
Am I the Target of the Villain's Strategy? I Sincerely Beg to Let Go
反派攻略对象是我?已老实求放过
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- Completed
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- 375k Words
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- Ancient Romance
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- Fantasy Romance
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- Female
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- 1y ago
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I like the heroine's character, but there are some things that may be too frequent. For example, the heroine's eyes are often described as dilated, and she will look in that direction when she hears the villain's voice. When she is often confused and nervous, words like "Okay, okay... Yes, is it" will appear frequently. Well, how should I put it? I can understand that I want to portray the heroine's soft, cautious and cute character, but it seems that I can't grasp the intensity. But no matter what, I quite like the setting of this novel and the portrayal of the male and female protagonists. I support it with five-star reviews~
This heroine is really cute. It's the first time I've seen this kind of strategy to reverse mind reading. The heroine is really sober in the world. I really like this kind of heroine. I hope the heroine will always be like this. It's just that the article is too short and too new. The author is great, please get up quickly and update a few more chapters. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]
The attention to detail is pretty good, the emotional line is smooth and flowing, and the heroine's growth is very comfortable. I really love the process of the heroine's ideological transformation. In terms of character setting, the heroine's personality is realistic and has many shining points. She is careful, cautious, and has strong self-control, and she is sincere, sober, and energetic. Small flaws are not annoying. The male protagonist makes me really feel that he is a normal male protagonist. He will slowly change his emotional attitude. He has his own thoughts, instead of quickly falling in love with the female protagonist to death. He does not feel like he is being pulled. His meticulous and considerate treatment of the heroine and the emotional value he provides are very good. I felt the author's tenderness towards the characters, and the book was well written. Finally, awesome! My treasure! Come on, come on, come on! ! !
In every chapter, the heroine is confused, blinking, and dazed. Every chapter is absolutely no exaggeration. If the author wants to make the heroine cute and cute, he can change some words or description methods. Reading the same word too many times is really tiring. The heroine is not Feng Aotian, she just makes progress slowly and steadily. It starts high and goes low, a bit unfinished, but the introduction is quite attractive. The heroine's career and emotional lines are not advanced at all. In the main text, the two of them only get together in the last chapter, and the career heroine is still a noob. I just wrote a line in the extra story that the heroine is a 300-year-old Nascent Soul third-grade alchemist [laughing awkwardly]
Nice! ! ! ! (There is no female rivalry, there is no brainlessness, there is logic, the character is three-dimensional, the female protagonist has a correct outlook on life, the male protagonist is attracted first, the emotional line is clear, there is no abuse, both male and female protagonists have long mouths, and there are no brainless and annoying supporting characters) None of this is offensive, look! ! ! ! Show them all to me! ! ! ! The interaction between the male and female protagonists in this novel is natural, not industrial saccharine. The heroine is a growth-oriented heroine, and the male protagonist is Shirogiri Kuro who is gentle on the surface but doesn't care about anyone. This book is not a cool novel in the traditional sense. The heroine does not have a strong aura and is always trying to become stronger. I like the heroine's character very much. Sanguan Zheng is a bit timid but she works hard and is sober. There is a bit of a nurturing relationship between the male and female protagonists. The female protagonist hopes that she will become strong enough to compete with the male protagonist. The male protagonist helps the female protagonist and also looks forward to what the female protagonist will look like when she grows up. The supporting characters are also well done. There is no brainless villain, the plot is not boring, the emotional line is very clear, and there is no annoying plot. The whole book is very comfortable to read and makes you feel comfortable. To be honest, I can't believe this is a Tomato book or a new author. This book feels like a book from Jinjiang to me. Too normal. When this book was still being updated, I followed it every day, thinking that the author had other works that could replace it, but it turned out that the author was a newcomer. Very disappointed, I hope the author writes more. Not enough. Author, please open a new pit or add more extras, I won't let you go. I will rape you forever. I support new works as soon as they come out. You can't escape. Dear author, don't give up updating! ! ! ! I support the author greatly, and I hold a banner for the author greatly. I love the author so much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Very nice! The heroine has always been steady in her cultivation. Her character is very rational and firm. She will consider the pros and cons of things and the motives of others. She is very shy and green in interpersonal relationships, and she is particularly cute. The male protagonist's character is also okay. Although he is not a purely good person, he is not the kind who doesn't recognize his relatives, doesn't distinguish between right and wrong, and is arrogant. To his junior brothers and sisters, he is a steady and admirable role model, and to his peers, he is a senior brother who is worthy of respect. He has a clear understanding of himself, is independent, and will not be shackled by the system. Rather than saying that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is based on one party conquering the other through the system, the system is actually more like an opportunity for the male and female protagonists to get to know each other. They get along very harmoniously and naturally, and their development is natural and very comfortable to watch. Thank you so much for writing and supporting you [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Wow, wow, wow, it's the first time I've met a male protagonist and he has a systematic strategy to find out how good-looking the female protagonist is.
