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Dear author, you must not go astray. There is a place for you in Haitang Waste Literature Flower Market, big time. This book really should be published in Begonia or something like that. I want to see the detailed process [smile][smile][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Very good. Maybe it's because this track is too niche and I haven't found many books. This one is the best.

Very nice. I have always wanted to find this type of book and was about to give up. This book gave me a glimmer of hope. I hope the author will not give up.

It's good to read. I've read several books about Mother of Insects. This is one of the few books that I want to read again [shy], but where does the author plan to write [what], can you tell me [thinking]

Ah ah ah, it's really beautiful and the writing is good. There are really very few articles of this type. Come on, author! [Send heart][Send heart]

To be honest, one of the problems in the early stage is that the plot goes by too fast. Like reading the outline, the psychology and personality of the protagonist are not well reflected, and the list of surrounding characters does not allow readers to remember them well in the first place. The memory points are weak, and there are too few details in the overall portrayal of the characters. They can only rely on language or If you are looking through the progress to identify the characters, you can appropriately use some pronouns when describing the characters. Symbols that have their characteristics can also facilitate memory. If the plot is fast, the details may not be well described. Not only the details of the scene, but also some details of the character's psychological demeanor can be described, but the length should not be too large. Overall, that's it, but looking at it now, it's actually very good to write it like this (the general environment in foreign persimmons now is that there are more novice writers) Keep up the good work [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] (PS: When describing characters, you can write from both the outside world and your own psychology, which will increase the sense of hierarchy (?) In addition, the introduction can also be appropriately enriched to attract readers.

Damn, I think Haitang can bring out your literary talents better.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It was so good-looking. In the later stages, when the protagonist got along with the male insect, I blushed so much that I couldn't sleep! Ahhhhhhhh!

Beautiful, very beautiful😍

It's what I like to watch [laughing evilly]

I like it, I like it very much [shy][shy]

I like it so much😍Come on! [Blowing kiss]

Good looking, more updates, more updates, more updates, more updates, more updates, more updates, more updates

It's so beautiful, it's so eye-catching! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Not enough. The author will update it soon [Shy][Shy]

Don't be misled by the avatar. This book is really great. I really like it. I haven't seen a book that I like so much in a long time. I really love it.

It's so beautiful, cheers for the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Awesome. Love watching it.

It's super beautiful. Big, your writing is really good. Come on [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

One look at the subject matter and the plot, it's a masterpiece!

What a great writing style, what a fragrant text

This book shouldn't be here.

It's beautiful and very novel!!!

Dad, I was the first one to disagree with you when you withdrew from Haitang City.

Author, where have you been? [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

That's it. Give me a chase.

It's super pretty, but it's too short and not enough to look at. [Shocked][Shocked][Shocked] Please update more🧎🏻‍♂️.

Big! Immortal product Come on, very good [like] Looking forward to the follow-up ? Sir, [I'm about to cry]

[Shy] It's really, really, really a fairy, it's really good-looking [Admiration]

It looks good, it looks good, I like it, I like it, I like it, the author, please give it a try