The Machine Girl Competes, My Machine Girl Hurts the Supermodel Big C a Hundred Thousand Times

Another masterpiece from Ji Niang. Before commenting, I saw someone comparing it with another book whose main character is Su Nian Xingchen. Tell me what you think. Let's talk about this book first. It's a cool book. There is no doubt that it seems very relaxing. It basically requires no brain work. The author also writes it very well. If it is written in this style, I don't think the rating will be low. Let's talk about another local girl. I've actually been chasing her for a long time, and I started chasing her when I didn't have any ratings. How should I put it? The author's plot is more of a daily style, and it doesn't have as many exciting points as Shuangwen. In addition, the story needs to be supplemented by a watery plot. I have been writing about the Panlong Mountain Circuit for several months and it is still exciting. The protagonist and the group of omnics are also written in a dull way. There is a sense of contradiction between wanting to awaken the omnics, but it doesn't matter if they don't awaken, and then they are still training. I am also confused when I read it. I was still very optimistic about that book before, but now it is so bad. I estimate that I have to wait for the author for a month before I can see Panlong Mountain. It may take about half a month before the Omnic Master is awakened or the subsequent plot, so I can only wait for it first. Needless to say, I am still very optimistic about this book. But that is to say, there is something wrong with the evaluation system of this mecha. The ability of 100 points still feels a bit weak. After all, it is a mecha with 100 points for all attributes. I think the author's writing is not that expressive. Then we have to look at the description of the divine machine. The main thing is, we are already fighting a war in the universe, and the combat power of the planet is a bit stretched. Although there are no requirements like the kind of Tianyuan breakthrough, there are all kinds of big ones at every turn. I can only say that hanging or opening is conservative. In fact, I have also read novels with many abilities. Basically, the author forgot all the abilities in the end. In fact, I quite suggest that the author sew some original things of his own, which can be strong or weak, but the fun ability is also quite interesting, right? [Laughs evilly] I think of a plot in the dungeon, the network connection is interrupted, and it should be quite interesting to play Kunkun to make him sometimes inactive. [Sinister smile]

Okay, and it can be seen that it was borrowed from the book about girl racing. But it would have been better if it didn't write about a single girl like that book.

Why does it feel like it has the same outline as Era of Machine Girls?

. I think this kind of two-dimensional youth drama is quite interesting. It seems to be more relaxed and less tiring than those books that are about revenge and chaotic relationships. . It's very simple. The male protagonist wants to grow up, and there is a girl. The two of them grow up with each other. . However, I am a little worried about whether the skill of Ragnarok will be used. After all, some authors feel that if it is not used, there will be no good plot.

Good luck, yes, yes

It's okay, but the author seems to be playing a single-player game

Gkd finished it in one night

Well written. I hope the author can stick to it. It must be too difficult to find good books on Tomato.

No, I can't help you learn from it, but can you learn from the update speed next door?

Does it look good? Love it. Love it.

It feels more similar to another mecha girl who plays in the arena, but she still prefers the mecha combat type. As for the plot, I hope it can be different from the racing one.