Mansui's Bizarre Adventure

I feel like I'm looking at my wife from 1,000 years ago

One of the few modern articles on death by hunger, the author's writing is also very interesting Then... Wan Suiye Wan Sui Wait a minute, why is the title of the book "Goodness" and not "Liangsui" [Laughing and crying]

When a wolf encounters a lot of ears, he becomes well-intentioned and dies of hunger when he travels thousands of miles. Bo Mujiang has made an appointment to live and die together, and it's hard to calm down. Thousands of arrows pierced the heart, but they never regretted it. They looked at each other and despised the royal power with a smile. From then on, the mist and rain fell on Jincheng, and one person held an umbrella and two people walked together. The grains are plentiful and you enjoy glory, and the livestock are prosperous and you get wealth and honor. I hope that in the next life we ​​will be blessed with abundant food, and we will be reunited without illness or disaster. The white horse has passed by and it is clear that it has not gone. Time flies and the prosperous age comes. This year is also the Sui Man Day, and there are no people in the Sui Man Festival that year.

I have been feeling very sad after watching the entire plot. After watching the second chapter, I feel better. Thank you for giving Mansui a warm mouth!

Actually, there is a big loophole (but I won't say it) [please update]

I searched and found this book. Guess what? I found the author through the video.

Very good Thousand Miles Journey fan, it makes the roasted sweet potato spin in my hand [laughter]

It's a good fanfic. The only flaw is that the world is too strange. It seems that the whole world revolves around Mansui. It feels like a dream that Mansui had. But it doesn't make sense logically. It seems that the whole world exists only for Mansui. It's like a dream. I hope the author can simply pay attention to it.

I just tried to search for it, but I didn't expect it to be there, and it was also written very well.

It's good to watch, I like it a lot. I was a bit dissatisfied with the different endings of Starving Death, but this one is okay. I personally hope there will be a warm and festive ending (if the ending is disappearing or not very good, please leave me a comment after reading it, so I won't watch it, thank you)

It's so beautiful and I love to watch the quick updates, the sweet Ryo and Sui are the best (dog head)

Most of the time I read this book, I wanted to see the interaction with Mansui, but the author made a fatal mistake. After writing for so long, I saw that many of them were developing branch plots. Generally speaking, the impression is not very good. The author, you have not understood the audience at all. Moreover, there is an unreasonable part where the protagonist only met Mansui after playing this game. However, after Mansui traveled through time, no one said she looked like her. Having said that... Well, I think daily writing is the most test of writing skills. I am not saying that your writing skills are not good. I just made some small suggestions and hope that the author can practice his writing skills again. Of course, I can also see that the author is working very hard on writing this novel, so come on, author! ! ! In short, in my eyes, if I change some of the bad points about this novel, I can add a little more interaction with Mansui. I think it still has a promising future. Still cheers, author! ! ! Moreover, the author, you wrote too much about the male protagonist's brother, which gave me a sense of seeing my son in the novel. In short, there is no sense of immersion, do you understand? I hope the author can polish this place a little more

You tricked me into reading Chouka's excellent writing. [Smile][smile][smile]

After playing the game and getting stabbed badly, I can finally see the sweetness.

I have to say that having Liang Ye suffer from Alzheimer's disease (actually amnesia) is really imaginative. The description of everyone's emotions when Liang Ye was lost during the Chinese New Year really made me admire it. However, I felt that all the descriptions were lacking when he came back, which led to the ending being a bit hasty (without the pitfalls before Yuan Yuan). However, it is still interesting. This is the most shocking among the second creations I have read (hope there will be a follow-up) ✋😭🤚

After playing the game, I felt really comfortable. Whether it was Liang or Liang Ye, at least it gave me a good ending in my mind.

In order to understand it, I directly downloaded and played it. I can only say that it hurts, it hurts too much.

It's similar to the book "My Wife Came from a Thousand Years Ago", both very interesting.

It's pretty good, but I feel that Sui's character is not as smart as in the original work. It doesn't feel like it.

It's well written and feels very warm.

It's really beautiful. It tells the story of the work from a different perspective. Although it hasn't finished at this point in time, I can already see how beautiful its ending is. Just like the author said, writing fan fiction from a different perspective is very cool. [Cool]

Haoqianhaoqian [admiration], there is foreshadowing and foreshadowing. Guess: In the end, Suisui and Shanzhao returned to the late Ming Dynasty, but Suisui followed Shanzhao home [laughing evilly] (nonsense, 🐶save your life) This book is a slow-burner, and it is not a refreshing novel (those who like reading refreshing novels may not like this book very much). It is just a foreshadowing at the moment. The ex-girlfriend part should be the author's criminal record of committing a traditional novel, but it will be okay later on. I won't read it if I see my ex-girlfriend. I can only say that you really can't read embarrassing [laughing] I can only say that everyone likes different types. This book really poked me. Big cheers for the author! [Send heart][Send heart]

It's pretty good, not toxic at all. When I read the beginning, I suddenly thought of the innocent little He seedlings that gave birth to five children [laughing evilly]

Well, the author can. I also want full ears.

Pretty good

I want to see Master Wan Sui [crying]

I felt so uncomfortable after watching the plot, but I feel so good when I see you.

The back part makes me a little uneasy, I feel like the author has a knife waiting for us at the back. (I hope it's my imagination) Overall, it's pretty good. Come on, author! ! !

After finishing the game, I feel full of regrets. The author's writing has filled up some of my regrets. Although there are some shortcomings, I still hope that the author can write better and better.

Although I haven't played it yet, it looks good. Come on, author [Blow Kiss]