a sword and called her back. In the end, the heroine re-certified the Immortal Emperor by her own ability. I actually gained a clear idea on my own. It's really amazing. The book is a good book, five stars, worth owning [laughing evilly]

After reading the reviews, most of the low stars are from people who don't have the patience to read on. After reading the rest, they will basically think that the author's writing is good, the characters are well created, and the world view is also well designed. At present, it seems that most people are struggling with the issue of whether to have a single female protagonist, emm, and are not expressing their opinions. In short, I hope more book lovers will find the brilliance of this book after reading it [Cool]

It's super cool, but I wish it had a single heroine instead of multiple heroines! ! !

Give it four stars. This type of writing is too tiring to watch. It is indeed neither mindless nor enjoyable writing, but it is tiring to watch. It is about calculations and calculations. This kind of subject matter is relatively old and not new. I might have liked it when I was younger, but I will get tired of it after reading too much. In addition, the pace of modern life and work is relatively fast. I don't have the patience and energy to follow this kind of writing. I don't want to continue reading after more than 600 chapters. Now I really prefer themes that are more relaxing and healing. However, the author's writing style is indeed good and the writing is very delicate. Moreover, various foreshadowings are indeed explained, and I am even worried that readers will not understand the review prompts and so on. It is indeed attentive and the plot rhythm is excellent.

In fact, this book is considered acceptable in Tomato. There is nothing wrong with the logic, there is a bit of foreshadowing, and there is nothing too poisonous about the plot. The rating could be higher ╮(￣▽￣)╭, 9.3 Is almost the same.

I thought it was about a single heroine. I had read about it several times before but never watched it. Today I looked at a few of them on a whim and it was pretty good. Then I looked at the comment section and found out that it was a harem. I went to read a book instead.

All members' IQ is online. The background is grand. It's really beautiful. The setting makes sense. The battles between strong men are also very exciting. It's just that the heroine was written too strong. Bai Qi and Ye Tong are actually quite miserable as well. Looks good. I didn't think so at first, but later I felt that this setting was very novel. Later I felt that the real world of cultivating immortals should be like this. Don't give away people's lives in vain. There is order. ) I used to think that the ancient orthodoxy that had existed for tens of thousands or millions of years could be destroyed at the drop of a hat by a self-made son of destiny. (The 50-year-old Cao Cao and Liu Bang were able to play with people's hearts through applause. He was a cunning and cunning man. He did things without leaking water. /) Not to mention that human life is like a piece of grass. In the world of cultivation with limited resources, those cultivators who have lived for tens of millions of years should be as smart as this book. I really like this book and I hope the author will keep writing it and not finish it. I don't like that shady character very much.

Overall, it's pretty good. The fantasy sword cultivator is easy and funny every day, and even now in chapter 192, the rhythm of the plot is still acceptable. It's very satisfying for someone like me who is looking for books every day and reading updates from authors in the early hours of the morning.

Among the books I have read, the author's writing style is outstanding. Unlike other authors, the author naturally promotes the characters' ambitions, emotions and plots, and it is extremely smooth, without giving people a sense of abruptness or discomfort.

A very good point is that there are very few things that are naturally written about the protagonist's mentality and structure that progress with the master's realm. On the other hand, there are very few people who can perfect the world view and piece together a complete time from the fragments, and can dig the hole of cause and effect and fill it back perfectly.

It's okay, but not many people are watching. I hope it can continue like this. Now I want to see the protagonist's waistcoat fall off in front of the senior sister more and more. You guys, I'm so excited! ! !

It's so well written that it's ready for publication, but the platform doesn't give it much popularity. I've skipped material mechanics, C language, and English. I've finished reading this book. It's so nice [Adore][Adore][Adore] The author, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Stop being single [face covering] To be honest, it's not impossible to write two female protagonists, the fox is also great and there are many male protagonists

Hahaha [laughing] It's been almost a day since I found this book and I've read it for more than 500 chapters. I really enjoyed reading it. The author is also capable and made the characters in the text vivid. In this case, the author will write 10,000 pictures first [smiles]

The description is delicate, the writing skills are skillful, and it is very interesting. First of all, you can tell that the author is a very interesting person. He is one of the most interesting souls in the world [laughing], especially for the setting of the world view and virtual environment.

