Transform into a Girl at the Beginning and Be Subdued into a Pokémon!

Faster and faster, it should be the Orange article (probably). Although the thoughts and plot related to the goal included by Xiaozhi are a bit confusing and poisonous, the follow-up should be discontinued. After all, three opportunities to play have been proposed, and they have been used twice, and the trainer's story line has developed to a large scale. I have a premonition that the third chance may be a big life (I don't know if it is poisonous or not. The previous plot of the goal should be regarded as a poisonous preparation). The system itself has a very obvious purpose, which is quite interesting, and cannot be regarded as a purely refreshing article. I will change my evaluation later if I get poisoned. I've seen the ending, uh..., Overall it's good, but it can be inadvertently mixed with some poison. In addition to the things I commented on before, the follow-up is also a little bit poisonous for me personally. For example, another protagonist in another desperate time and space or the future is with Xiao Gang in this time and space. I can't accept it and understand it a bit (after all, you were already with your own Pokémon before, and you killed them yourself, and you fell into trouble with Xiao Gang after just a short period of time together), but I can't comment, and the proportion is not big, so I think it's okay [face covering]

The writing is very good. The plot is not a complete copy. The mimetic transformation in the book is really interesting. The author writes it very well. As for the poison mentioned in the comment area, did you realize that it was conquered by Xiaozhi? It's misleading. The protagonist only got into the ball to deal with the interrogation, and only agreed to take action three times. Even Xiaozhi basically gave up the idea later and just kept talking about it. For many people, the protagonist is both a human and sometimes a special Pokémon. You will know after reading it, where is the poisonous point? But I still have to thank you for the rating, otherwise I feel like the book would have been banned. I love it so much and would be very reluctant to part with it.

Although the setting of mimicry is too low on the door bar and can be used by anyone, resulting in a confusing early impression. I will complete the setting later, and it looks okay when the protagonist faces a high-pressure environment. I can only say that if you accept the previous setting, it is still a Pokémon fanfic worth reading.

It's very interesting after watching it, let me talk about the advantages first. The author's writing style is delicate and his worldview is complete. The character of the protagonist is well developed, weak and accepting. The emotional line is very attractive, but the combat aspect is a bit unsatisfactory. Then let's talk about the poison. The first is that most readers cannot accept the system's punishment of failure and death. But in fact, this is nothing. The author explained it later, so you can rest assured about this. The second point is the mimicry setting. In the article, the author repeatedly emphasizes that mimicry is very rare, but most readers do not listen to what the author says, but read what the author writes. The more the author repeats it, the higher the readers' expectations are. Most readers think this setting is similar to mega evolution. But in fact, not everyone in it can use it, whether it is villains, decent elites, or monsters. Later, there was also an autonomous mimicry. How can I put this? It's like the protagonist left the Novice Village with a treasure in his possession, and found that almost everyone outside had one. Although it is worse than the protagonist, its effect is better than that of the protagonist. And the last point is that this book is not like everyday writing. The protagonists in 2/3 of the plot are saving other worlds. Most of the plots are exciting battles. The plot has ups and downs and is very exciting. It feels like watching a big movie.

Be creative and creative, be sentimental and sentimental. The personification of Pokémon is a great setting. The "contamination" of various areas also has a sense of crisis, and saving the areas also has the style of an epic story of a brave man. The relationship with Xiaozhi's protagonist group is also very good. It can be regarded as a gold mine for me. Summary: Recommended reading index 5 stars⭐.

It's a very nice book, with a Cthulhu-oriented world view built on Pokémon. The main plot is a relaxing battle with Ash, and the side plot is the game between the system and the pollution of the universe. It's not a traditional cool system. The story is very interesting and has almost no logical loopholes. It's worth a read. The only shortcoming is the early system punishment. It is recommended that the author directly say at the end of the first chapter that it is because the previous hosts were too inappropriate, blablabla, that they had to use such severe punishments. This explanation is still too dissuasive.