It's super beautiful. This kind of long-lasting love is really charming! ! The halo of the heroine is getting bigger and bigger... And she never faces her own heart. She is always submissive and hesitant. When facing the male protagonist, she always wants to escape... I feel tired when I look at it...
First, help some people avoid lightning! Those who love to watch women being tortured and love to see the heroine get hurt and suffer can go away! There are also those who have watched it for ten thousand years too many times, or who like to watch a few events and fall in love with the relationship between the male and female protagonists, they can leave. Because the emotional lines in this article are very delicate and the pace is slow. If you want to see the tension in the relationship and see a more realistic emotional line, please come in! ! ! ! ! ! If you have a daughter, please come in! The progress of the heroine, both in terms of strength and psychological strength, can be seen! Although the story is about Long Aotian's background, there is no male gaze angle! Very comfortable! If you want to see something more exciting, go ahead. There is nothing below the neck. Okay, now that you've seen this, go read this novel and read it without saying a word! After watching this, Baby Momo has another three-dimensional godmother, hahahahahaha
The changes in characters and details in this book are really amazing! Although the heroine is very timid, she also has her own ideas. The male protagonist's emotional changes towards the heroine are really delicate. She loves her so much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] The heroine has always been timid... Which makes me a little bit unable to stand it, but the hero really poked me, and I was a little reluctant to let go. I hope the author will continue to work hard [send heartfelt]
Who knows this setting? The female protagonist has a very good personality, and the male protagonist is a very normal villain, which is quite reasonable. It belongs to the story of a female protagonist who slowly grows up. The male protagonist has a lot of nurturing pleasure. In the end, I wish Fu Ye to chase his wife in the crematorium! [Adoration]
Nice! ! I have never been able to accept mind-reading plots before, because those mental activities were too frequent, too exaggerated, and embarrassing. But he grasped this and that just right, without too much mental activity. He appeared at the right time and his tone was normal, which was very comfortable. The male and female protagonists are in love for a long time. They really like this little bit of development, care more and more, and gradually become life partners [send heart] [send heart] They accept each other as their partners as they gradually understand each other, which is a kind of attention in itself. I know all your strengths and weaknesses, I know your true face behind the mask, but I still choose to fall in love with you. The male protagonist is a very decisive type, and will not suffer from internal friction. When he doesn't like her, he will never attack her for other reasons. He will only get close to the female protagonist when he really starts to care about her, and he will not have other emotions because he is good to her but his favorability has dropped. He didn't struggle too much, and when he noticed the changes in himself, he went with it. In the end, the more I understand, the more I fall. The heroine is a cutie. From my perspective, she is a very sweet girl. She treats every friend sincerely. Even if she knows that the male protagonist may be approaching her deliberately because of the strategy, she never denies that the male protagonist treats her well. She always remembers it in her heart. At the same time, she is a cautious person. She treats her friends wholeheartedly and can also guard her heart. She doesn't deny the other person's kindness to her, but she won't develop feelings for the other person because of it. She protects herself very well. The heroine is cautious and attentive in all aspects. It should be very comfortable to get along with such a person.
