Superpowers Refresh Weekly: I'm the Mastermind Behind Blue Star

Very nice novel. But there are still many flaws. First of all, I think the biggest problem in this book is lack of content. It's not that the author is not given credit. After all, the author relies on the number of words to make a living. But if the content is irrelevant and important outside the plot, it will affect the reading. For example: the U. S. Conference, the whole article is about the comparison of military power between China and the United States. It is just a few chapters, and it is long and boring without being separated from the plot. The author didn't understand the priority issue, and some plots that could be written in one sentence were delayed for a long time without thinking about whether the readers would be willing to read it. Secondly, the image of the main characters is not well created and their personalities are vague, giving people a feeling that the characters are hollow and stiff. The protagonist is the descendant of an anti-narcotics police officer. Although there is nothing wrong with it, if he does something bad later, he will easily be scolded by many people. Finally, there is the problem of the protagonist's golden finger. Although the superpowers obtained are very strong, the development of the protagonist is very shallow, only scratching the surface, resulting in many loopholes in abilities. The main attraction of this book is that the protagonist acquires different superpowers every week, and uses these superpowers to stir up the world behind the scenes. Friends who can accept the above shortcomings can give it a try. The above is my opinion after reading it now. I hope the author will work hard and write an excellent work.

If the author doesn't get dizzy, it would be a very good behind-the-scenes article The biggest problem with this book at present is that it is too watery. If you want to follow it, it will be a very painful thing. It takes several chapters for a pseudo-Godzilla to appear, and most of them are about various human affairs and political affairs. If you want to play extraordinary, play extraordinary. It is best to have less description of the international situation and human beings. Spending too much ink on this type of thing will lead to the fact that if you want to enjoy this book, you have to read it for dozens of chapters before reading it.

Since it is possible to use material recombination to combine psychic powers into biological machines. The three current skills can also be combined again to form a traceless one. After the soul leaves the body, it is transported through space. After arriving at the target location, it is reorganized using matter. This can be done quickly and without leaving any traces. There is no need to fly slowly.

In the beginning, Yuri has psychic powers and becomes a superhero, right? The most positive episode. Fast forward to the deployment of psychic beacons.

This kind of story can be written with or without a female protagonist, as long as you don't create a harem of multiple female protagonists.

The sea, you are all water An entire sea of water

Author, when will you be able to enter the universal transcendence? Give a specific ability, such as fantasy manifestation? Can animals or humans achieve genetic breakthroughs? Mechanical prosthetic transformation? ... Can there be a fourth natural disaster in the later stage? It would be so much fun if it could come out. If you want to see players doing things, go to other worlds, and when the protagonist's abilities have increased enough to allow players to travel to other worlds. Will there be demons or something like that later? Vampire? Angel? Fallen angel? …Will there be Cthulhu?

Waiting for the author's novel to be blocked

It looks good, I hope it doesn't suck later

Wonderful, as long as you have fun with Ami, we will be friends