Super Powers Are Refreshed Every Week. Are You Using It to Tease Wuchang?

Very nice novel. But there are still many flaws. First of all, I think the biggest problem in this book is lack of content. It's not that the author is not given credit. After all, the author relies on the number of words to make a living. But if the content is irrelevant and important outside the plot, it will affect the reading. For example: the U. S. Conference, the whole article is about the comparison of military power between China and the United States. It is just a few chapters, and it is long and boring without being separated from the plot. The author didn't understand the priority issue, and some plots that could be written in one sentence were delayed for a long time without thinking about whether the readers would be willing to read it. Secondly, the image of the main characters is not well created and their personalities are vague, giving people a feeling that the characters are hollow and stiff. The protagonist is the descendant of an anti-narcotics police officer. Although there is nothing wrong with it, if he does something bad later, he will easily be scolded by many people. Finally, there is the problem of the protagonist's golden finger. Although the superpowers obtained are very strong, the development of the protagonist is very shallow, only scratching the surface, resulting in many loopholes in abilities. The main attraction of this book is that the protagonist acquires different superpowers every week, and uses these superpowers to stir up the world behind the scenes. Friends who can accept the above shortcomings can give it a try. The above is my opinion after reading it now. I hope the author will work hard and write an excellent work.

If the author doesn't get dizzy, it would be a very good behind-the-scenes article The biggest problem with this book at present is that it is too watery. If you want to follow it, it will be a very painful thing. It takes several chapters for a pseudo-Godzilla to appear, and most of them are about various human affairs and political affairs. If you want to play extraordinary, play extraordinary. It is best to have less description of the international situation and human beings. Spending too much ink on this type of thing will lead to the fact that if you want to enjoy this book, you have to read it for dozens of chapters before reading it.

Since it is possible to use material recombination to combine psychic powers into biological machines. The three current skills can also be combined again to form a traceless one. After the soul leaves the body, it is transported through space. After arriving at the target location, it is reorganized using matter. This can be done quickly and without leaving any traces. There is no need to fly slowly.

In the beginning, Yuri has psychic powers and becomes a superhero, right? The most positive episode. Fast forward to the deployment of psychic beacons.

The sea, you are all water An entire sea of water

This kind of story can be written with or without a female protagonist, as long as you don't create a harem of multiple female protagonists.

Author, when will you be able to enter the universal transcendence? Give a specific ability, such as fantasy manifestation? Can animals or humans achieve genetic breakthroughs? Mechanical prosthetic transformation? ... Can there be a fourth natural disaster in the later stage? It would be so much fun if it could come out. If you want to see players doing things, go to other worlds, and when the protagonist's abilities have increased enough to allow players to travel to other worlds. Will there be demons or something like that later? Vampire? Angel? Fallen angel? …Will there be Cthulhu?

Waiting for the author's novel to be blocked

It looks good, I hope it doesn't suck later

My imagination is good, my knowledge is good, at least I am willing to investigate, but I am also poisonous, or in other words, the sea, you are all water (ˊ•̥▵•)੭₎₎

Wonderful, as long as you have fun with Ami, we will be friends

After reading it for a while, I can clearly feel that the author has a lot of knowledge and probably really understands it. There are some real feelings revealed in the article, so it seems a bit watery. After looking at the negative reviews, most of them were skipped or just glanced at, without seeing the details. Personally, I think it's pretty good. If the plot could develop a little faster, it would probably be worth 9 points. I also hope the author can persevere.

The author writes 100,000 words a day, right? There is too little written, not enough to read

Support support support Grinding and chirping

Anyway, it is well written, so just trust me.

[Understood] I feel good now, please come on, author

Let me give you a five-star rating first. It looks very good so far [laughs][laughs]

Very good, come on author

Okay, okay, come on, author!

Tomato is a very good novel

Yossi, good themes are often new books

The author is good at everything, but it's too short.

The people behind the scenes bring some fun to this boring world

Good book. The Tomato author likes to feed poison like crazy. This book will not increase blood pressure. Can watch

A very good behind-the-scenes article

The author writes carefully and does not want to be clichéd.

It's quite good. I hope it won't stop updating. It's one of the more interesting books I've read recently.

The writing is good, there are no obvious loopholes, and the plot design is also good. It is a very first-class novel.

It feels okay, come on! Can you advance the plot quickly? Feeling a little watery

The pace is faster than most of the extraordinary scenes. It's not too rushed, but it's not too fast. It's just right. I like it😍