I have read Chapter 48 so far. The plot is pretty good, and the characters are also pretty good. I am also interested in reading the introduction. The plot is not that cliche, and the atmosphere around the protagonist is also quite good. But! I really do! I saw the heroine at every turn: confused, confused again, and continued to be confused. I feel uncomfortable all over! Or just stunned at every turn. 🥲And I can understand if the heroine is a little timid or not confident. Sometimes she is quite cute, but can you please stop making her stutter? For example: OK, OK. It's normal for something like this to happen once in a while, because you're nervous or something, but the frequency is too high. It's mainly due to some problems in the description. At present, I feel that the heroine is cute, and the sect also gives people a good feeling. There is no intrigue, and there is no clichéd language attack or anything like that. I also really like the character design of the heroine's friend, it just makes people feel more comfortable. Except for some problems with the description, it feels good so far. It just feels more real, not exaggerated.
The writing method is quite new, because no one writes like this, so it seems to be a routine without realizing it. It has a new taste, so it was particularly attractive to me when I first read it. As the length of the story unfolds, some shortcomings are exposed, and there are a lot of meaningless words, but the flaws are not concealed. Overall, it is a good story. The most obvious point is that the frequency of the word "feeling" appears too high. Sometimes it can appear 2-3 times in a row in a paragraph describing psychology, which makes people who listen to the book very surprised. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that it is different from the previous ones. The text is not as sophisticated as the previous ones. It seems that the quality has dropped because of the update. I feel it is a pity, but it is understandable that it will be more difficult [working on the manuscript].
The early stage is really amazing, I really like it, the emotional line is very delicate, but when I saw that the progress of the heroine's foundation building has passed 50%, I guessed that the ending is not very good. Sure enough, there are really unfinished holes [crying] Logically speaking, the heroine is unwilling She has a ungrateful temperament and refused the gift because she didn't want to get too involved with the male protagonist. After the male protagonist drags him out and her favorability level for him is full, she will definitely tell her secrets of time travel and mind reading, but in the end the extra chapter No, it was said earlier that the heroine is a genius for elixirs, but she shined in one competition, and then never showed it again. There is no such thing as an elixir (maybe I was browsing a little too fast and missed it?). There are also a lot of descriptions of King Kong Barbie. But after clearing the memory, I just fast forwarded to the end. I feel like there should be a plot where King Kong Barbie goes back and tells the boss and then fights again. As a result, she goes directly to jail. It's so uncomfortable. It would be nice if it could end smoothly╯╰
The water flows slowly, but at the same time there is no lack of opportunities and dangers in growth. The female protagonist is exceptionally sober, meticulous and cautious, while the male protagonist is polite and courteous in his dealings with others. There is also a system, its tone is very interesting, I am still looking forward to liking the addition and subtraction of favorability, it is very dramatic. It's really fun to have the male protagonist get jealous unintentionally, and the female protagonist is so cute and positive, and she holds the banner for my cp! Looking forward to the following plot, I think there may be scenes of rival swordsmen, and I started to boldly speculate whether there will be undercover agents in the sect (the main focus is to suspect everyone except the heroine). In short, the author must update more (please update, I don't see enough)!
The overall writing style is pretty good, and the male and female protagonists are also pretty good, but there are a few issues: First, after reading many previous chapters, the heroine is often confused or stunned. I read the reviews and called the heroine "Confused Sister". Indeed, this word appears too frequently. I know that the author may want to write about the natural stupidity of the heroine, but being confused all the time really affects the viewing experience. Secondly, the relationship between the second male lead Wen Renge and the female protagonist feels a bit abrupt. It's not that there is anything wrong with him liking the female protagonist. In the early stage, the second male lead is a person who wants Chaochao to like cats. After reading the whole story, I feel that he and the heroine are getting along like good friends. There is no opportunity for the heroine to fall in love, and there is no such a natural feeling (I initially thought Chaochao would turn into a human form and be with him hhhhh) Third, the transition in the following chapters is a bit too fast, which feels very rushed. For example, after the male protagonist reveals his identity, the pace feels obviously faster. During this period of dealing with Brahma City, the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists can be more detailed, and there are still some holes that have not been filled in. Overall, it's okay, but it's not a sweet article.