It looks good. I hope Ms. Broom 🧹 can be more honest and strengthen the protagonist. To be honest, it gets better as you go to the back. Some people say that the protagonist being conquered by Xiaozhi is a poisonous point, but I only saw the bond between them. There are also system changes that make me even more happy. Come on, come on, come on

I like it so much. The character of the protagonist is gentle and perseverant, very resilient. When he is desperate, he will try to cheer himself up because of the little things. But time is too late, and before he has time to grow up, things come one by one. It is a bit difficult, but I just like this type of protagonist [Love] [Love]

It has a very distinctive setting: it combines mimicry with the plot of Muji Chapter (daily), and intersperses characters with swords, shields, gems, etc. As another clue (it can be regarded as the main line of the system). In short, new wine in old bottles is worth a taste.

It's really good. I had it on my bookshelf for a long time and just started reading it recently. I couldn't help but read it all at once. Overall, the chapters are very well written. Come on, author, write better chapters. [Sending my heart to you]

Lily, the author is very good (referring to emotional description), the writing style is interesting, and the interaction with the protagonist group is very loving. The world view and background are relatively depressing, and other times it is very relaxing. The battles are sometimes nonsensical and sometimes very passionate. Very suitable for readers who like Pokémon & Lily elements. After reading the hot-blooded battle in the latest chapter, the explosion under the depressing world view is even more exciting. I highly recommend it again. As long as you like Pokémon and don't dislike Lily, it's worth watching! The original protagonist group embarks on a brand new adventure under the interesting soul of the author, which is passionate, funny, touching, and sad. It is like watching a Pokémon movie that spans all regions.

What a big idea, splitting up areas, and saving pollution. It was warm and relaxing in the early stage, but then took a turn for the worse. From the moment I saved the turtle, I was pulled into a point of no return. It was a bit dark and depressing, but there was hope, passion, and bonds.

Lily's harem, the reincarnation of Pokémon as a beautiful girl, and the classic adventure RPG to Arbitrary Eternity, as well as the happy ending. Except for the reincarnation of characters at the beginning, all the characters that should be recycled are basically recycled. Everything mentioned has appeared, but it is possible that the male will be reincarnated into a female Pokémon and then have Lily. Not everyone is willing to eat this kind of content. In addition, the image of the system at the beginning is not very good, and sometimes I like to use the technique of promoting desire first to suppress the character. This should be the reason why many people have a poor impression in the early and mid-term and do not score high. However, this book is finished, so I won't have the same poor experience in this aspect as catching up on updates. From many details, it can be seen that several well-known works left a deep impression on the author and were referred to in this book. But generally speaking, the content of the book is very subjective. It does not appear to be a movie that is too dependent on the original work, nor does it have any mechanical deities that go beyond the settings of the book (at least the details can be explained through continuous reading) In the middle of the book, I started to press the accelerator button and selected a few suitable versions to talk about. Although it may be good for the structural arrangement of the book itself, it may be a bit unfriendly to readers who are interested in the features of the versions that are not mentioned. Now that it is finished, this sense of lack will not have too much impact.

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've seen a Pokémon article with an anthropomorphic setting on Tomato.

Very excellent book! The author's development of the worldview and the foreshadowing of the bright and dark lines in the early stage are very perfect. The full development after chapter 500 fills in many of the previous foreshadowings. It is a very excellent novel and is highly recommended.

A very good work. The system's punishment in the early stage was quickly reversed after the plot unfolded. The most admirable thing is the sincere, delicate and interesting interaction between the characters. As well as a kind and tenacious protagonist, the reasons for being liked are very real and can withstand scrutiny. After reading more than a dozen novels, there are few works that attract me so much. Many stories are too bland and not emotionally invested, so it is difficult to touch people, but here I can feel joy, sadness, pain, and anger. A very wonderful, heartfelt story. I'm happy for the story you wrote And thanks for the hospitality

It's okay. How can I put it this way? When I first saw the mimicry, I didn't really want to see it. After all, the fact that the pet is in human form feels... Awkward. But there were few books with high marks, so I read it. The result was quite funny, interesting, and the writing was good, so I couldn't help but stay. Right from the beginning of the content, it seems a bit heavy. It just feels like the Ke series doesn't have the same atmosphere as before (it's just that the feeling of despair is too long. When I usually read other books, the more than 20 chapters of despair are almost over) So every time I read halfway through, I want to give up, but the writing is really good, and I can't help but quickly turn over a few pages to continue reading. It feels like other books start heavy, get happy in the middle, and intersperse a few heavy events in the middle, but this one gave me a happy beginning, and in the middle and later stages, it carried the heavy load without forgetting to bring a little happiness...