Yes, it really should have the appearance of a great world. In the early stage, "Qin Feng" was used too much and the writing was stiff in some places. The writing skills of the fighting descriptions can be improved. The overall plot is good, and the daily life with the heroine is also very interesting. It's interesting to see the foreshadowing laid out bit by bit in the later stage.

Contains spoilers It's very good-looking, not a cool novel. Except for the bureaucratic style of writing, which is a bit childish, it's okay. It mainly focuses on a path of cultivating immortality where the consequences are reversed. However, the later writing is not as spirited as the early ones. The dozens of chapters of "Fighting with Myself" are the peak. I personally think that it started to fall off a bit after going back to the past, but overall it is very attractive to me, especially after Qingtong was born.

The world view is very complete and the writing is really good! In particular, the plot is very complete and the main narrative is very delicate. The only drawback is that you may not be able to understand it in the early stage, but this is really a very good book. Why is the rating so low [crying]

A good book, it has the feeling of "Sword Comes" and has the legacy of "Perfect World". It is not as good as the works that are widely circulated on the Internet, but it can also be rated as the best article. The writing style is more humorous, but there is no lack of beautiful words. The characters in the book have distinct personalities, just like the breathing and breathing of real people. The laughter, anger and curses all come from the heart and environment, without any sense of artificiality. The solemnity and humor complement each other, which shows the lightness and darkness of the human heart, and the sense of imperfection, which adds to the reality. The interweaving of light and dark lines in the book is not apparent in the early stage, which can easily cause those who are confused to abandon it. However, it gradually becomes apparent in the middle stage, making viewers marvel at the grandeur of the world and be amazed. Although it is not finished, if the writing style does not change, the writing style remains the same, and it must be among the best here.