. . . It can be seen from this book that the author is very thoughtful and writes with very subtle emotions. But to readers, this back and forth seems a bit long-winded. The main line of the whole book is not very clear. The heroine is in the environment, being pushed around, and has always been relatively sober. The character is a very ordinary girl (in my personal opinion). The text gives her the characteristics of being strong, observant, good-natured, and talented in refining medicine, which can be regarded as the golden finger of the heroine. In the end, both the love line and the career line seemed to be a bit, well, how to describe it, tepid. The whole book gave me the same feeling. The second male lead's feelings are actually a bit abrupt, maybe people's feelings are just incomprehensible. . ? But it always feels like a bit of a broken character. (I haven't read the extra, and I really can't stand it anymore.) Overall, the book is actually okay. There are no surprises. It was a bit interesting in the early stage, but it felt a bit messy in the later stage. It said that it didn't care about feelings, and it kept writing about the tepid and indifferent relationship between two people. The heroine does not have the strength to live a very careful and sober life. This is true, but the world view is still a bit small after all. Well, in terms of the emotional line, I personally feel that the male and female protagonists have no cp feeling and it doesn't feel right. . . [Face covering] I've always wanted to do it, but I just can't do it. . How should I put it, the images of other people are not three-dimensional enough, and the characters feel a little dry. Except for a few people, the others are a bit unmemorable. . . Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with the article. The above is just my personal opinion. The author is a very delicate person. Come on!
The writing style is very good for Tomato. This should be the first novel that I posted a review while I was still catching up on updates🥲I am afraid that the author will not update [face covering] I personally prefer novels with a slightly faster emotional line. This novel has a slower emotional line, but the author's writing style is quite good. He handles the details and the psychology of the characters very well, making people feel more immersed, so even if the pace is slow, I will not be too impatient during the reading process. The female protagonist is a growth type, and she had a bit of low self-esteem at first, not being a spoiled wife. She was always wary of the male protagonist in the early stages and avoided him. It is the male protagonist who conquers himself during the conquering process and then starts chasing the female protagonist.
How can I put it? It's one of Tomato's better-looking novels. The subject matter is quite interesting, but there are some shortcomings. The male protagonist's character is a bit unclear. I feel that the author wants to show that the male protagonist is a gentle senior brother in front of outsiders, but he is more real and cold in front of the female protagonist. However, the details are not handled well, and this feeling is not expressed. It will only confuse people and make them a bit confused about the male protagonist's character. In fact, the author's writing style is still relatively green. I don't mean to criticize the author by saying this, I just hope that the author can get better and better and become an excellent writer [Like][Like][Like]
It is indeed quite good-looking. I will make an objective comment when I see it here. This book is definitely good for female protagonists and those who like to read sweet stories. However, you may think that the heroine's growth is a bit slow, but it's actually not bad. After all, for a normal but timid little girl from modern times, it is a good book to read. It is indeed impossible to have a big heroine, but the heroine's characterization is also very full, not the kind of timidity that makes people hateful, and the heroine is growing on her own, and the hero has indeed taught the other party a lot on the journey of the heroine's growth. During the growth process, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also sweet, not as sweet as industrial saccharine, but also very clear. But it may not be so satisfying for the men's party. After all, the man is very good to the heroine, but the heroine has never had a good impression of the man. If it were me, I would just give up. From what I see now, the men here sometimes become humble. But there is a saying that is right. It is unlucky for a man to feel sorry for him. It is only natural for the heroine to do this. After all, the heroine has the ability to read minds and knows that the hero is approaching her with a purpose, and they are not the same people. , The heroine still cares about a lot of things. Although the heroine looks soft and waxy, she is very clear-headed and sensible. It's not that she doesn't like men, but she can't like them. This is good, and the contrast is quite big. On the contrary, the male protagonist is more love-minded and will worry about gains and losses because of the heroine's attitude, but it can't be blamed on the man. Different views and opinions will be different in different growing environments. There are still more than 40 chapters left before the ending. I really want to see how the male and female protagonists get together in the end. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that I finished reading it. The man is very good, really good, the kind with a long mouth. In order to make the heroine trust her, he told the heroine everything, and later he took the initiative to confess to the boss that he was a traitor, just so that the heroine can trust him. He is good-looking and sweet, but it is too short and the ending is too hasty, but overall it is okay [Like]
It's a very cute and sweet short story. The emotional process of the male and female protagonists is very delicately written, and the conversation is sweet and sweet. It's very cute, and the rhythm is really well controlled. The heroine is also very alive, and the thoughts she presents are very different from other novels of the same type. All the characters will make people like them very much. Because I read it in one sitting, I felt that the ending was rushed at first, but after reading it carefully, I found that maybe this is the most suitable way to deal with it. The daunting details of the fight against Brahma City have been hidden, and every detail of the male and female protagonists' companionship has been fully described in the previous chapters, making it just right sweet and not greasy. I have really read a lot of very, very good books in this genre! ! !
