The Uchiha Dance King of the Cultivation World

Next, I'm going to tell a story about the power of a god who can't hold back tears. The name is Obito, the top spot name is, because of true love, blooming thousands of flowers, releasing the nine tails, fighting the four generations, controlling the water shadow, deceiving Nagato, unifying the Akatsuki, gathering the tailed beasts, starting four battles, turning into ten tails, entering the reincarnation, fighting Saunaru, Obito's name is love, willing to be the enemy of the world, and the military horse is only for Rin in his life. People who dare to develop with the world don't dare to express their feelings to the people they like. You have the most powerful kaleidoscope that can see through everything, but it can't see through your heart. The pain of the Ten-Tails' backlash is far less than one ten thousandth of losing Rin... It's hard to hide tears with the power of God, Rin is everywhere you see [helmet]

Be sure to check it out, brother, it's not in vain, brother sends you three love messages [sending hearts] to you three times a day

The current book that I wrote is readable. The only thing I feel is insufficient is that the description of some of the skills of these monks in the world of immortality is too monotonous. You must know that no matter what kind of novel or cultivation novel it is, the monks who transform themselves into gods can destroy a city with a single basic attack, but when it comes to fighting the protagonist , most of them use physical skills. I know that the author wants to reflect the protagonist's physical skills, but I think it is better to give those cultivators some huge and macro skills, such as adding some ultimate moves and magical powers, such as the ultimate finger move that can transform thousands of feet, or the condensed giant sword that is thousands of feet long. Do you think this is irritating? Although this puts a lot of pressure on the protagonist, after all, there is an image of a sword falling towards the protagonist, and it also has a locking function. To be honest, I don't know what skills the protagonist uses to block it, but it's really nice to see.

Five stars for your support. It's very well written and a very novel idea, but I hope the flame ball fan can get into Ban's hands.

Well written, very elegant, the best I have ever seen It looks good, Madara is somewhat different from Madara's original appearance, and the subject matter is not bad. The author will try his best to keep updating

Not too bad. But Ban is becoming less and less like him, and there is also the setting of chakra. People in other worlds generally cannot cultivate chakra. Ban can directly cultivate chakra without giving chakra seeds to others. The source of chakra is the sacred tree. If you are cultivating natural energy, it would be okay.

Come on! This is the first book I've read on this subject.

It's very beautiful, 10 or even 9 points (appreciation) I have read at least 5 books about Madara. I have wanted to read about cultivating immortals for a long time, but unfortunately there are too few. I want to see Six Paths Madara as soon as possible.

The writing is good. Personally, I think the only flaw is that Banye is too humble in writing, because he should be the kind of character who is self-reliant and unruly. Is it the king's ministers who lead the land in the world, or the king's land?

I think as long as Madara's temper doesn't change, it doesn't matter whether the ninjutsu techniques are reasonable or not. Just read it and enjoy it. If you really want to worry about it, there are really not many books about human beings that you can read.

Suggested name change (Uchiha Madara Shusenden)

5 Star praise support it

I searched the whole bookstore but there was no book about Naruto traveling through time and cultivating immortals. I wanted to find someone to learn from the book in the Sutra Pavilion. The protagonist can create a series of spells at home. I thought I would write one myself, and I accidentally discovered this book. Not to mention, the plot is compact and the world view is grand. I couldn't help but start following it.

Very nice, I like it very much. It would be nice to add Izanagi or some Nami. I feel like we can change it and change the cost of consuming a Sharingan to consuming life span or chakra or other costs, which can also be used as a trump card. Personal advice, hope it helps.

Yes, after reading so many Naruto novels, this is the only one where Naruto and Xiu Xian collide.

Okay, okay, I've seen it so far. The best book that combines the cultivation of immortals and the ninja world.

The imagination is unique and awesome. Keep up the good work.

It's quite acceptable. The combat power belongs to the older immortality writings. Those who have read some of YY's larger immortality writings don't need to come in to spread your sense of superiority in the immortality combat power [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It's a very good book. Madara's character fits the character very well, and it makes people feel less serious than the original version. The combat power of the whole book is not too collapsed. It is one of the best books I have ever read among fans. The various settings of cultivating immortals are also very well written, and the various close-ups and details of the characters also make people feel very comfortable. It feels like you are immersed in the book when you read it. In short, it is a very good book, highly recommended!

Looks like I can support it

Except for taking Lin Wuxian, my biological mother, with me all the way, everything is fine. Goodbye.

It's possible, but later on I felt that Madara was not so domineering, and instead overlapped with traditional immortality writing.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

Give Mr. Ban a wife [shy]

Why don't you update the author? Don't stop updating @

Come on, author, don't stop it, it's so beautiful [Like][Like][Like] I really like it, I met a treasure [like][like][like]

Really beautiful, one of the few masterpieces

Ban Ye has changed from a Shura from the Ninja World to a Shura from the Immortal World. The fusion of elements from the Ninja World and the Immortal World is quite novel. Not bad.

It is in line with the characters, rich in content, strange in imagination, with twists and turns in the plot, and outstanding imagination.

It's pretty good, keep up the coding