[Fictional prehistoric powers] [Unorthodox prehistoric powers]
Hello everyone, my name is Lin Bian, the disaster of disaster
Si SnakeGuardian Saint
It is not convenient to reveal my age, but my gender is male and I like female.
There's nothing to show for it, so let's kill a god of disaster for everyone's fun!
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God of Disaster No. 1: If you're bored, just go play in the mud. Don't kill me! ?
God of Disaster No. 2: No, buddy, you don't have to, you've been chasing me for three worlds.
I don't like men!
God of Disaster No. 3: I admit that your sword is very fast, but can you please stop cutting at vital points all the time!
Calamity God No. 4:666666..
Disaster God No. 5: The one above is simply the disgrace of the Disaster God!
Lin Bian: Just practice more! "
Reader comments
It's okay and eye-catching, but the paragraphs are too long. It would be better to break them into more paragraphs. The number of words in each chapter is a bit too much
It's okay and eye-catching, but the paragraphs are too long. It would be better to break them into more paragraphs. The number of words in each chapter is a bit too much
Not bad. The writing is okay.