Sigh... I didn't watch enough. I thought it would be forced after reading the introduction, but in fact the male protagonist just has ideas, not very sexy, but some of the plots are also very touching! Ahem, you'll have to see it yourself for details, I won't spoil it haha [shy] It's very sweet and I'll jump right in! It's a long-flowing type, with some group portraits. It's very beautiful. It feels like one of those rare things that I can remember for a long time without a knife. It's really great! Everyone came to see oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh, the male and female protagonists are so pure in love, but I still feel like I'm always twisting and screaming under the quilt 😵 I'm really in love! What a great article And this Tongzi is also very cute, hahaha, and he always makes a weird smile. Every time I watch it, I feel inexplicably happy. He is also a world-saving Tongzi. He saves the world and allows the female protagonist to redeem the male protagonist. What a good Tongzi (although it is for performance, hehe) I always highly recommend reading it, it's a very sweet short story~ It doesn't take a lot of time to read it, and you can re-read it a few times without any trouble. My heart melts when I read it... My heroine, the female goose, is so cute hehehehehe... (Makes a weird laugh) The author will definitely write more, and I am looking forward to the new book (poor face)
The rhythm is tight. The heroine has always been very clear-headed, aware of what she needs, and will not indulge herself just because she likes the villain (in fact, the heroine didn't know that she liked the villain at the beginning). The heroine is a very motivated baby who will practice very hard. She is a well-behaved, a bit slow baby. The villain is actually a bit slow. The villain's image is very three-dimensional, powerful, decisive in killing, and handsome. When getting along with the heroine, he will give priority to the heroine. Even when he knows his own feelings, he will give up the villain camp without any hesitation and give priority to the heroine's side. The buried holes will be filled. The writing style of this reverse strategy is novel and different from other immortality writings. The emotional descriptions are delicate, and each plot has its own use. The article is not long, so go read it.
It's a very good book. It's a very special book. The heroine is very sober and has a very complete growth line. She doesn't have any attachments and is not a spoiled wife. Moreover, there is no competition between women and there is no humiliation or abuse of women in the book. If you love women, you can read it with confidence. When I first started watching it, I thought why the male lead the guide and the female lead is still the one doing the dog-licking, but in fact the female lead's actions are very reasonable and logical. The heroine's character design can be said to be the best among all the novels I have read. Perhaps it is because the heroine's character and outlook are very similar to mine, so I have a filter for the heroine. The heroine has her own ideas and principles, and I would like to emphasize again that she is super sober! ! ! This is what girls should look like! ! ! Three outlooks are correct, kindness is not holy, independent, strong, smart, steady, cautious and careful, and there are countless beautiful words. The heroine is also cute and cute like a girl, and she can act coquettishly. Almost all the beautiful female qualities I can think of can be found in her. The three views established in the book are also very correct. There is no situation where women are inferior to men, and the gender ratio is generally balanced. The character of the male protagonist is good, neither good nor bad, not greasy (this is very important!!!), And respectful of the female protagonist. In other words, the atmosphere of the whole book is very good, there are no disgusting plots, and it makes people feel comfortable. There are always people in the comments saying that they feel sorry for the male protagonist, the emotional line is too slow, the ending is too hasty, etc. In fact, this book is perfect for me. I don't think the male protagonist is abusive, and you may not feel sorry for the female protagonist in those books with the same plot that abuses women🙄. The emotional line is very normal, and this is even the speed that a normal emotional line should be. If you eat too much fast food love, you can't taste the fine chaff, right? What's more, the heroine is an avoidant type, which means that the hero needs to constantly release his love, tell the heroine his love for her, and constantly acknowledge, say, and do so that the heroine can feel the love of the hero and it is real. And the ending is just right to stay at this place. The love between the male and female protagonists takes many, many years or even a lifetime to make the female protagonist believe that the male protagonist's love is firm. They still love each other in places that we can't see, and slowly love each other more every day. We only need to see the process of their falling in love and leave the rest to them. Except for the lack of clear explanation of the follow-up of some supporting characters and some small holes that have not been filled in (the author is urged to publish the extras soon [currently in preparation]), this book is already perfect. This book has already won the top one of my favorite books of the year, and the heroine has also become my favorite heroine of the year [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Others are welcome to discuss it together, and reject love-boy solutions and rotten cockroaches.