This may be one of the longest books I have ever seen. It is nearly 8,000 pages and is still being updated. The author's world view and writing style are very good. There are also some jokes in it, and there are also a lot of pitfalls. Let's see how the future author succeeds.

Believe me, this is a different kind of romantic story. The protagonist just follows the protagonist's group on adventures, interacts with the mimicked Pokémon, and even brings the system into the harem. There is absolutely no mission like saving the world. It's all sugar and no swords.

It's a very interesting book. Unfortunately, because of the compulsion of the protagonist in the early stage, many people stopped reading it. However, the subsequent text is really exciting and this book should not be buried.

I've been watching Pokémon intermittently, and what can I say, this adaptation is really good! It's awesome, and the world view is grand, but I don't know how the author will come up with the big picture he drew later. But I have saved one world region so far, and the writing is very good, at least I think it is quite attractive to me. Anthropomorphic Pokémon, the protagonist's harem and even the system are included in it [face covering] [laughing evilly] Why do I think this is a Lily novel? I don't know if I will get married without reading it later. Anyway, it's good, keep going [love]

It's quite interesting. I really like this style with a bit of humor and a bit of despair. The contrast between the early stage and the later stage is good. I personally like the later stage better. However, without the foreshadowing in the early stage, the later stage will not be so interesting and will become dry. I hope the author can keep writing.

Let me see how long I have been watching and now I have caught up with the latest chapter. The climax of the world view unfolds after more than 100 chapters. Recommended reading to that point may change your mind. Anyway, I highly recommend it [Like] Oh, yes, there is a starting poison point system with mandatory punishment. There will be explanations and spoilers later. In short, this system was almost broken before the heroine appeared [face covering] Now, cough cough cough, it's hard to say what feelings I have for the heroine. In other words, I will collect all the heroine's privacy and what I will use it for. I don't know. [Laughing evilly]

Plot competition high (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ Moreover, the author's writing style is also very good, which makes people feel deeply involved. The character's personality is also very distinct, and I don't feel like you can't figure out the protagonist's personality after reading more than 100 chapters. I thought the system was the kind where the protagonist would be doomed if he could not complete the task, but there were unexpected changes later (no spoilers here) All in all it is worth watching ('▿')

There are thousands of emotions hidden in the words, It is difficult to clear up the clues. There is leisurely feeling in the poem, See all the flowers in this life. Unconsciously, the years have passed by thousands of miles, Understand why there is so much fighting in life. ✍👍: D

The writing is solid, and the author has a deep understanding of the Pokémon worldview (in my opinion). However, I don't know why the book is not popular, so the author updates it every two or three days. Fortunately, the author promised to finish the book, so you don't have to worry about the eunuch problem. The book has a lot of words, so you can read it in one sitting.

It's great. It can fully express the settings of each character while greatly adding settings based on the original plot. The climax is also very passionate. I haven't seen such a strong Baowen in a long time.

The setting is novel and the story is interesting. It feels a bit like watching Re0. There is a growth line for the protagonist, but it also has a relatively depressing chapter. But after reading it, I felt really good. The plot is coherent and compact without any sense of fragmentation. However, I feel that the plot advances quite quickly. It makes me feel that I can still write part of the plot but just skipped it. Maybe it is the sacrifice made by the author for more original content, which is understandable. Finally, there are very few novels with protagonists' growth lines. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

This is my first time reading about Pokémon, and I have only played FireRed, but the author's setting, writing style, and character creation all attracted me deeply. I like it so much! (It's a bit depressing in the middle, but the ending made me mouth-watering!) The author must not stop writing! I will always respect and love you! (＞ｙ＜) (＞ｙ＜)

Super pretty! Can you write about the wedding between Koru and Miss Broom after the ending? I'd like to see it [laughs]