This book is like a magnificent bridge spanning reality and fantasy, bringing readers into a fairy world full of mystery, fantasy and profound philosophy. The work [Title of Xianxia Novel] is undoubtedly a dazzling star in this field of literature. It has successfully touched the hearts of countless readers with its extraordinary imagination, exquisite conception, full characterization and exciting plot. ## 1. The structure of the world of cultivating immortals - a wonderful fusion of macro and micro 1. **Macro world - the vast Xianxia territory** The world of immortality carefully constructed in this novel is staggering in scale. From the perspective of the layout of heaven and earth, the novel depicts a layered universe structure. The lowest level is the mortal world, where there are bustling mortal cities, kingdoms are in dispute, and people live an ordinary life full of fireworks. The upper level is a low-level world of cultivating immortals with many sects of cultivating immortals. The sects are often located in valleys, peaks or spiritual islands filled with spiritual energy. Further up, as the level of immortality increases, the world becomes more and more mysterious. In the intermediate level of immortality, there are ancient and powerful families, who guard the magic weapons and techniques that have been passed down for thousands of years. In the high-level world of immortal cultivation, it is the realm of the truly powerful. Above the sky, there is the Immortal Palace and the Divine Palace. Each world is connected through space cracks, teleportation arrays or immortal roads. For example, the Immortal Road, which opens every thousand years, connects the lower world and the upper world. This is a cruel competition. Countless low-level immortal cultivators embark on the Immortal Road with the dream of ascending to immortality, but only a few can successfully overcome many difficulties and reach the upper world. This progressive world layout makes the entire Xianxia world three-dimensional and rich, as if readers are in an endless and profound universe. 2. **Microcosm—the meticulous system of cultivating immortals** At the micro level, the system of cultivating immortality in this novel is meticulous to the extreme. The realm of cultivators is clear and logical. From the initial Qi training period, Qi practitioners can only introduce Qi into the body and slowly accumulate meager spiritual energy in the meridians. Their attack methods are limited. At most, they can only control some spiritual energy into simple protection or attack techniques. At the foundation building stage, the spiritual base can be condensed in the Dantian, initially connected with the magic weapon, the movement will become more agile, and the life span will also begin to increase. At the elixir-forming stage, the natal golden elixir will be formed in the body. The elixir contains powerful spiritual power and can cast intermediate spells and fly in the air for a short period of time. The Nascent Soul stage is a huge leap. The Nascent Soul is nurtured and formed in the Dantian. It is like another smaller self. The Nascent Soul can be separated to control magic weapons or attack enemies secretly. In this state, immortal cultivators can go deep into dangerous places to search for treasures. The higher stages of transformation into gods, refining voids, etc. Each stage has its own unique logo, ability improvement, and tribulation test. The system of exercises is equally intricate. There are exercises with various attributes in the novel, such as the five elements exercises of metal, wood, water, fire, earth, and more mysterious exercises with special attributes such as wind, thunder, ice, dark light, etc. Each technique has its own unique ways of practicing, its performance in different realms, and the spells derived from it. Take the legendary "Nine Suns Burning Heaven Technique" as an example. This is a top-notch fire-attributed technique. Once you practice it to a high level, you will transform into Nine Suns. Wherever it passes, the sky will be burned with blazing flames, melting everything in the world. In terms of the magic weapon system, magic weapons are divided into many types, such as magic weapons, magic weapons, spiritual treasures, Xuanzong treasures, etc., Ranging from ordinary magic weapons that can be purchased directly from the market to Xuanzong treasures with spiritual intelligence and refined from immortal materials. The magic weapons of each level are completely different in terms of refining materials, refining technology and power. Such a complete and meticulous system of cultivating immortals builds a solid and stable framework for the entire story, allowing all immortal affairs to unfold reasonably and wonderfully. ## 2. Character creation - all kinds of personalities and all kinds of looks 1. **Protagonist——The legendary road from ordinary people to peerless immortals** The protagonist [name of protagonist] of this novel has a very full and three-dimensional image. It started from an ordinary poor boy who suffered from the warmth and ups and downs of the world. He was born in a small village that was harassed by monsters. His family was brutally murdered while trying to protect the village. This tragic life experience became the initial motivation for him to embark on the path of cultivating immortality - revenge. Full of hatred and unyielding will, he was taken into the immortal cultivating sect by chance by a casual cultivator. In the process of cultivating immortality, he showed perseverance that ordinary people could not match. Faced with the bullying from other disciples in the sect and the lack of resources, he did not complain at all, but took the initiative to seek opportunities. During the experience of searching for spiritual herbs, he resolutely entered the forbidden area known as the "Valley of Death" because he knew that only there could there be rare spiritual herbs that could quickly improve his strength. In the valley, he was attacked by powerful phantom beasts, but with a calm mind and his own wisdom, he used the mechanisms and environment in the valley to skillfully deal with the phantom beasts. In the end, he not only harvested the spiritual grass, but also unexpectedly obtained a book of cultivation experience left by ancient immortal cultivators. His character is also constantly growing and changing on the road to immortality. At first, his heart was filled with hatred and he only wanted revenge. But as his realm improved and his knowledge grew, his horizons gradually broadened. After experiencing a war between sects and seeing countless innocent lives in ruins, he began to have a sense of mission in his heart to save the common people. He is no longer just an avenger, but also a cultivator with great compassion. This kind of character change in the protagonist's growth process is natural and smooth, making readers full of respect for him and paying more attention to his destiny. 2. **Portraits of supporting actors—starry stars, all shining** The supporting characters are definitely not dispensable in this novel. Take the protagonist's master [Master's name] as an example. He is an elder in the Nascent Soul stage and has his own unique philosophy of cultivating immortals. He does not stick to the sect's stereotypes and believes that cultivating immortality is a process of continuous self-exploration. He fell in love with the protagonist not because of his outstanding talent, but because of the perseverance in his eyes. When teaching the protagonist, he adopts a free-range teaching method. He said: "In the way of cultivating immortals, the most important thing is to avoid relying on others. You have to explore the secrets yourself." This allowed the protagonist to develop a strong sense of independence at an early age.

It's very interesting, but there are too many calculations. It made me tired from watching it, and I also felt a sense of frustration and powerlessness.

Although there are some minor problems at the beginning, overall, it is actually very interesting, but you need to be a little patient to get through the first few chapters before you can savor the love process between Ye Tong and his senior sister [Adoration]

It's a very nice book. The characters are vivid and the plot is well connected. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope Qingxuan can break the control others have over him. I hope Ye Tong and Qingxuan will last forever.

The emotional descriptions of the characters are profound, the environment is well-depicted, and the details are fully described. It can be said to be truly vivid, and many of the "happy-like" processing techniques are not obtrusive. They not only meet the readers' needs for beauty, but also do not lose logic and rationality. What is flesh and blood, and what is perfect world construction?