I came back and finished reading it after seven months. It's a good read. It's a sweet story, but the emotional line is not that fast and it's a long-running one. But I quite like this feeling! ! This book gave me a light feeling (?). Although it is a bit strange, maybe it is because the emotional line is relatively slow, anyway, it is quite comfortable to read lightly! It's great to watch the female protagonist grow up step by step. The male protagonist is also very good to the female protagonist. After confessing his love, he felt sweet and reassured [Love] Anyway, I wish the young couple 99 Another cute point is that when the male and female protagonists' last names are pronounced together, they become the male protagonist's name, and when their first names are pronounced together, they become the female protagonist's name! But for me, it's a pity that there are no other people's love lines. I actually really want to see Xi Yashi's OVO.
I have read many novels in a row and abandoned many novels. I can give this one a perfect score. The amount of plot is just right, the male and female protagonists are very stable, and they remain stable until the finale. The female protagonist is afraid of death and is weak and assists Danxiu. This is the story of a supporting character in Long Aotian's novel. This is a normal Long Aotian novel, and it is also a story about a non-book traveler who mutates into a luck-sucking beast. I often feel speechless when reading the setting of the novel. Although the setting of the vicious original owner is used to slap the new protagonist in the face, as the original book owner, how can anyone read a novel written by such a protagonist? Very out of place. But the design of this book is very good. The author only weakened the appearance of the male protagonist in the original book. In fact, the male protagonist still shines in this world, but what we see is his own story from the perspective of others.
I stayed up late to finish reading it. In fact, there are many shortcomings, such as the frequent use of some words, the lack of language when describing, the grasp and promotion of the progress of the entire plot, etc. However, this seems to be the author's first book, and although there are many shortcomings, there are also many advantages. I like the heroine's character very much, and the author's three views are also very positive. (This is also reflected in the characterization of the characters) It outputs the right things. There are no disgusting females and villains, so five stars encourage it. I hope the author will continue to grow and produce more and better works.
It's good to read, but I feel that the author has updated too little recently. The content is relatively new and the pace is not that fast. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is clearly explained. Unlike other novels, I fell in love with it out of nowhere. I don't even know what to say. When I was reading, I was updating 4,000 words a day, then 2,000 words, 1,000 words, and now I am even updating 1,000 words every few days. Including that I stopped updating for a long time. The author said that when the situation is better, I will update two or three chapters a day, and I will make up for the previously interrupted updates as soon as possible. It turns out that she was smart and divided the content of one chapter into two chapters. One chapter only has 1,000 words. Moreover, she did not make up for the previously interrupted updates at all. I wonder if the author realized that no one seemed to notice her cleverness at all. Later, she only updated one chapter a day, and it was only 1,000 words, and the plot became more and more watery. Now I am writing a chapter in a few days, and I don't know if she doesn't want to write anymore. What attracted me at first was the delicate relationship between the male and female protagonists. I think the inner description of the heroine is very delicate and novel, but I feel that the inner description of the heroine later seems to be just for the sake of word count. I am not saying that it is really like when I was writing essays in elementary school, I wrote things to fool the teacher.
1 A beautiful fairy tale. After work, I watched a story about sweet love, normal outlook on life, and a story about two lonely people redeeming each other. Full marks. 2 At the same time, I feel that this novel should end in Chapter 166. The feeling of self-destruction and perishing together is the ending. What follows is the beautiful fantasy of the moment of self-destruction. There is no description of how to defeat the big boss, no description of the biggest obstacle after the revelation - the doubts of the world, and no formal farewell to others. It seems that everything came to an abrupt end in Chapter 166. Fortunately, the extra episode made up for it, it's so late, good night, Amo, Shishi, see you again by fate [Love]